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They mostly seem made for each other. It is nice to see their relationship growing stronger/better.
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What a terrific party! The only sadness was when you mentioned only one more chapter.
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Hooray for Wednesday! At last something positive for Kohen. I'm sure the captain and Aparoe would be upset to find their good intentions mostly made things worse.
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I continue to enjoy your writing and this wonderful story! Looks like more good times with the royal family. Thanks.
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Thanks for sharing. Both are pretty impressive!
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I agree with MacGreg. I keep coming back for more. And my feelings about Oscar are beginning to change. Thanks for more good story.
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Why to the disagreeable tourists need to be Americans? Although I have witnesses my fellow Americans being less than gracious, we are not all disagreeable louts. On a lighter note I googled catamaran because I wasn't certain I knew what one was. Wow! No wonder the lady questioned Anton being the owner and in charge. The pictures I saw were magnificent! Your writing really makes me feel like I am there. Thanks.
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Very loving and emotional! It leaves a pleasant feeling of sharing a special moment between two people very much in love. Thanks.
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I swallowed the misdirection hook, line, and sinker! Very clever!
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Since I am following several stories on GA including two of yours ( which I am thoroughly enjoying!) I decided why not read one more of yours. I can already tell I won't be disappointed! Thanks for sharing your stories.
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Chapter 19 Game of Chance
JeffreyL commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 19 Game of Chance
It seems like Michael is this stereotypical jock until he opens his mouth and words of wisdom pour out! It impresses me the way he loves and supports Kendall. I know this reuniting with his parents, especially Dad, has been a real emotional drain on Kendall. Thanks for this story. -
I continue to enjoy the adventures of Carlton and company! The catamaran charter business has been an interesting change for the family and their crew. I agree with the other comments: this royal charter could do a lot for business. Thanks for sharing this great story!
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I know that teachers are human beings with strengths and weaknesses like everyone else. And I know this is a story, although I seem to remember it is based on real events, but it saddens me when teachers don't hold themselves to a higher standard.
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I don't particularly like Oscar. I don't like the idea of him manipulating and using the other characters for his own amusement. However, your writing keeps me intrigued with what will happen next, and the way you write a sex scene is pretty hot! It seems like you reveal a bit of Oscar from time to time, but I don't feel like I understand why he is the way he is. Maybe I just need to go back to the beginning and skim read a bit. I am behind a bit and am working to get caught up. Thanks for sharing your writing.
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I think I am going to enjoy the brother's journey. Thanks.
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Chapter 10 - A Quickie in How Not To Rescue Someone
JeffreyL commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 10 - A Quickie in How Not To Rescue Someone
You might have been more kind and given us another clue or two in the end scene. I guess I need to go back and re-read the secret agent parts to get them straight in my head. I too will be patient for the next chapter, but no lollygagging on your part. 😜 -
Hooray! Something has gone right for Joey! Actually a couple of three somethings! I hope th7mgs have turned a corner for h7m. Now to get Gene sorted, and someone needs to take down Barry. Thanks.
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I really enjoyed this story and getting to know these characters. Although I was sorry for this story to end, you picked a pretty good place. Ryder is happy and getting more at ease in his own skin. He and Tyler have come together as a couple. That's all good! I'm glad there will be a part 2 because you left a few story lines dangling: Wilder, Jeremy and his baby, Jaxson and Terrin, Garret, Coach's new job, and Callen. I will wait patiently until part two arrives. Thank you.
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I may not always agree with the opinions of your characters, but I admire the way you write about controversial topics in an even handed manner. Oh, and your mother would not be happy to hear you're shirking your chores and responsibilities to reply to comments! 😄
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I continue to enjoy this story, these characters, and your writing style. Not being Australian, I enjoy the details and bits of information that add another layer of interest for me. Thank you.
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It is always a pleasure to have a visit with CJ and company! It amazes me how fictional characters and their lives can bring a person to tears. The conversation between CJ and Aba was well done. Another case of your deft handling of a sensitive subject. I also like the way CJ's relationship with Richie continues to grow. And now he he can work his magic on Silas. Good chapter. Thank you.
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I can't believe you have a prologue and two chapters posted, and I missed all three! As part of the legion of CJ fans (and by association Carlos Hazday 😉) I am happy to see this story start to post. In an earlier response to a comment you mentioned plans for several more CJ stories you might write, as long as readers are interested. If one reader is enough, I know I will be reading anything you write until my eyes no longer work. When that happens, I will find someone to read to me. It's nice to have you back. Thanks.
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I hope Gene can get himself sorted. Maybe with some help from Joey, Allen, Star, and his mom he can. More good story! Thanks.
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Bryce was holding his cards close. I'm glad he wasn't duped!
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