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I am fascinated by the close secret relationship between West and Neil. They are two opposites with basketball and sex and the gang problems uniting them. West wants them to be much closer. Their sexual chemistry is amazing. The basketball contest was glorious and allowed them to enjoy each other mercilessly. Neil shows he is very strong and able to rise above his past corruptions and stop following the evil demands placed on him. He knows right from wrong. He does his best to hold off West from getting involved but West is drawn to him like a moth to a flame. He wants sex with Neil seemingly relentlessly and has hidden his desires, it seems. Neil is in control for now in their budding relationship and he is being considerate and helpful. Events and scandals --maybe gang, more drug and sex -might well shake his disciplined approach. This world is going to get messy fast, I bet

Two major insights/developments: Garjah has changed and the type of landing/introduction is at issue. Essell and Garjah realize their bonding has modified Garjah more than physically and emotionally. He has become wiser, more flexible in dealing with others and more than a narrow head of planet security. The Kardoval may fear his new strength and skills . He is not a traitor and wants his planet and people to adapt to the worlds around them and not remain dangerously isolated How will they land ? Can the ambassador use his ship/multiplex tool to broadcast his arrival planet wide or will they return in secret and have to plan a public notice later? They need to talk with the ambassador and tell him the truth. He is a shifter. He can hide, if needed Garjah and Essell need to find out more about their bond. Is Bouncer part of it, too? Maybe, Timok can tell they what he knows about their bond.

What an intense, hard d fought basketball game between West and Neil. The sexual overtones were awesome and the crows loved all the action. West won and Neil took the loss gracefully. Jorge cemented his presence with West's family and the basketball fans and coaches. West tried to get Neil to visit his house for sex. So Far, Neil is resisting. West's mother wants him to invite some of the guys from the other high school over. Justin was a disaster waiting to happen. His parents came into the locker room to berate him and push him into a church program. They don't know what his underlying problems are. He has been acting strange--like falling asleep during a sermon. Neil's group enters the locker room and identifies Justin's problem--he is withdrawing from taking drugs. Harsh, unkind, insensitive words spoken are by Justin's parents are very shocking. Neil's group makes shocking comments , too. An ambulance is called and Neil takes care of Justin in thjemeantime. He is one of the few present who has experience with withdrawal, I bet This all ends with the situation now more perilous and Neil and West know more has to be done. The problems are out front. I found these comment showing the way from now on---- "Things were starting to hit a lot closer to home, and they could no longer go at their own pace anymore." The next steps will be very dangerous and the serious pressure might even push Neil and West to have lots more sex.

Any harm to Will from any sex tape? I hope any such tape will not be widely viewed since he is not well known and is a private figure--that also assumes the fucking is not so impressive that it becomes popular with a large audience. Ok , others see he is going to be immune or might even be laid more. Paris Hilton just got more notoriety and fame which she wanted and lost her inheritance until her grandfather later decided later she changed and was now acting in a way that did not hurt the family name. She was attending the fashion events and parties with Will, JJ and others so she was not hurt. I could think of possible ways he could be harmed by public exposure but they are remote and speculative at this point in time. I assume he will not want to be nominated for a high government post in later life or will never face a trial on a sex related charge. I can see Will laughing any sex tape off and moving on with his life. He is a very open and honest person.

They survived the camping trip and the van was sold for a fortune when the bidders thought they had sex in it. Imagine what Loren would get if and when he sells other very personal things--like intimate clothes--lol What a riotous preparation and eventual sex scene. They both wanted it. Jay had to be so dedicated that he accepted such a butt plug and nasty enema process and a long tortured , painful path to bliss. Loren really took good care of Jay when they made love. Jay learned he was a bottom. Imagine that! The ending trauma of the rock climbing accident and Jay only finding out by accident in Mexico is terrible. Loren has bad cell phone reception and could not tell Jay of his problem and how serious it is. Jay is distraught and likely worrying more and more and very anxious. This accident is another defining moment in their relationship. How will each react or over-react when they meet?

You realize Dustin is going to be very pissed off at Will. He might want revenge with the help of his viewing/recording friends. I can see a Paris Hilton type graphic sex tape featuring Will fucking Dustin. It could run wild on social media. What would be the impact?

I admire Karl's resolve and unwillingness to give up during wartime. He is in a foreign land and only imperfectly speaking and communicating. He keeps on trying to relate to people. This time has found a way to reach Arthur by playing chess. He learned more about Arthur and his relationships. Arthur was an odd child who had only one friend, Paul. I do not think Karl wants Arthur to be a close friend now. I bet Karl wants to better understand his connections to George and the Hopkins and to what he is doing learning to fight as a pilot. Arthus is letting him know he has to be fully committed to fighting and being his best,

How could this not be f---d up?. Both guys cannot understand each other , have different sexual lessons from their past have different assumptions about their relationship and will not discuss their issues and realize what they really are and friends get in the way more often than not. The chapter ends with a break up and a heated exchange with words that should not have been said. Jonathan thought he was going to tell Maddox that they should stop. Instead when he finally reached Maddox, it was Maddox who initiated the breakup statement and got heated. After a wonderful sexual event, they fell apart and totally misunderstood each other. Maddox thinks he is starting a long time relationship and only needs to have real sex with Jonathan to cement it. While Jonathan thinks sex will be a one time or at least no more than a month long trial and he will move on. Come on, Maddox is the king of hookups and he is just another one to Maddox who says things to partners ( without meaning it) that sound serious until they aren't. We finally learn what Jonathan's trouble past is and why he is untethered to his family. They did not believe him when Drew blamed him for drug and sexual problems. Drew is a bastard and cannot hide his true nature forever. I bet he will repeat his behavior and get involved in more sex and drug scandals when at college or around town. Jonathan's parents are going to need to see proof that Drew was lying about himself . But, then this is a hope and it may not happen so the family may stay split. I do not how meeting and talking without evidence will bring a healthy resolution. As for Jonathan and Maddox, they are broken. I bet something new has to happen to start getting them together and in sync.I could guess what will cause a change-new friend conversation, more personal analysis, Xpress article, etc-but it would be futile. I will be waiting with concern and interest to see what is written next.

Welcome back--You are my favorite writer on here. Your two series are amazing and fully interesting. You have a great range from the past to the present--almost-and textured, creative streak. You develop very interesting characters who face powerful challenges. I want to know more about them. I am glad to find out you have returned to the living and hopefully any problems you faced are resolved in your favor. Will lives a fabulous, fun and bold life. He is taking great advantage of his gap experience. What a temper ! His opinions matter to him and he stands by them. What intense safe sex with two guys! I appreciate learning how he is growing and deciding what matters to him about guys and sex. He is maturing and is getting ready for Harvard and meeting other guys. Stef and he are good, reinforcing sounding boards. This time his dad was not a major impediment. Will is sowing his wild oats now. I do hope his backroom sex which was recorded does not come back to haunt him. Soon we should be finding out how Patrick is helped and what he will do.

Well , he has faced one of his three demons ( his dad) and is on the way to meeting the second, his former boyfriend. Alec decided he came for closure. He needed River to keep him sane and at peace and on track His visit with his dad was painful and insightful and gave him what he thought was closure and an ending. “please. I don't want this to be a fight.” Said the Dad “maybe I do. I kept quiet my entire childhood. How do you make peace with the fact that you did nothing for me? Did erasing me from your narrative make you feel better about yourselves? God, you two are incredible!” Will he see his Mother, the third demon ? I expect he finally will decide to see her, but the path will be rough and hurtful and anxiety filled. The chapter ends as we expect he will see his former boy friend by mistake and the connection will likely be the subject of great gossip. Will they talk or will someone flee the bar first? How will Alec cope?

I appreciated the Owensville focus of this chapter. It allowed a deeper discussion of the challenges facing one set of characters. Dirk has become deeply lost from his pack and his bear. He was too wracked with guilt and pain and his bear left him. We do not know if his bear will return. Dirk was on a self-destructive path. He has to deal still with the guilt from killing his destined mate and lost his bear. Will he crack or bounce back? Vincent's surprising visit with the gods has messed up his world and understanding. He was seeking to help Dirk recover from killing his mate. He thought it was wrong for such a result from a destined pair. Vincent found out that bad things can happen. Dirk's and his destinty are not decided. They , it seems, have to play their part going forward and be ready for new challenges. Will Vincent's meetings with the gods help Dirk better cope ? Will Vincent have new reasons to talk with Mason about his possible EC service--even if done on a part-time basis? He has to be better prepared to face his mortal enemy and EC service could strengthen him.

What fun they have! CJ is widely popular --not counting a new PA who was relentlessly harassed with short jokes. I did not like hearing that the CIA is leaking that CJ and Owen were involved in the spy's disappearance. Both the NY Times and Wash Post are or will have stories to that effect. This was supposed to be secret. Hey, even Chipper thought CJ was a spy. The CIA has an agenda unknown to the two and they could be set up in Mexico City to be bait or innocent pawns in trouble in a great power struggle. Helping a friend, Spike, is no assurance that your best interests are being looked after when higher level officials who do not care about you can control your future.

I did not see this turn of events. I hoped the locals did what Mithras did in time and the ship inhabitants lost contact and left for Earth. Instead, the ancient computer virus taken up by the new ship reacted silently to destroy the new ship. Mithras was not involved in its impending self-destruction. I can picture some of the new ship crew making it to the planet and have the possible choice of forming a new city--if they can unlearn all what they know and assume that Mithras will be their new master and will have to be worshipped. Will they believe any planet residents who seem out of touch and outdated and accept a mythical ruler? No new help will arrive? The latest arrivals have no hope for outside help. They have to make do. The beacon has been destroyed.

Mrsgnomie said The last thing he wants is for this very fragile thing that has him so exposed to be broken in front of millions of people. Being with Jay is like a fresh skin graft, you have to be gentle about the exposure. Great explanation--plus the blow jobs are fabulous !

This story is well written and nuanced. There are no heavy, awkward blows--only slow realizations and imperfect compromises between two people who love each other in a new deep relationship. They are just learning to walk. As I am thinking about it, I should have read about huge blow ups since they both have controlling egos and definite ideas of what is right behavior. Loren is going out of his way to change when he accepts what he needs to do. Jay does not see the hypocrisy of his worries since he exposes himself to danger and injury at games. He should let Loren be himself. He also is doing what he a has done before. I guess travelling to Pamplona to be chased by the bulls is not in the cards now? The pics would have been exciting. I do think having an audience of fans around you so much who are not close friends has to complicate things. Is this what William and Kate go through when making a royal tour? Luckily ( so far) no one is trying to get pics of their sex life or naked bodies? Gosh, if Jay and Loren have a blow up it over the upcoming rock climbing it will be all over the Internet I hope a solution can be found so they both feel good.

I love the insights from others so far. I am late to reading this chapter. I have been to Seattle down to Yosemite so part of this is this is familiar territory to me. That drive is long and gives you time to think and talk. The sex is great and real and fresh for new full-time lovers. Hooray! The crowds did not cause huge problems like I thought they would. But we fans do find one point which causes friction on the trip. They stand apart but not explode and want to still be a couple. The old Loren would explode. Jay had changed from being a golden retriever to a bit ( not full scale, though) of an over protective pit bull who only deeply loves his immediate family. They have things to work out. They need to keep on speaking and having great sex. Sex is a wonderful solvent. I assume the upcoming rock climb with surprise visitors is going to re-ignite a controversy and place Loren in danger from climbing. Can Loren find a solution? Can one of the surprise visitors talk sense to Jay? I hope the both realize each has to give and understand their concerns.

So Ases passed his further trust building experiences. What a miraculous device which still could be more than it seems--especially with an overprotective father worrying about Ases, his son. Essell and Garjah seem to be sexually excited being this close on a home ship. I love knowing Bouncer gets a bit jealous when they hug and seem very romantic. So Ases will need a real tour of the ship and then hopefully a straight talk about the realities on Garjah's home planet.

This was Collin's day to admire and enjoy . He was so taken with the architecture. Both openly displayed their love for each other and got perhaps too many ideas for the club. They should return home so pleased

Wow, this is a new story dynamic ! Those who took part in the sacrifice and lived are now joined with two spirits and others on a mission from Mithras. They must find and remove a device and travel to a lava place and destroy that device from the original ship. This action is so foreign to them , but they must succeed to save Mithras and stop another ship from finding them. It appears to be a race against time. Will the people on the planet act fast enough to protect Mithras and escape detection? If not, what will the people on the mostly automated ship ( a great danger to Mithras) do? From the story heading, Buck Rogers and crew make it back to earth with knowledge of the planet but recommend it not be exploited. The higher council questions this limited usage of the planet.

Damn--25 orgasms ! They are on a roll--sexually, romantically, professionally. They are glowing and so happy. No clouds on the horizon yet foreseen. What a terrific touch to add real life reviewers to the story as people figure out who the couple is. Jay wants to be with Loren and do what he does. The camping trip is going to be fun but I hope some crazies don't show up Loved the sex and the joy they are finding in each other. They are very compatible. Coming out will not hurt them, it seems.

I hope when Alec and River arrive things do not go haywire right away when he meets his mother and father in the hospital. Why is his father seeking his presence after all this time? Does he desire to apologize to him ? I hope his father is not seeking his presence due to his wife's urging and not his remorseful feelings for his uncaring treatment of him. I also hope she is unable to talk. I can envision her using guilt and trying one last time to urge Alec to see the error of his sexual lifestyle for her before she dies. Her pleas will tear Alec up. Alec has been torn up by his breakup with Finn. He has not been able to have a meaningful relationship with another guy for the last 10 years. Can this trip bring him peace of mind ? Will it end with him worse off? Finn after probably some difficulties and Alec meeting might bring about a resolution and clear the air. Finn has realized he is also at fault. His last message which Phillippe and others noticed and Alec did not said--- I wish we didn't ruin it.

So far Mithras is keeping the planet hidden from the modern day explorers. The sensors in probes stop working. We know Mithras doe not want them to land and touch something. The new tech could be powerful enough to override Mithras' wishes. The people on the planet d not know about the upcoming earth ship. I expect if the ship arrives, the residents might be alerted by Mithras. Both sides will be shocked by each other. Will Mithras let people land and will she kill them eventually like she did with letting many of the original settlers die ? How will the arrival effect the ritual before, during or after?

This situation we learn after his father calls is not good and dysfunctional. So much is ignored or suppressed over time. Alec needs prescription drugs to cope. However, Alec is doing well financially, if not emotionally. He cannot connect with a boyfriend. He hates the idea of going home and revisiting his painful past Going back home after 10 years is going to open old, very painful wounds with his mother and Finn. Alec feels he has to go since his mother is in the hospital and maybe dying soon. He rightfully fears what he will find. River is going with him to support him. This is going to be a rocky, scary, trip with too many crises.

What a mess. The telepath was really a hunter with a large number many silver bullets and weapon her house. She is dead and the evidence was found to show she killed Shaw. The case is closed. But,Dirk survived and has killed his destined. He is crushed. Ingle was shot by his former partner and is disturbed. The telepath was really able to hide her identity as a hunter. Dirk is going to have trouble working out the loss of his mate. He is fortunate to have friends to support and counsel him. The presence of a hunter caused Vincent and Mason to warn nearby packs and the EC. The packs will be on alert for a while. The loss of the telepath hunter might cause and inquiry and visit by a hunter or hunters. I am surprised Vincent has decided he wants to work for the EC and improve his skills. The hunter death in their midst or a possible new attack made him think more. He met an EC shadow mage and said he could be useful to the EC. He plans on talking with Mason and Cyrus.

Three people surprised me--- Jonathan misread Maddox and their wonderful love making--as Maddox believed it was. He thought Maddox was straight and would drop him after they fucked. He did not even think they would be friends, He is such a pessimist who looks for problems always and sees history always repeating itself so he will fail in this relationship. A drunk Rusty expressed great interest in Jonathan and his sexual playing with Maddox and touched his ass. He made Jonathan feel cheap and another plaything. Did he really want to have sex with Jonathan for some reason not yet disclosed. Maddox became pissed at Rusty for his wrong ass touching. Dex showed up at Jonathan's place after the Maddox/Rusty blowup and tried to straighten Jonathan out and have him at some point come back and clear the air with Maddox and Rusty. He learned Jonathan did not know what was going on and that Rusty should have been hit and refused attention by him , Dex explained that Maddox really liked him. Dex is wiser than Jonahan realizes since he has learned about gay relationships from his dad's (and likely their friends). Jonathan needs to rethink and really consider the meaning of Dex's final comments--- “I know you’ll talk to them,” Dex said with conviction before walking out. “Maddox wouldn’t be so wrong about the guy he’s falling for.” Maddox wants him and is not looking for a onetime sexual deal. Dex knows it. Will Jonathan listen and act upon his advice? Boy, the path forward is going to be eventful and rocky until they both talk to each other and clear the air. I hope the great make up sex comes sooner rather than later, too.