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  1. bubby1234

    How We Met

    Nice first chapter,just a thought but do you think that Liebestraum by Liszt would have been a better choice for him to play to his new boyfriend.
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    Chapter 26

    All the folks below have stolen my thunder,JUST EPIC.
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    Chapter 13

    I have got no more tears in me after that,i know how he feels,i lost my mom when i was 18,i am 64 know and it still hurts.
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    Chapter 12

    only just started to read this beautiful story,i have blubbed all the way through chapter 12,i am a hopeless romantic and i am now in my sixties,i have been looking for my jesse for 50 years but never even came close,too late now for me,i wish the world was a better place for the Stevens and jesse's of this world,maybe one day,anyway i thank you for this beautiful piece of writing. John.
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    Chapter 19

    Hmmm,i just wonder if Austin just happens to ride a white horse,i realy hope he does,Austin is suddenly my favorite charactor,i think he will be easy to fall in love with, especially Zac i think (i hope)
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    Chapter 23

    Lily,hehehe is a trade mark,it has to be there or it would not be a comsie story.
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    Chapter 3

    What i dont understand here is WHY does his mother not see any of this,a mother should know thing are not ok with her son,she cannot be so blind,teachers at school should be picking up on this,this man had better get his comeuppance pretty soon because this story is getting so hard to read anymore, i find it painful to keep reading,i like happy romantic story's,a little bit of angst is fine but this is taking things just too far commie,lets have some light please because the dark is getting too much.
  8. Hey,i think your writing is very good,i am a little confused about this story line and as to where its going,i assumed that the plot was that he would end up in a relationship with Eli but it would appear that Jayden is in the running to be his boyfriend so i dont understand where Eli fits in.
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    Chapter 4

    this story is starting to look good,keep up the good work,nice writing style. John (England.)
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    Chapter 2

    confused,who are papu and oma and the uncles ??
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    Chapter 16

    I am sorry all you guys,but i am FULLY on Zac and Adrian's side,zac is in love with Adrian and Adrian is in love with Zac,people have to realize that being gay to a black guy is a lot harder than for a white guy,black guys in general have this huge macho thing going on,also knowing that there parents would not take kindly to a white guy being in love with their son it is 100 times harder for Adrian to come out knowing how much of a hornets nest that would srir up,i feel so sorry for both of them and hope with all my heart that they do get together,they are meant to be together forever,love will win in the end (i hope).
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    Raw Deal

    Poor Brett,i feel so sorry for him,i now understand why he doesn't like Dustin,i never expected Billy to cheat on him,i have lost all respect for billy now,i hate cheaters,always have always will,they are despicable.
  13. i have to say that i dont see the point of this story,i have tried but i am outa here.sorry but it just keeps going around in silly circles,if someone treated me like that they would NEVER see me ever again.
  14. Cool chapter carlos,so pleased that CJ is finally starting to show his real feelings for Owen,those two had better end up married or i'm coming to getcha LOL.
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    Chapter 27

    Oh dear,i think the title of the story says it all,jason is gonna be with another guy in the club.
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    Chapter 1

    I have an open mind atm,lets see where this goes,sometimes same old same old is good
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    Eli the Mentor

    Me thinks he will end up with Eli (or Jayden)
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    Chapter 9

    I love this story,tackling two major taboo's at one time,i am a very touchy feely kind of guy and dont have ANY personal space problems,i do not have any race problems at all,i like folks for who they are not the colour of there skin,its peoples attitude that gets my back up,i realy hope that Zac and Adrian end up together and are accepted by their peers and familys,i also thins that Kenny doth shout too loud and is trying to protect himself from his dad finding out he is gay,he also has a big crush on Zac or Adrian me thinks. John. (UK).
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    Dinner with Gran

    Any story that keeps me smiling all the way through must be good,keep it up,10/10 so far. John.
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    The Promise

    I realy do hope that CJ and Owen get together as more than fuck buddies,and i realy hope that CJ doesn't start turning into a sluty type of guy,doesn't want to sleep with Owen but quite happy to go with total strangers,sorry but i am the type that thinks sex should have emotion in the mix,just me i suppose,it make me sad that cj offerd to have sex with the brit guys in front of Owen,if i was Owen i would have been very upset with CJ,I just hate the world putting ALL gay guys into the stereo typical i'dear that they will have sex any time any where with any guy that offers.
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    Chet

    There is the prospect that this is gonna be a good story,i hope that there is not too much darkness involved,lots of love and romance is my style,here's hoping
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    Showtime!

    Looking good so far.please please please make it work for these too boys this time,no more guns no more death,romance romance romance,its the only way my friend.
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    Fairview

    Just beautiful,
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    An average day

    I think you need to get yourself an editor,a lot of your sentences just dont make any sense ,i dont think you are a native English speaker,.see if you can find someone to help with your phrases. the story seems like it could be a good plot.
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    New Brothers

    Thank you for doing this story,i just love 18 weeks.
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