Jeff Burton

I'm resurrecting these comments from the past, moved this to the top of my 'to-read' list which is really the alt tab binge i do when I'm supposed to be writing. I have a feeling I'm going to like this one, a lot. Thanks for pointing it out to me @Valkyrie

Actually it's been such a busy week I'm laying here like a beached whale reading lmao. I'm sure part of me is working on it somewhere but the rest of me? pffft.

Talk about reach out and touch someone. I'll be back to posting normally this week. My end of month, beginning of month is always little busy so yeah. We'll be back to this soon.

Uh oh someones bringing out the big guns.

Can we just use Daddy's money to make Dave disappear? I mean I'm not a fan of violence but if it happens, I promise I won't notice. Great job on this story, I'm invested.

This is a well written, adorably cute, mystical modern day fantasy, with one hell of a mystery built into it. I definitely recommend this to anyone who needs a different kind of bender to indulge on.

Hi, this is me randomly poking around stories. The ending was so damn cute, and the story overall was a great read.

This story is uncomfortable, and it's very hard to read but I feel it serves as a warning to the venerable who aren't aware, and it's a warning that needs to be heard. The story itself is very well written, with may layers, but it'll leave a bad taste in your mouth. And it should, just for the simple fact some things shouldn't be kept secret.

Yeah this was creepy as hell great job. If you can make me yell "WHEN YOUR FRIEND SAYS ITS TIME TO GO JUST @#$%ING GO!" you did your job as an author lmao.

This is actually a pretty unique take on the typical "crush story," and this is anything but typical. It's well written, the protagonist is layered beautifully, with frightening detail. Definitely worth the read.

Well absolutely no idea on the author, but great job on the character. The dude is probably psychotic. The crazy part is, he probably won't even get caught until the twenty-seventh mysterious death, because he's so methodical about it. The ability to feel empathy towards his friends in the way he does and ... totally not really says something. Good friggen job, I totally didn't expect that lol.

Damn, rest in peace Ozzy. Thanks for No More Tears my absolute, favorite, never skip when it comes up, song.

This makes me all warm and fuzzy inside.

@Thirdly I swear, reading your comments is almost as entertaining as the story themselves lol.

You sir are channeling Lex with this comment and I'm dying 😂

Oh so detailed. I love details. First of all you are absolutely correct, about all of it. Throwing kisses and grabbing ass is so....dangerous, especially when your confused. This chapter was supposed to go a different way, but Ryan's emotional immaturely either made me remember something, or it was my subconscious say 'hey...isn't he acting like so-and-so back when YOU were in high school?' and that might have made the river shift to the left for a couple of chapters. Madison is like watered down lemonade. You know that nasty kind that has artificial zero sugar sweetness in it. Yeah she needs to step it up. lol I think she's off her game right now because she can tell somethings wrong and she doesn't know how she feels about it. And yes, I'm still low key scared of you.

It'll be coming soon. I'm going to write at least the next 3 chapters before posting 'em.

This made my eyes leak like the upper radiator hose in my car I really should change. Great job, SA

But yeah. sometimes I do fall in love with the background B characters. So buyer beware it could happen in a future story lol.

lmao. I either outed myself or just spoiled something. But I could force whoever to be with whoever they end up with just to spite everyone. Dude in Jacob's Advocate I was totally Team Travis. So Team Travis in fact that Jacob almost died in that story lmao. God I'm a horrible person. In Just Maybe as much as I love Luca, I can't deny Jordan. Jamie and Jordan did have that moment at brunch and don't get me wrong Luca is great too, but if Jamie had ended up with Jordan it would have been a totally different story. Jordan is probably going to end up with his own story at some point. Life in Suspension is about the only match that I don't have questions about. I actually love Nathan & Corey to death and I will come back to that story at some point, I'm totally biased sometimes. Some character matches work better in my head then what I actually write. So yeah I do have favorites that aren't what actually happens. It's crazy I know but it is what it is lol.

Yeah I have that effect on people. It's a gift? 😂 Yeah I am actually. I'm also secretly team Ryan so I'm sure Skyler is going to break that 4th wall again when I think he's doing the wrong thing.

I've lost count, but I think I may have nailed down 2 or 3.

This is both hilarious, tragic, and devastatingly beautiful.

I GOT YOU NOW BUDDY! YOU CAN'T HIDE YOUR IDENTITY FROM ME! I am. Absolutely. Triggered. Right. Now. I will recover from this.

That actually is one of my own tropes you see in my work, you see it heavily in Just Maybe, the whole being seen for who you really are bit.