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No, you and your characters and this story are fucking awesome! It is hard to see Teddy unsure of himself, but it is great to see Ryder become stronger and more sure of himself. Thanks for more good story!
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Here I am finishing chapter three and no comments, so far, from my previous readings. Hmm... how odd. Well I'm enjoying this story yet again! Thanks, Carlos!
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I think this is read number four of this story for me. I guess I must like your characters and this story OK. 😄 Waiting for new chapters in stories I'm currently reading and decided to take a trip down memory lane. A visit with CJ and company is always a pleasure. It's almost hard to remember CJ being this young and unsure of himself. As usual, thanks for creating this character and sharing his stories.
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Ryder keeps growing and taking steps forward. I am so excited for him! Please don't have it all come crashing down around him. Steps backward for drama or plot advancement would be OK, but I want him to be happier and more centered by the end of the story. I wish I could convey just how much I am enjoying this story! Thanks.
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I am reading to get caught up and enjoying your story so far. Thank you.
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More good writing. More good story! I feel Kohen's fear and anguish. I liked what Normischell wrote about maybe this time is different because Kohen can verbalize his fears. We can hope so.
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This was an especially good chapter! You did an excellent job of portraying Ryder's yoyo-ing emotions. Happy, worried, unsure, proud. His emotions were all over the place, and I could really understand and empathize with how he was feeling. You have created a pretty amazing family (Teddy and parents), and it is so cool to see them support Ryder and make him feel connected! Thanks.
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The Gap Year (Part One)
JeffreyL commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Gap Year (Part One)
If Charlie can have hot sex with no strings with Eric, why not with Frankie too? As I remember Charlie was quite taken with Frankie's muscles, and they both enjoyed the sex. Still really enjoying this story and looking forward to the merge with "Stitcher." -
The Musician (Part Four)
JeffreyL commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Musician (Part Four)
I feel bad for David and Charlie, but we know Charlie has some great things coming in his life. I assume the same can be said for David. -
This chapter was so romantic and HOT! I think I need a cold shower! Thanks.
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Another enjoyable chapter! I hope if David and Charlie become a couple things work for them. I don't remember David from the last story, so I'm wondering if I just didn't notice him, or if things end between them. Done speculating. I will go back to just enjoying the story.
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Charlie is a great character, and David seems to compliment him nicely. I can't help but feel a little sorry for Frankie, even if he was a jerk in how he broke things off with Charlie. Gay fiction moral: never fall for the guy in the closet. It rarely works out. I'm guessing it's another case of art immitating life. Thanks.
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I like your thinking. And all of us fans of Ian, Cam, and Charlie could have another story to enjoy.
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I'm sorry for Charlie about the way things turned out with Frankie, but having read the other story I knew it wouldn't last. The sex was hot and well written, but I worried a bit about no condoms. I believe kids get a lot of safe sex info these days. It would seem the idea of needing condoms would be in Charlie's nature. Oh well, enough hand wringing from the old man. It won't stop me from enjoying this story! You had me hooked about half way through chapter one! Thanks.
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I'm sorry I waited so long to start this story. I loved Charlie in "Stitcher," and I can't wait to read more about him! Since you've posted chapter 7, it is too late to encourage you to continue. It seems like that's your plan. I look forward to reading more. Thanks.
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What a great chapter! It could be a great end to the story, but I hope it is not. Both Teddy and Ryder have grown so much since the beginning of this story. Your writing has made them both feel real. Their conversations and actions (and reactions) have made me come to really care about them. Kudos also for the supporting characters. They also react and interact in a very natural way. Thank you.
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I'm glad to have Ryder and Teddy back! I reread a chapter and binged two! Glad to see Ryder coming into his own and having Teddy's support. I think it's one more chapter and I'm caught up. Thanks.
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With Sasha Distan's short stories you get a lot in a few words. Niran has lots of tattoos, and his boyfriend has none. We see them through each other's eyes and the people around them. This well written tale is a commentary about prejudice. The characters are interesting. The dialogue is believable. The message is contemporary and timeless. And if you like this you should read the other stories in the Ink Boys Series.
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Just as wonderful the second time around. Or is it the third? Thanks.
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The king is nothing more than Lester in fae form. I am not happy with this turn of events. I was hoping the Hollow would do more to protect Mick. So now I am caught up and will need to learn patience like your other readers. I hope school, family, and life are all going well for you! Happy New Year (in four minutes where I am)!
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This chapter was a lot of fun! I'm glad you decided to quit abusing Mick, at least for a while. 😉 I am curious how much of this fey culture is made up by you and what parts are based on research/legend? I recognise some of the names you use, and others sound familiar. Glad I stuck with this story! Even with the hard to read parts it has been great! Thanks.
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OMG! It was awful, but I couldn't stop reading! Not the writing. It was good. The events of the last couple of chapters were really unsettling. Hopefully we have Guy to the rescue in the next chapter, and an explanation about what happened to Lester.
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I tend to be pretty buttoned up, but this chapter was really steamy for me in spite of the biting, clawing, blood, etc. I am not much for Mick's sexual preferences, but they make sense in the context of the story and who you've revealed him to be. I like your writing, and I find these characters intriguing. I can't wait to see what's next. I do hope we will see some more of Guy. I really like him. Thanks.
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Your story just gets better and better with each chapter! I didn't see the fae in Mick. That was a surprise. I'm still waiting for Takashi to turn out to be something cat related. You wrote what I took to be hints (foreshadowing?). And I miss Guy. I hope he shows up again. Thanks!
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It's been a binge from the beginning to this chapter and time for a comment. A lot of this has been hard to read, but Mick and Guy are fascinating characters! I like the parameters you've set up regarding non-humans. It's all a bit different than other werewolf/shifter stories. I also think you've done a great job describing Mick's empath abilities and how it feels to him. I will continue to read, and hopefully by the time I get caught up, you will be posting more chapters. Thanks for this story.
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