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A great, and very emotional chapter! I love Connor and Benji! I feel so bad that they have to go thru this, but I think it is making their love for each other stronger. I admit I was a bit teary eyed at the end of the chapter when Conner said "I love you" I think Benji is right about Connor's mother probably knowing in her heart about them already. Can't wait to read more!!
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Great story. Just wish u had shared what ended up happening to Jose.
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Well, I see Jackson hasn't really changed a whole lot. Still an asshole that hasn't grown up any. I'm happy Luke at least called him on his behavior. I don't care if Jackson feels any remorse, he doesn't deserve Luke as a friend or anything else. Jackson and his friends think of Luke as a loser, but as cool as they think they are, they're the losers.
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Poor Corey! He deserves so much better than that selfish asshole Zach. He needs to send him packing ASAP! Will be interesting to see what happens at the wedding. I hope to hell he's not stupid enuf to hook up with that other asshole Jason. we know he had a crush on him back in the day. I'm sorry, but I don't forgive or forget. Once a cheater, always a cheater. Not to mention I would take that as a slap in the face if I were Pierre.
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I'd give up on Curtis if I were Casey. Once an asshole, always an asshole. I wouldn't have bothered with his drunk ass. Maybe he needs consequences to bring him down a few notches. The double date was fun. Was hilarious when Casey slipped Rodney tongue when they were joking around. The new character seem like another Mike. I have a lot of respect for Shade so hope he shuts the new guy down quick...of course at the same time I DO love some drama! Lol!
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Ha! I knew Jose was a sleazy asshole from the very beginning. Too bad Mr Phillips doesn't have some friends that could make Jose "disappear" I hope Richard learned a valuable lesson about how fucked up game playing can be. His fucked up game caused the one he was trying to get to get into trouble. Personally, I don't think Richard deserves Mr Phillips. He and Jose deserve each other because they're both conniving assholes.
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Well its about damn time Toph!! Lol! I think Toph and Gary will be a good match. There's definitely attraction, and maybe already love from Gary's side. I hope it works out for them. I'm wondering if maybe Toph's mother somehow found out where he was banking and had the money put into his account?? Or perhaps Gary's father? I need to know! Lol!!
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Great chapter. Prom sounded like a blast. Nix is definitely the bigger person, because I would have NEVER forgiven Keon for what he did. I would have taken that grudge to my grave! Lyric's big plan was kind of lame. I still don't understand how Lakota is getting off with absolutely no consequences or taking no responsibility for what he did. Brother or not, he would have remembered for the rest of his life what I would have inflicted on hom!
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Great start! Right to the drama! Feel so sorry for Pierre! Luckily he has his friends for support. What a self centered, heartless asshole Jason is! I hope karma comes around and kicks his balls into his throat! I do believe sometimes karma needs a helping hand, and maybe the boys can be just that
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Another great chapter! Again, I was teary eyed when Lane thought Casey would forget about him "just like everyone else" Breaks my heart what that damn family has done to that poor kid! Not so sure I agree with Casey not keeping what he saw to himself. I kno two wrongs don't make a right, but if it were the other way around that asshole Curtis wouldn't hesitate to spread it around. I don't necessarily agree with stooping to his level, but I also believe if someone treats u like shit, return the favor. Sometimes karma needs a helping hand. Obviously Casey is more mature than I in that respect! Lol!
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Great story so far! I'm really enjoying Richard's fantasies about Mr Phillips! Didn't kno u could have hot and funny in the same fantasy! Lol! Richard is a very entertaining character. Sooo, I'm guessing Richard is gonna use Jose to get to Mr Phillips?? Can't wait to read more!
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Great chapter! Not at all surprised at the turn of events as far as Curtis is concerned. Had a feeling he was engaging in some man on man action! I think this makes Curtis more of an asshole for being a total hypocrite this whole time. I don't care what coach said about Curtis looking at Casey as competition, there's nothing that excuses the way Curtis has treated Casey since day one. On a more positive note, I loved the first kiss between Casey and Shade. A very heartbreaking story Megan told about Shade. Casey underestimates what he could do to better Shade's life. I think the two finally admitting how they feel about each other is already a big positive for Shade.
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I enjoyed how u ended book 5. Matt and Andy have been a couple of very frustrating guys for me. Its nice that they're finally growing up! Looking forward to book 6!
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Good chapter! I knew there was something not right about Bryce. To be that forward and pushy is a total turn off for me! I think Devin handled it the correct way.
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Great chapter! Well, its about damn time Casey! Lol! So happy Megan finally pointed it out! I think Casey and Shade will make a great couple. Of course its a good thing that Lane likes Shade too. I think Lane is the way to Casey's heart. Of course, now I'm hungry for tacos! Thanks! Lol!!
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Well, I have put u on a pedestal as far as writers go! I haven't read one story that has a character that I dislike redeem themself. Coach has shown that he's not the heartless child molester that he came off as. I'm happy that he pulled Casey aside and explained his side of the situation. Still kinda think he's a slimeball for passing the guys on his team without really teaching them anything simply so they can play, but I guess nobody's perfect! Mike got exactly what he deserves, and hopefully Curtis isn't far behind! Still loving the interactions between Shade and Casey! I hope to hell that the boys figure out the other has feelings! I'm getting kinda frustrated with that! What I think would be hilarious is if Lane was the one to figure it out and point it out to them!
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Great chapter! Sooo happy Ezra and Henrik are finally on the same page! I just adore the two together! Can't wait to see how they handle all of the publicity! I agree with CB, that Henrik needs to plant a big kiss on Ezra in front of the paparazzi! Show they're proud of their relationship, no matter how new it may be.
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Still absolutely loving the story! I'm so excited about Lane being in the play. I'm so happy that everyone is coming around as far as Casey and Lane are concerned. I think Curtis is kind of a lost cause. I also think he needs a good dose of Karma! Lol! I'm enjoying Casey and Shade getting closer. Had to chuckle when Shade's mom told Casey he was even better looking than Shade had described him. Can't believe Casey hasn't put the pieces together yet! Wish they would figure it out a little faster! #nopatience Lol! Always looking forward to the next chapter!
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I NEVER get tured of reading about Lane! Such a sweet kid, and reading about him makes me smile! I'm so excited about his part in the play. I think its cute that he has a crush on Megan. Felt bad fro what happened to Casey's locker, and of course that asshole Mike is behind it. I'm surprised Megan didn't consider that. I'm also really liking Shade. I think he's a good balance for Casey. Looking forward to reading more!
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Another great chapter! Casey's interactions with Lane usually leave me a little misty eyed too! I absolutely love theur relationship. Lane has come a long way since Casey's arrival. I'm also loving Shade and Megan. I hope Shade and Casey figure out the other is attracted pretty soon! Lol! Mike is definitely an asshole. Still think the coach has something inappropriate going on with both Mike and Curtis. Its the only reason I can come up with to explain why neither gets into trouble for their actions. Maybe now that Casey's dad has pulled his head out of his ass, he can look into it since he and the coach seem to be on friendly terms.
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Glad ur continuing with Devin's story. Happy he's in college now. Hope things continue to work out between he and Alex. I think they are good for each other. Can't wait to see what kinds of different people Devin meets!
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Great chapter! Happy that Casey changed his classes. I think Oxala hit the nail on the head with " coach creepy" Lol! I like that Rodney is finally starting to come around. He's not a bad guy. Hope he does open that can of whoop ass on Curtis and Mike. They definitely deserve it. Makes me wonder if coach creepy has something going on with Curtis also?? Something to ponder. Had a feeling Shade would end up being interested in Casey. Can't wait to see how that plays out.
