.jpg.aab3271f148b5b54ae5c210774bf4b13.jpg)
.jpg.b69bc2144ea9673c6267465bede62dd8.jpg)
JeffreyL
-
Posts
5,995 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help Center
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by JeffreyL
-
Great chapter! I hope the meeting up during the tour works like they think it will.
-
Robert Rex has written another memorable story! Ryan and Clayton are both older men. They meet at a bar and begin a courtship, although they both come with some baggage. There is humor, drama, romance, and some hot sex as Ryan and Clayton build a relationship. Add to this some beloved characters from Robert's other stories, and you have a great read. This follows "Joe the Welder" and "Landfall," but this can be enjoyed as a stand alone. However, I think you'll enjoy it even more if you read the other two stories first.
-
I enjoyed Ryder's first time at beach. I think it's a special place, and I'm fortunate the Pacific Ocean is only a couple of hours away. Thanks for more good story.
-
Mill's and Bren's story is sad, but the joy is they were triumphant in the end. I got to wondering how you came up with the name Makarovia? Thanks for this most enjoyable story.
-
I am happy Teddy convinced Grandma to give Ryder the letter from his dad. Hopefully this beautifully written moment will be a major step forward in Ryder's path to wellness. Thanks.
-
Clearly Jackson is about to get his first blowjob. No need to wonder if he will like it! 😄 I am still trying to sort out Carter. Secretly gay, bi, or curious? Or maybe clueless? I'm enjoying your story and your characters, especially Jackson. I can see Sam is going to add another dimension to things. Thanks.
-
It's going to be an interesting fall at school for Jackson. I can't wait to see what's next. Thanks.
-
Except for the element of surprise, I stand by my comment from my first read. Your characters are people I'd like to know and be friends with, and I'm loving their story just as much the second time around! Thanks.
-
.thumb.jpg.39c2ec46ffb55a3ad075be8e406530a7.jpg)
What the Hell Am I Thinking?
JeffreyL commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in What the Hell Am I Thinking?
What fun to see characters from your older stories pop in for a cameo! Hopefully, like Barry, we will see more of them. I'm remembering Ryan and Clayton from the last time I read this story. I'm looking forward to more. Thanks. -
As I skimmed through the comments, I saw mine from February2016. Here I am back after almost two years for a re-read. I have enjoyed rereading your other stories, and I'm certain I will enjoy this one!
-
A nice little slice of life tale. I enjoyed the fact that Terry and Michael were just ordinary guys, not handsome supermen or brainy millionaires. This short story is a good stand alone, but you've written a couple of interesting characters. It would be nice to visit them again sometime. Maybe they could move to Louisiana and buy a house from Rex. 😉
-
I loved Mom's conversation with "sleeping" Teddy. It was good for him to hear what she said, and I'm glad he "woke up" and talked to her about it. I was glad to see Teddy being the strong one. I like the way he and Ryder seem to trade off on that role. I can't remember if I've said it lately, but I love these characters and their story! Thank you!
-
This story is the perfect follow up to "Joe the Plumber." You don't have to read Joe's story first to enjoy this one, although I recommend you do. In "Landfall" you will join Dave and Barry in an action-filled romance between two adult men. The writing is first rate! The characters and dialogue are realistic. There is lots of action, some hot loving, some tender romance and some funny moments. I definitely recommend this story.
-
This was just as good the second time around! Thanks for sharing this story with the rest of us!
-
Reading this story the second time around is so much fun! The action is just roller coaster! Calm one minute and then crazy the next. It's been long enough that I don't remember all the details, but my "spidey sense" tells me something is coming. I'm even enjoying the cliffhangers because I can move right on to the next chapter.
-
Part of me wants to feel bad for Mike, but he has made his choice. I worry that he might still come between Teddy and Ryder.
-
Adam and Ian make such a sweet couple! Thanks for the romantic proposal.
-
Lots of Secrets in This Bar
JeffreyL commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in Lots of Secrets in This Bar
Ah, the plot thickens! It will be fun watching Rex and Joe, and Dave and Barry become friends. More good story. Thanks. -
If you ever need a job you can ghost write sex scenes for other writers! Can't wait for New Orleans, and looking forward to seeing Rex again. Thanks.
-
Teddy's parents are pretty terrific! Some people want to get down on Mom, but she is the ying to Dad's yang. Sometimes being the "bad guy" is a tough role, but, in my opinion, the best decisions are made when you look at all sides. I am still loving the way this story is progressing! Thanks.
-
Having read many stories on GA, I really appreciate the quality and craftsmanship in your story. Even more since this is my second reading. Your writing is first rate. Your story is wonderful! Thanks.
-
Looks like Barry has taken the first steps towards his new life. And it looks like he'll be doing it hand in hand with Dave. Great characters; great story! Thanks.
-
This idea of Kohen being a living "killing machine" is an interesting wrinkle. It seems to me he needs to let go of the idea that the killings were his fault. Being controlled by others is not freedom of choice. How will Captain and Lakshou make him understand that? I am amused by Captain's jealousy!
-
OMG! I'd forgotten this part!! The good news: I can move right on to the next chapter. No waiting for it like the first time I read this.
-
I am still really enjoying this re-read of a very fine story. Thank you!
.thumb.jpg.39c2ec46ffb55a3ad075be8e406530a7.jpg)
