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Chapter Nineteen: Protect Me From What I Want
bubby1234 commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in Chapter Nineteen: Protect Me From What I Want
Truly sorry for chapter 4 comments, you an awesome writer. -
Tears in my eyes already, must be an awesome story to come/ love it so far
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I cryed tears all the way through this chapter, wonderful story i hope this is not the last we here of our hero boys.
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Chapter Four: Rob the Bank
bubby1234 commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in Chapter Four: Rob the Bank
I read the first two books, loved them ecept the last of book two, what can never understand is why some authors seem to want to alianate there readers by destroying there chactors in this way, i cannot contiue to read this as i hate the way it has gone Nick has turned into an evil slut and drug addict and if i was dave i would never ever forgive him, i think you should have Nick run down and killed by a truck the evil bastard so that dave can find somone who truly loves him. 0 out of ten for you, as an author you should try to make your reader want to read your stories and love them not start good and then rip their harts out. -
Chapter 107 The Laundry Game
bubby1234 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 107 The Laundry Game
I think mr Andrews is Robbies dad. -
I was under the impresion that Micheal like Daniel but now he is getting it on with someone called Jasper thats it for me with this story i am afraid.
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I think that Kevin is the third key.
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Two steps forward and one step back
bubby1234 commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Two steps forward and one step back
I beg you(i never beg) please dont let Cal die from this evil ilness please. -
Mmmm, hot sweaty and dirty, is it just me but that is such a turn on, i could just lick him clean.
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Chapter 102 A student for a Day
bubby1234 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 102 A student for a Day
I have realy gone off Nathan, i think he is gonna drop Robbie by the wayside, he had better look closer to home with Alex, or maybe Tom i would love if they got back together, hurry up and get rid of Nathan. -
I have read this story before on another site, wont spoil it i just look fwd to reading it again.
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The world is full of dog shite, Adam has thank god just got rid of a large amount of it.
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Teddy Haner to the E.R! Teddy Haner to the E.R!
bubby1234 commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Teddy Haner to the E.R! Teddy Haner to the E.R!
Whats gone wrong here, why is this chapter being posted at the of june, already read it along with all the chapter that came after, totaly confused here -
Beautful story, i blubbed all the through, thank you so much.
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I just love this story, it has to be your best so far, but i know you (sigh) i know the hammer is gonna fall on Artie and Dizzy, i pray that you keep them together all the way through the story as i am one hopeless romantic and a complete monogamist, i also want Kye to meet a dream boy of his own, i never have and i am 65 now so too late for me so i live my life through the storys i read, i realy do fall in love with the guys , daft i know but there it is, thank you for giving me a little happiness in my life.
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And what if he chooses the capt of the new baseball team eh, think about that one.
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The Boyfriend, The Girlfriend, The Brother
bubby1234 commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Boyfriend, The Girlfriend, The Brother
Please dont break up nick and billy, ok maybe a little bit of drama would be cool but please dont break them up, and find Noah a beautiful boyfriend -
Some standards are set lower it would seem, but at the end of the day it is your story line to do with what you will.
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I was certain that they would never cheat on each other but it would seem that they are both not commited to each other 100%, i dont think getting married is a good idear if they both want to play around with other guys, i despise cheating in any form and that includes group sex sessions i am so diapointed in them both, this chapter has ruined what i thought was a good series of storys, sad sad sad.
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Dizzy my head is spining like a wirlpool it never ends🏳️🌈
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Riley you bloody idiot, flush that stinking crap down the toilet.
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I new it i just new it, fantastic i love the way this story is going, i hope that they find the evil swine that has been abusing them and that no long term damage has been done to the boys or their sister.
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I am sorry to say that the way this is going is not my cup of tea as it were, i am going to have to stop reading this, i am a romantic and this story for me is going down the drain, still very good writing but not for me anymore sorry ace.
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I am getting my row boat dusted down and oiled up so be afraid be very afraid, i just knew that Brandon would muddy the waters dam him, Ryder is going to need so much love and support from Teddy and his family (not from that Brandon guy) . Your writing is so good you bring your characters to life in your readers eyes, only a born writer can do this, this is without doubt your best story so far, when you bring drama to one of your characters it hurts all of us (more kleenex dam you), you should buy shares in the company, so keep up the good work and keep the chapters comming.
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That has to be one of the best chapters of any story i have read on this site, i am fully aware that it is just that a story with fiction charecters but i have fallen in love with Teddy and Ryder please dont let anything happen to them or there love for each other other wise i will have to get my boat out and row over the big old pond and have a few words with you (lol), keep up the excellent work.
