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U say that Devin already knows how it feels to be worthless and treated like garbage... so he turns around and makes someone he supposedly loves feel the same way for his own selfish, self centered reasons?? What a true piece of shit. I hope Bryce pays Devin back for what he did to Alex. Devin should feel ashamed, and doesn't deserve Alex's forgiveness...ever.
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Omg, I am SOOOO hooked on this story! Their first kiss...and it has to happen when Elliot is leaving! Elliot is coming back for him...very romantic! I sure hope ur gonna finish this love story. I definitely wanna read all the way to their "lived happily ever after"
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Another great series! Just read all 5 chapters this morning and am totally hooked! Absolutely love Shane and Dimitry! I knew in my heart that Dimitry liked Shane back! Can't wait to read more!!
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Love the series! Hate Sam's sister. What a hypocritical bitch! Praying for the sinners, but ends up on their doorstep when she needs them. If it weren't for her kids, I would have told her exactly where she could go!
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Soo....I don't like Jason any better now than I did before. Sounds to me like if Luc wouldn't have treated him like shit, he still wouldn't care if he hurt Pierre or not. That doesn't say anything positive about his character. He didn't grow up...he just got used also. Admitting to something ONLY because it happened to him tells me he's still pretty self centered. I agree with Corey not to trust him.
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Great chapter. Loved how Curtis was being so sweet to Lane. Its a long time coming. Laughed so hard at Lane talking to Curtis in his sleep! One thing I definitely agree with Lane on is for Curtis not to get involved with Joshua. I don't like hime either, and he seems like trouble. So happy that Casey's father helped get Shade's father out of prison. Overall great, happy chapter!
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Great chapter! The song Max dedicated to Nix was so sweet. Their dance was heartwarming! So happy they're officially boyfriends again. Cuddling, watching a movie was the perfect ending to the evening.
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I still feel so bad for Alex. His mother hit the nail on the head when she said "you should be more worried if you don't miss him, because that would have meant you didn't care enough to miss him" That is exactly what he is getting from Devin. Its difficult for me to believe that a few weeks of college would turn a person into a heartless prick unless that's what he was to begin with. Makes me feel way less bad for what he went through in high school. I know Alex isn't the type, but Devin definitely deserves at least a black eye or broken nose when he tells Alex what he's been up to. I hope to hell karma comes around and kicks Devin with a steel toe boot for what he's doing.
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Well, the only thing I've been able to agree with Jackson on is that he doesn't deserve the faith that Henry has in him. The few seconds of remorse doesn't hide the fact that he's still an asshole underneath. Why Luke even bothers with him is beyond me, and why Henry is pushing them together is even more confusing. If some idiot treated my kid like Jackson has treated Luke, I'd want him as far away as possible. Jackson has his loser crew. Luke is too good for him.
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Happy that Curtis has finally come around. Although he would have gotten into bigger trouble, I wish it were Mike's face and not the locker that broke Curtis' hand. I don't care what the coach said about Mike's home life, it doesn't excuse him from being an asshole. I think a good beatdown is way overdue! My Lane laugh of the chapter is when he asked how Curtis' butt was after Karen ripped him a new one! Lol!
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I have a different view as the others. I totally agree with Corey's reaction. If someone betrays my trust once, they're never to be trusted by me again. Cheating is an automatic "do not forgive" for me. That's the ultimate betrayal of trust, whether done to me personally or to someone I care for. If Pierre wants to forgive him, that's on him. I say Corey should stick to his guns. I don't trust Jason any more now than I did at the beginning.
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A very disappointing chapter. Ur making Devin a very unlikeable character. All that Alex helped him through, and Devin is just gonna shit all over him for the first guy that gives up his ass for him. Devin has definitely changed since being in college, and not for the better.
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Great chapter! Lane always makes me laugh at least once every chapter, and him pounding on the storage closet door when Casey and Shade were in there was that LOL moment! I'm happy Shade is getting tired of Joshua, because frankly I am too! Lol! I was surprised and happy that Karen came to Casey for advice about what's going on with Curtis. Personally, I think he'd be an asshole whether he was going through whatever he is or not. Kinda surprised what she said about Mike, but that still doesn't excuse what he did and doesn't deserve forgiveness. Will be interesting to see what will happen with Curtis discovering Casey and Shade in a compromising position. I'm sure he will threaten to tell his parents, not knowing they have accepted Casey's relationship with Shade.
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Can't say that I feel bad for Jason. He was correct about karma. He got exactly what he deserved with Luc. He thinks, now, how much of an asshole he was to Pierre and how he lost friends, but I also believe in too little too late. I think they should hear him out, then keep their distance. Of course, I know I will be disappointed because that won't happen.
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Great chapter! Can't get enuf of Lane! So sweet that he thought Casey wouldn't like him anymore because he was "different" Lane has to be one of my all time favorite characters! I kinda agree with Casey as far as Joshua goes. He's getting under my skin too! Have new found respect for Casey's father, offering to help Shade and his mother. Can't wait to read more!
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Ok, so I already knew Bryce was an asshole. I have lost ALL respect for Devin! He's as much of an asshole as Bryce. Alex needs to dump his cheating ass when he finds out about this, if Devin even has the balls to tell him. Disappointing.
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A great, and very emotional chapter! I love Connor and Benji! I feel so bad that they have to go thru this, but I think it is making their love for each other stronger. I admit I was a bit teary eyed at the end of the chapter when Conner said "I love you" I think Benji is right about Connor's mother probably knowing in her heart about them already. Can't wait to read more!!
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Great story. Just wish u had shared what ended up happening to Jose.
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Well, I see Jackson hasn't really changed a whole lot. Still an asshole that hasn't grown up any. I'm happy Luke at least called him on his behavior. I don't care if Jackson feels any remorse, he doesn't deserve Luke as a friend or anything else. Jackson and his friends think of Luke as a loser, but as cool as they think they are, they're the losers.
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Poor Corey! He deserves so much better than that selfish asshole Zach. He needs to send him packing ASAP! Will be interesting to see what happens at the wedding. I hope to hell he's not stupid enuf to hook up with that other asshole Jason. we know he had a crush on him back in the day. I'm sorry, but I don't forgive or forget. Once a cheater, always a cheater. Not to mention I would take that as a slap in the face if I were Pierre.
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I'd give up on Curtis if I were Casey. Once an asshole, always an asshole. I wouldn't have bothered with his drunk ass. Maybe he needs consequences to bring him down a few notches. The double date was fun. Was hilarious when Casey slipped Rodney tongue when they were joking around. The new character seem like another Mike. I have a lot of respect for Shade so hope he shuts the new guy down quick...of course at the same time I DO love some drama! Lol!
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Ha! I knew Jose was a sleazy asshole from the very beginning. Too bad Mr Phillips doesn't have some friends that could make Jose "disappear" I hope Richard learned a valuable lesson about how fucked up game playing can be. His fucked up game caused the one he was trying to get to get into trouble. Personally, I don't think Richard deserves Mr Phillips. He and Jose deserve each other because they're both conniving assholes.
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Well its about damn time Toph!! Lol! I think Toph and Gary will be a good match. There's definitely attraction, and maybe already love from Gary's side. I hope it works out for them. I'm wondering if maybe Toph's mother somehow found out where he was banking and had the money put into his account?? Or perhaps Gary's father? I need to know! Lol!!
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Great chapter. Prom sounded like a blast. Nix is definitely the bigger person, because I would have NEVER forgiven Keon for what he did. I would have taken that grudge to my grave! Lyric's big plan was kind of lame. I still don't understand how Lakota is getting off with absolutely no consequences or taking no responsibility for what he did. Brother or not, he would have remembered for the rest of his life what I would have inflicted on hom!
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Still enjoying the story and Richard's daydreams! The game playing makes him seem kinda childish, and who fucks one guy to try to get to another?? Lost some respect there. Jose sounds like a slimeball.
