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Just found ur story this evening and just had to read all the chapters u have so far. Love the drama. So happy that Galen was found. Had a feeling Roger was behind it. What I don't understand is how the hell Josh missed Roger draggind a person down to that bunker. Come on, he disappears into town for his next victim and Josh doesn't even notice he's gone??? I find that extremely hard to believe.
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Still totally loving these two! Their interactions are so damn cute! I can't stop smiling when I read about them! I'm a sucker for a good love story, and this one definitely hasn't disappointed. The build-up is great! Looking forward to reading more!
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Loved the chapter! Peter and Nick are so adorable, and so cute that they both obviously like each other and afraid to say it! Moving on to chapter 3, but loving it so far!
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What a great story! I can really relate to Terry. Unfortunately my Gillette hasn't appeared. Can't wait to read more about him!
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Great ending! So happy everyone is doing well. I'm sad that the series is ending. Always look so forward to reading about Sam, Nick, and Jorge. Also looked forward to reading about Joseph. Happy that he and Tyler are gonna be moving in with Nick and Sam while they go to college. I also hope there will be more stories to come. Maybe about Joseph and Tyler and how they navigate college and a relationship?? Then we could still see Sam and Nick from time to time.
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Good chapter. Hope the prologue isn't too far off tho. Still don't care much for David. Still think he should have left with Mike, and definitely not stay the night. I would have changed the locks! Lol! Really think that Rain is a sleaze. I don't care for Vicky either. She seems like a dominant, pushy bitch that doesn't care about anyone else's relationship as long as she has fun. Not much of a supporting friend. These people really need to grow up.
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What a drama filled chapter! I feel bad for Ezra. Kinda pissed at Vi and Xavier for trying to force him to do something he obviously wasn't ready to do. Still haven't regained any respect for Henrik. Pretty much still a big wimp who listens to others instead of following his own heart. I still say Ezra should wait for Henrik to come to him. Ezra didn't do anything wrong, and it was really shitty of Henrik to compare Ezra to Patrick. I would be very offended and angry if I were Ezra!
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Was a nice, lighthearted chapter. Yes, I still have the noose waiting for Jason! Lol! Don't get too excited, but I kinda had a tiny bit of respect for Jason for turning down Marco. I think anyone with a shred of self respect would have turned him down too. The only reason I'm so hard and distrustful with Jason is he waited 8 years to care about the friendships he wrecked. U say he did care and did think about the guys, but if that were true he would have made amends with them the same time he made amends with his brother instead of waiting til he got a good dose of karma. I still say too little, too late.
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Great start! Already liking Peter and Nick a lot. Can't wait to read more about them. Also enjoyed ur description of Mr Thompson. I'd sprain my ankle too if it meant spending some time leaning up against that big hunk of man! Lol!
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Chapter 12 - Part of the past
jaysalmn commented on Avangelion's story chapter in Chapter 12 - Part of the past
Wow! That chapter was kind of a surprise, but also not. I guess I always knew Anikin would cheat eventually. He can go through all the bullshit about "it wasn't what it looked like" and "he kissed me, I didn't kiss him" but it is what it is. So disappointed in Anikin and feel so bad for Dominic. Can't wait to see how this plays out, but I hope whatever happens Dominic doesn't let him off easy. Obviously Anikin has another shoulder to cry on, if he has a conscience at all. -
Great chapter! So glad that Toph and Gary took that vacation together. I kno in my heart they're meant for each other. Also glad that he's starting to make amends with some of his family members. Clarence had to have been a difficult one. Not sure if he would have if it had not been for Gary. Not sure that he'll ever be able to make amends with his mother. She doesn't seem like the type that could ever be trusted. The wedding should be very interesting.
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A drama filled chapter! I have to admit that I would also have an issue if my partner was eye fucking another guy all evening. I can kinda identify with Mike there. It doesn't necessarily have to come from a place of guilt. Sounds like David was actually kinda ignoring Mike at some point when Rain was within eye shot. I don't hold a lot of respect for Rain either. He's there with his girlfriend, yet openly flirting with another person who also happens to be in a relationship.I think that David was a selfish ass for staying and partying instead of going home when he found out Mike had left. Tells me that he has a lack of caring when it comes to Mike's feelings. Understanding the prologue now, David kinda deserved it.
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Well, Jackson almost had me convinced that he had changed, with all of the thinking he had been doing about Luke. It was unfortunate that he had to go back to being his normal asshole self. I still don't understand what Luke sees in him. Jackson and his friends seem to think they are so cool and guys like Luke are losers, but really Jackson and his friends are the losers and Luke deserves SO much more! I really hope that Luke comes to his senses and forgets about Jackson.
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Good chapter. I liked the flashback of when Corey, Drew and Jason were like the three musketeers. Its too bad Jason turned out to be a total dick. I still say Corey should keep him at arms length tho. Everyone talks about how Jason has changed and grown up, but the truth is he didn't give a shit what he did to his friends and brother for 8, count them, 8 years!! If he hadn't gotten some well deserved karma, he still wouldn't give a shit. I, for one, don't believe that is worthy of praise and forgiveness.
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Well, definitely NOT what I expected. Just goes to show that even the biggest, strongest guy can be a spineless pussy when the going gets tough. Feel so bad for Ezra, and don't think much about Henrik at this point. I think that Henrik needs to get down on his knees and beg Ezra for forgiveness for being a self centered ass. I also think Ezra shouldn't go chasing after him. If its meant to be, Henrik will be back. If he doesn't come back, Ezra can thank god that he dodged a bullet with a big heartless wimp!
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Well, guess I'm gonna be the debbie downer of the reviews! Lol! I've seen and experienced a lot, and those things have made me the grudge holding, unforgiving bitch I am today. Personally, I would never ever forgive Jason for what he did. I still say if Jason's ex hadn't fucked around on him, Jason would still be living his life not caring how he affected his brother and friends. That aside, I kinda felt that their running into each other all the time and "here, take my car home" seems pretty rushed. Good chapter overall, but way too nicey nicey.
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Great chapter! The neighborhood watch meeting was quite hilarious with all the ladies swooning over Sam and Nick! Just knew something was gonna happen that involved that idiot Cyril. Hope the kid makes it through, and Cyril ends up some big guy's bitch in prison! Lol!! Always looking forwrd to new chapters! Keep up the great work!
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Well, not the ending of their relationship that I had imagined. Just when I thought Devin couldn't become any more unlikeable, he makes himself an even more selfish prick. Alex didn't deserve how Devin treated him. I hope that Devin gets paid back ten fold for how he treated him. Unfortunately, this is the part of the series that I'm gonna have to bid u farewell. I liked, and even felt sorry for Devin in the first series, but no way in hell do I wanna continue reading about such a selfish, self centered bastard. Good luck with the rest. Maybe someday u might even make Devin a worth while character.
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Well, that was an unexpected end to the chapter. Kudos ro Luke for having the guts to put himself out there. What he sees in Jackson is beyond me. I still see a self centered ass who is still lacking in respect and simple common courtesy. I don't see this turning out very well for Luke.
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Great chapter! The wedding sounded great, and Zach got exactly what he deserved. Pierre and David sound like an adorable couple, and I don't think that Corey's far off the mark as far as their wedding being next. Happy that there wasn't a lot of Jason in the chapter also. I still don't like or trust him. Sometimes its too late to change and too late for forgiveness, and I think this is one of those times.
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What a great way to end the story! Shade's parents buy the diner, Shade and Casey are going strong, Curtis is actually thinking, and of course who can forget Lane's farewell to Al Peterson! Lmao! I'm really gonna miss reading about Casey, Shade, Rodney and Curtis, but I think I'll miss Lane most of all. He definitely holds a special place in my heart!
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What a sweet story! Just wish u would have added a couple more chapters to see exactly how it turns out.
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Great chapter! Sooo loving Connor and Ben. Ben is su h a sweetheart! When he whispered to Connor that once he was out of the casts he can hold him for the rest of time, I'll admit I got a little teary eyed! What a great love story!!
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Good chapter. Also glad that Casey and Shade's night went so well. Also glad that Curtis and Rodney were able to talk. Obviously Curtis is still a douche bag, not only bringing Mike around but the two of them hooking up with Joshua. I can see why those two are friends, they're both assholes. Very happy Casey didn't wanna hear anything Mike had to say. I would have been disappointed if all had been forgiven.
