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In spite of their differences they're making it work. I worry a bit about Tony's money and its effect on Mitch. But so far Mitch seems to be able to speak up and not hold things in. Thanks. Jeff
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Hooray for Ryder! Some good things coming his way. Too bad for Ryder about Shawn being straight, but maybe he will become the friend Ryder's been needing. Looking forward to the blind date. Thanks. Jeff
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I was a little slow to catch on to Chris' identity... What a fun little story. You should consider adding pictures and publishing these stories. A great Christmas anthology. Thanks. Jeff
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More fun and romance as their relationship moves forward. And a hint of "in-laws" to come, which should be interesting! Thanks. Jeff
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Matthew must be based on a real person. Even a person who writes as well as you do couldn't make up someone like that. Could you? Did you? I hope by the time this story is over Harry finds someone. Although I guess it doesn't always happen in real life. Thanks. Jeff
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Aside from the PTSD and money issue, things are going well. And it seems like both those issues are manageable for these guys. I hate to jinx things, but it must be time for some major conflict. This is after all a story on GA.
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Another layer peeled away and only more questions. Travis has impressive snowboarding skills, and according to Katy a need to seduce and dump guys. And Ben secretly thinks he's worthless and needs to be used and abused. Hmmm. Where will this reveal take them next. I also can't imagine Ben just walking away as he described at the end. Your story just keeps getting more interesting. Thanks. Jeff
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Door#16 - A Thousand Kisses
JeffreyL commented on Aditus's story chapter in Door#16 - A Thousand Kisses
Liked this story a lot! The double happy ending was fun. Thanks. Jeff -
This was a Kleenex moment. Three beautiful and touching stories. Thank you. Jeff
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Meeting the family for the first time can be hard. I'm glad it went well for Mitch. From what Mitch said about his family, Tony won't have to deal with it. Keep the good stuff coming. Jeff
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Your writing feels real to me. These people have their strengths and weaknesses, and their lives are a bit messy which life can be. I am anxious to see where Ben and Travis's relationship goes. Jeff
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Chapter 35 The Winds of Change
JeffreyL commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 35 The Winds of Change
Your writing kept me on the edge of my seat until the end! So what's next? An interlude of peace and quiet followed by another menace? I've said it before. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks. Jeff -
Wow! Very erotic! I agree with the other reviewers; I was initially confused by the ending. After thinking about it and reading the your responses I get it, although it seems a bit sad. Also amazing that Eric gave so much sexually, but not as much otherwise. At the end I didn't feel like I knew him well. Thanks for another good chapter in Harry's life. Jeff
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It is so great to learn more about these guys as they learn about each other. Thanks. Jeff
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Door#12 - The Gingerbread House
JeffreyL commented on Aditus's story chapter in Door#12 - The Gingerbread House
Please finish the cookie recipe. I want to try it. Thanks. Jef -
This is quite a romance! Are Tony and Mitch as funny and personable in real life?
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I like the way the romance is building. I like your characters. Tony's description of 9/11 brought back memories of that day. I was on the west coast and remember the station breaking into programming to show video. I can only guess how it would feel to have been there and survive. Good writing. Thanks. Jeff
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It was good to see how gentle Harry was with Perry. Especially since he is on a bit of a journey himself. I know it doesn't always work this way in real life, but I hope Harry finds someone before the story ends. Thanks. Jeff
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Singing songs is also a great learning tool for children. Seems it's easier to memorize with lyrics than just words. A very touching story. Thanks. Jeff
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Among other things you write dogs really well. Were you one in a previous life? A trainer/breeder? Or just a dog lover? Makes me think it's time to reread something about the Sabaakax clan. And thanks for a sweet interlude with the guys. It was great, although I'm sure there's a monkey wrench or two hiding in your pocket. Thanks Sasha, and isn't it about time for another Ink Boys tale?
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A True Italian from New York
JeffreyL commented on R. Eric's story chapter in A True Italian from New York
I like these guys even more. I think it's going to be fun watching their relationship develope. Jeff -
Mom to the rescue! Some things are universal and never change. I hope Allan realises how much great support he has: work, neighbor, friends, and now Mom. You have been spot on in your portrayal of the boys. I haven't had young ones in my life for awhile (my baby's baby is twelve) but these boys are so typical from my experiences. Good job. Thanks for more good story. Jeff
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I can tell this is going to be fun! You've got great characters and a great set up. Looking forward to more. Thanks. Jeff
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