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  1. jaysalmn

    Prologue

    Great start! Right to the drama! Feel so sorry for Pierre! Luckily he has his friends for support. What a self centered, heartless asshole Jason is! I hope karma comes around and kicks his balls into his throat! I do believe sometimes karma needs a helping hand, and maybe the boys can be just that
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    Chapter 19

    Another great chapter! Again, I was teary eyed when Lane thought Casey would forget about him "just like everyone else" Breaks my heart what that damn family has done to that poor kid! Not so sure I agree with Casey not keeping what he saw to himself. I kno two wrongs don't make a right, but if it were the other way around that asshole Curtis wouldn't hesitate to spread it around. I don't necessarily agree with stooping to his level, but I also believe if someone treats u like shit, return the favor. Sometimes karma needs a helping hand. Obviously Casey is more mature than I in that respect! Lol!
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    Chapter 3

    Great story so far! I'm really enjoying Richard's fantasies about Mr Phillips! Didn't kno u could have hot and funny in the same fantasy! Lol! Richard is a very entertaining character. Sooo, I'm guessing Richard is gonna use Jose to get to Mr Phillips?? Can't wait to read more!
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    Chapter 18

    Great chapter! Not at all surprised at the turn of events as far as Curtis is concerned. Had a feeling he was engaging in some man on man action! I think this makes Curtis more of an asshole for being a total hypocrite this whole time. I don't care what coach said about Curtis looking at Casey as competition, there's nothing that excuses the way Curtis has treated Casey since day one. On a more positive note, I loved the first kiss between Casey and Shade. A very heartbreaking story Megan told about Shade. Casey underestimates what he could do to better Shade's life. I think the two finally admitting how they feel about each other is already a big positive for Shade.
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    Chapter 33

    I enjoyed how u ended book 5. Matt and Andy have been a couple of very frustrating guys for me. Its nice that they're finally growing up! Looking forward to book 6!
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    Chapter 4

    Good chapter! I knew there was something not right about Bryce. To be that forward and pushy is a total turn off for me! I think Devin handled it the correct way.
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    Chapter 17

    Great chapter! Well, its about damn time Casey! Lol! So happy Megan finally pointed it out! I think Casey and Shade will make a great couple. Of course its a good thing that Lane likes Shade too. I think Lane is the way to Casey's heart. Of course, now I'm hungry for tacos! Thanks! Lol!!
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    Chapter 2

    Great chapter! I feel for Benji and all that must be going through his mind. That kiss at the end of the chapter made me go WOW too! Can't wait to read more!!
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    Chapter 16

    Well, I have put u on a pedestal as far as writers go! I haven't read one story that has a character that I dislike redeem themself. Coach has shown that he's not the heartless child molester that he came off as. I'm happy that he pulled Casey aside and explained his side of the situation. Still kinda think he's a slimeball for passing the guys on his team without really teaching them anything simply so they can play, but I guess nobody's perfect! Mike got exactly what he deserves, and hopefully Curtis isn't far behind! Still loving the interactions between Shade and Casey! I hope to hell that the boys figure out the other has feelings! I'm getting kinda frustrated with that! What I think would be hilarious is if Lane was the one to figure it out and point it out to them!
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    About Time

    Great chapter! Sooo happy Ezra and Henrik are finally on the same page! I just adore the two together! Can't wait to see how they handle all of the publicity! I agree with CB, that Henrik needs to plant a big kiss on Ezra in front of the paparazzi! Show they're proud of their relationship, no matter how new it may be.
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    Chapter 1

    So happy to see the story on here! I was one of the people on Zarek's mailing list that read the first chapter and commented! Can't wait to see the love story unfold!
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    Chapter 15

    Still absolutely loving the story! I'm so excited about Lane being in the play. I'm so happy that everyone is coming around as far as Casey and Lane are concerned. I think Curtis is kind of a lost cause. I also think he needs a good dose of Karma! Lol! I'm enjoying Casey and Shade getting closer. Had to chuckle when Shade's mom told Casey he was even better looking than Shade had described him. Can't believe Casey hasn't put the pieces together yet! Wish they would figure it out a little faster! #nopatience Lol! Always looking forward to the next chapter!
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    Chapter 14

    I NEVER get tured of reading about Lane! Such a sweet kid, and reading about him makes me smile! I'm so excited about his part in the play. I think its cute that he has a crush on Megan. Felt bad fro what happened to Casey's locker, and of course that asshole Mike is behind it. I'm surprised Megan didn't consider that. I'm also really liking Shade. I think he's a good balance for Casey. Looking forward to reading more!
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    Chapter 13

    Another great chapter! Casey's interactions with Lane usually leave me a little misty eyed too! I absolutely love theur relationship. Lane has come a long way since Casey's arrival. I'm also loving Shade and Megan. I hope Shade and Casey figure out the other is attracted pretty soon! Lol! Mike is definitely an asshole. Still think the coach has something inappropriate going on with both Mike and Curtis. Its the only reason I can come up with to explain why neither gets into trouble for their actions. Maybe now that Casey's dad has pulled his head out of his ass, he can look into it since he and the coach seem to be on friendly terms.
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    Chapter 1

    Glad ur continuing with Devin's story. Happy he's in college now. Hope things continue to work out between he and Alex. I think they are good for each other. Can't wait to see what kinds of different people Devin meets!
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    Chapter 11

    Great chapter! Happy that Casey changed his classes. I think Oxala hit the nail on the head with " coach creepy" Lol! I like that Rodney is finally starting to come around. He's not a bad guy. Hope he does open that can of whoop ass on Curtis and Mike. They definitely deserve it. Makes me wonder if coach creepy has something going on with Curtis also?? Something to ponder. Had a feeling Shade would end up being interested in Casey. Can't wait to see how that plays out.
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    Chapter 10

    I knew Lane would become a very important part of Casey's life. I love how close they've become and how protective Casey is over him. I'm totally team Casey when it comes to Coach. I wondered about his relationship with Mike, and the fact that he's protecting Mike has me wondering even more what the deal is between them. I think I would have had the same reaction to the coach if I were Casey. It was very dusappointing that it was coach and not his father that came in to speak with him. I have no respect AT ALL for Casey's father.
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    Chapter 28

    Good chapter. Jason's parents are a real piece of....work. Lol! I feel sorry fo Jason and what he's going through. I was disappointed in Thomas. He's trying to change who he is to please Colt. Thomas wants monogamy, and he should stick to that and be true to himself. Colt isn't worth it anyway.
  19. Good chapter! I like Lucas and Nate together...they sound like a really cute pair. I liked how playful they were with each other after they got thru their hurt and anger. I hope that Lucas eventually has the guts to stand up to his ex-friends for what they did to Nate.
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    Sean

    Good chapter. Was good to look into when Tait first met Sean. I feel bad for Philip for not telling Tait how he really felt about him. I now understand why he's standing beside him now. However, now knowing that Tait was warned about Sean before they were even introduced makes me feel less sorry for his current situation. I just feel that if ur not only warned that somebody can possibly be abusive, but stay with them as it escalates, ur just as much to blame for what happens to u than the person who's inflicting it. I would be willing to bet that Philip probably had many converstaions about the situation with Tait before Sean beat the hell out of him. Tait is very lucky to have someone like Philip in his life.
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    Chapter 9

    I feel so bad for Rayne! If we didn't know how much he loved Daniel before, we sure know how much he loves him now! I can only imagine what poor Daniel went through. On a good day, you just want to pull him into a hug and never let go! What Daniel went through must have been heartbreaking! What can I say about Andy, except that I hope karma comes around and hits him right between the eyes! Maybe he can get hit by a truck crossing the street?? Lol!
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    Chapter 6

    Great chapter! I like Coach, and how he's there for the guys. Curtis is definitely an asshole and is gonna pose problems. I felt so bad for Lane, crying because he thought Casey was like everyone else. I can only imagine how lonely his life has been before Casey. Obviously his parents don't even notice how he's treated, or they just don't care. Was very interesting that Coach warned Casey about Mike being a player. That would explain why he's been so pushy. As always, looking forward to reading more!@
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    Early January

    Good chapter! Knew Steve was no good! My first impression of him was not to trust him! Hope Toph gets over him quickly. Like the saying goes, u can't make a ho into a housewife! Lol! At least he has a lot of support from his friends.
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    Acceptance

    Great chapter! Its a relief to finally kno what happened between Nix and Keon. I would have never forgiven him either, nor would I ever. I don't get how Lakota is getting away with this whole Theo thing so easily? First Oliver pretty much shrugs his shoulders, then Lyric is over it in like an hour! Its one thing when a boyfriend cheats, because u can always find another one. When its ur own sibling that he's cheating with, that's unforgivable in my eyes.
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    Guilt

    Great chapter. I liked the flashback to how Sean came to be, and can totally understand Philip's guilt. I think Philip tends to be too hard on himself. I also hope Tait gets the help that he needs to work through this. I can't believe that asshole Sean is still in their house and not in jail. I hope one way or another he gets what he deserves. I see Tait and Philip eventually together.
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