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Being stoned did not stop them from coming up with a plan or at least agreement to help Nic. I loved how Joey cock blocked Jake and Nic And now Shiv has taken Meg's phone and forced a confession out of Nic. He admits to fucking Jake for a while. She thinks he is accepting a friend. He denies it. They are off to find Jake at the rugby field and give the phone to Jake to crack open and find a way to embarrass Med. They hope to get the phone back so she won't know it has been stolen Untested? Complicated? A key thing like the phone code is not known. What is on the phone that can be used to hurt Meg? Have they been discovered? Is there a trail on the cameras so Shiv and others could be identified? I agree the plan could fail. Ever heard of Murphy's Law--If anything cam go wrong, it will. The guys and Shiv need to be flexible and not give up. The chapter is called Plan A--It implies there is at least a Plan B. I am looking forward to the next chapter and a possibility of hot sex when a plan succeeds and wounds Meg
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BTW--I hope the many photos Taylor took of Jay stay private and do not leak out. Taylor would not reveal the photos on purpose and he knows sending too many photos can be dangerous. So far he has only send nude pics to his girl friend. If he shows Jay's pics to someone , they might not stay secret. And then, will the creepy photographer keep his photos secret. They could be worth big bucks.
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How about publishing a select selection of the hot pics in the next chapter so we all can judge for ourselves ? It is only fair.
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Ups and Downs --highs and lows--no matter what they are great together-it's love and great , fulfilling sex--mmm-Who cannot enjoy reading about them ?
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Won't Will have to stay with Brad in the Santa Cruz house and help him recover from taking crystal meth ? Isn't the come down severe? Will is going to be needed to be the mature, comforting son. He is up to it. Brad needs his support as he withdraws and talks about his Jake problems.
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Wow, Will is doing an intervention on his dad. Will cares deeply about him and worked like Sherlock Holmes to sift clues to find Brad. Brad lost himself with a hot twink and meth for a long time of real passion and with one broken condom. Will saved his Rolex from being stolen by the guy. Brad needs a blood test. Unfortunately, the twink did not seem worried about using condoms. Like Will thought--Brad is having troubles with Jake, They are getting divorced. Something has happened. Next chapter we should be finding out why a divorce is the option. Will will find out Brad's version first. Will should help him work through their issues and maybe see if he can play mediator with Brad and Jake, Or he can find a better intermediary. Will is growing and maturing. He is taking responsibility and wants to help his dad heal.
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I think Finn would be a careful, considerate, non-judgmental caregiver, friend and lover for Alec if he moved back. He could help Alec get much better and clearly wants the best for him. Alec could openly talk about his therapist and medicine. Alec could avoid his mother --as long as she is living-and dad so he would not have to relive his old family life. He would have a better family--Finn's. As discussed by others. Alec could work long distance and keep up and retain the progress and success he earned.
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OK, Alec stop over thinking and hesitating. Go see Finn tomorrow. He wants you and a second chance. Do not hold back. Speak your mind. Let Finn say his piece. Have the sex you have avoided and then see if you can say you will leave knowing you experienced it all. Forget your mother and broken dad. They will only bring you down. Can you replace your inner voice to sound like Finn and not like your mother's
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I think Will wants Harvard for a reason ( not Stanford, highest academic quality, staying away from home and Brad's interference, etc). He most likely will stay and endure the cold but leave for warmer climes when he can. Having Patrick nearby is a plus. I do not seeing Stef or JP suggesting Will leave Harvard after he starts and are anticipating seeing and helping him grow academically and otherwise. Will is a prime candidate to intern in the new NY venture capital office and be connected to Patrick if they stay an item. It is an open question, if will could attend grad school after his negative impression of the impact on Wade and Matt.
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You have not mentioned Northman having any interest in the people or culture of Mexico or taking a vacation inside Mexico. CJ and Owen really are trying to get immersed in Mexico and love all their explorations and the people they meet. Could this be one more dimension --of many-of the dislike Northman has for CJ rocking and upsetting his orderly world.? He cannot fathom why CJ is becoming so attached and devoting time on activities and trips touring Mexico City and other parts of the country. There has been no mention of Northman speaking Spanish or even of any interesting place or restaurant he has visited outside the embassy Northman could be the type of person who works in Mexico but is not interested in living in Mexico. He could see his posting as one other assignment and expects to be transferred to another one every few years with trips back to DC in State Department assignments. He is focused on his job and what is required 8 hours a day at his desk. Above all, Northman would agree with the bureaucrat's motto : do not volunteer. He could see he is getting his ticket punched ( and do the required steps) by working outside the US in order to be eligible for a promotion in due course. As CJ clearly becomes known to be on a fast track for promotion, Northman cannot see why his outside activities along with actual love for the country and its people matter. Only doing your job, narrowly defined, matters.
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Thanks for including Ukraine. It is a tragedy of untold proportions. Only in hindsight did it seem war would happen as Putin promised but no one believed. My guess is that CJ and others will face a huge surprise, a big event. They will need to be flexible. The ending of his tour will be a defining moment in his career to date. When Harold Macmillan became Britain's prime minister, he was asked what would determine his government's course. He replied with Edwardian languor: "Events, dear boy, events."
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I join and say Northman probably is not intentionally involved. He is mad at CJ but clueless. I do think he could be played by a real opponent without intending to really harm CJ--just take him down a peg in other people's eyes. I somehow think the mess is due to CJ's help pushing and then getting the senior Russian spy out of Mexico. It could be the replacement spy's task to pay back CJ. I am only guessing. We know Putin is not forgiving. Whatever happens, CJ is not at fault and is not blamed and his career is not held back. So, he most likely is the victim and he and his family have to leave early in order to be safe.
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Three things: Thanks for an upbeat, feel-good chapter where Maddox and Jonathan are working things out--perhaps for the long term You ended the chapter with hope and no cliff hanger. Maddox and Jonathan are planning a hot weekend. Maddox has to get Jonathan to fuck him to take their commitment to a new level. Finally, I note Drew keeps coming up. If there is any justice in the world, Drew will get his comeuppance. Maybe, Maddox or Rusty can investigate and mess him up or find a way to show he is the bad guy. I bet Drew is carrying on his evil ways and can be revealed.
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Chapter 13: Vexatious Victory
scrubber6620 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 13: Vexatious Victory
Good Job! To get powerful alphas with huge egos to work together when they just met and agree on a plan should beyond terribly difficult. The advantages all went with Cyrus in the defense. He picked the teams and included Kaplan in the offense which should have destabilized them. Was he a spy? Was he strong enough? Cyrus is clearly THE leader so he could impose order and a plan he already devised in advance for the defense. The offense had multiple leaders. Finally, the US Army wants the offense as a minimum to have three times the combat power of the defense ( which always has the advantages) to win. The teams were equally divided so the offense could not rely on overwhelming brute force and needed to use trickery, deception and feints and emotional psychological warfare. Vincent's team played masterfully . Kaplan was the big hero. There were ups and down with periods of uncertainty but the offense won. Kaplan sacrificed himself as a distraction and as the main body to be painfully hurt. His ruse worked and I expect his credibility among the packs will significantly increase. He will be known as more than the boyfriend. Cyrus and Kaplan wonderfully connected at the end in their animal images. I am interested in seeing tomorrow what Vincent has in mind to defeat the bastard alpha who hates Caleb. Others want to fight Vincent without hating him. Vincent should be winning respect by being so open. -
Life is never a bed of roses for Jonathan and Maddox, They keep having ups and downs. But, they are getting closer and physically enchanting each other and better communicating. Maddox said the 30 day limit is off and they are boyfriends without a time limit. Jonathan liked this but kept returning to thinking about Drew and comparing him to Maddox. Jonthan is coming over on the weekend for terrific sex. Maddox is trying to find ways to entice Jonathan to fuck him. He should finally realize he has to clearly ask. Jonathan can't fathom Maddox wants to be the bottom. I think when he fucks Maddox he will finally see Maddox really wants him and is willing to share and is not Drew in any way. BTW. Maddox better check him room for a cam or two in case Rusty cannot trying to find out how they are having great sex. Maddox's intervention with Rusty was partially successful. Rusty does not feel connected to a girl ( just the orgasm ?) so he agrees to pace himself for one girl every three days. We learn his dick is called the Mighty Thor. Apparently, it was named that by a girl and he liked it. Neither Maddox nor Jonathan have named their dick, They are not being controlled by their dick like Rusty indicates he is. Let us hope Jonathan fucks Maddox this weekend. Maddox is going to need lots of lube because he has an untested tight ass.
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What a delightful story that shows CJ is well regarded by nearly all and is clearly on his way for better things with the State Department and elsewhere. The newspaper story should make CJ, Owen and even Liebe shine and be very personable and approachable. Cj ever the diplomat had a nice quote about Northman. He must have been seething about CJ's interview. BTW, there is no way Lieve won't be a smart, appealing, congenial person like her parents. She just can't be a bimbo.
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It's probably Jay's fault that lots of guys --not just the few kinky ones-are asking for pics of Loren's feet. He has forbidden Loren to bare his upper body and to display anything mildly suggestive. So guys might ask Loren to show something not normally considered sexual to push the boundaries. When something is forbidden. it can be desired more. In Victorian England ladies could not reveal any uncovered body part. Showing a bare ankle as when a long dress rode up when moving or walking was considered suggestive
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Tonyr wanted the Jay-Loren sex tape for his grad studies maybe to see what vanilla is. Mrsgnomie mentioned that if could be for Ph D is Jays sexual activities. I love all these high minded assertions which of course just might be true Or, maybe the motive is not altruistic, I bet the tape could be auctioned off for a fortune--even without adding clothing-lol.
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Just a minor point to reflect a Wisconsin staple--Jay's dad grilled meat for them. Any cookout would have included Bratwurst being grilled among other things and they would have been a proud topic for discussion. Jay and Loren should likely have been asked how they enjoyed them.
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Actually, I was just thinking Jay might shock Loren with a brief time sucking a few toes or licking one sole or both, just to shake things up. It would be a joke. Saying something like, if you want kinky and then stop knowing Loren would be taken aback and then both could laugh it off. But, then if Loren likes it......
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I would like to add my support to Pickalane's request to view perhaps the OnlyJay site so I can decide for myself if they only had vanilla sex "Mostly, I would like to watch the Jay and Loren sex tape. Strictly professionally. To judge if their boring sex is porn worthy. " Then maybe I can see if they fit the oldest coffee slogan--good to the last drop.
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Loren gets and learns about the full unvarnished family. He successfully plays Tom Sawyer to the brothers and gets them to do more than expected, Loren keeps from being buried under the porch as he fears and is told about the rivalry among the brothers with Jay always winning without him knowing it is a contest. They tell Loren the parents want his favor so Jay and he will move back. It is a topic for a much later discussion. Loren worked in the kitchen with Jay's mother. After he learned of the uniqueness of this deal, he brought the fiancés into the kitchen. Loren has a good heart, I enjoyed the trope about vanilla vs kinky. Jay protests to Loren and his brothers that Loren and he have had kinky sex. Loren objects. He said he has had lots of kinky sex before Jay and what great sex they have is not kinky. He then privately tells Jay their intense vanilla sex is what he wants and needs. Jay is in love with having traditional sex with his muscled bottom. I love Loren telling Jay he doesn't have a pay OnlyFans site--just an OnlyJay site with one user. I think still Jay should shock Loren and pay attention to his feet since guys ask Loren for feet pics and it is safe kinky option. So, the trip was not a disaster. Both Jay and Loren learned more about each other. They are going to miss being apart.
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This was a much better arrival than I expected. No open conflicts or accusations. The Kardoval showed up and were put off balance and realized they had lost control of the situation. First point in this game goes to Essell, Garjah and Ases. Ases was masterful and a seasoned diplomat. There are many more innings to go in the game of setting a new policy.. The Kardoval will regroup and try to find a way to save face and stay in control. So far, they are not able to stop the contact with other planets. Our guys probably need to spend time meeting the people to get them behind a policy of openness and realizing there are benefits from this approach. They need to know it is futile to hide, I always love seeing Bouncer playing the role of a protector. No one wants to cross him.
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Played like a blitz on third down
scrubber6620 commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Played like a blitz on third down
Full disclosure because I feel like you mid-westerners could get very angry if I don’t do your beloved state justice. Dear MrsGnomie Some get very touchy also if you say disparaging remarks about the Packers, Badgers and UW-Madison Marching Band. I lived in Madison going to grad school and loved the state. I am sure you do not mean to express any ill will and only use your creative license.- 96 comments
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Played like a blitz on third down
scrubber6620 commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Played like a blitz on third down
OK, Author Lady you said mentioning Lars 'motivation : "Interesting take on Lars. It’s hard not to comment but I don’t want to give anything away." I could suggest options but that would be futile. You have the pen and the next path in mind. I do feel they have to meet to finally end a chapter and clear the air--even if they never see each other again. Loren is not now the lost, rejected boy who seemed to always be much less than Lars. Loren is amazingly successful. Does Lars want to know what happened to Lars and what his parents told him was wrong? Does he feel any responsibility for Loren's treatment as a child? Has Lars gone through therapy and been told to find Loren? Loren is not going to push a meeting and his friends did not seem interested in following up on the license plate. Does Lars really want to meet him? He is going to need to act first. How will he meet Loren? Will he bring his girl friend hope Jay is with Loren? Maybe, Lars might send a note someway or hand deliver it to Jay or a member of Loren's team when they are on a promo or filming and have told the fans. He could ask to see Loren if Loren was open.- 96 comments
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