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What a great playroom--the fun is only limited by having a wild imagination and trusting, sexy people. What will Robbie and Brad like most? Since the story is written I cannot influence the story line--but here are some kinky ideas Brad and Robbie can keep in their bedroom vibrating dildos of each other's cock to use with their pay or take on their trips when they are separated for more than a day and even after a last love making session wipe up each other's cum with their underwear and give to each other. So when tempted on a trip each to retreat to their bedroom or hotel room and use the dildo's and suck out the cum so they will have a slight substitute of the joy they share and have great orgasms. Is possible to make a vibrating toy on the shape of Brad's hand in the shape of a duck so Robbie if really in need while Brad is away could fist himself with this toy?Brad could use it on him when they are together and then change to his real hand and forearm. If they agree, they could give the vibrating dildos of their cock's to select people.
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What a great playroom--the fun is only limited by having a wild imagination and trusting, sexy people. What will Robbie and Brad like most?
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Is this new fisting something Brad and Robbie need to to discuss? They agreed that Robbie would only let Brad fist him. Nothing was said that said Brad couldn't fist another guy. Brad did discover he loved fisting Robbie best and he can tell Robbie that. You showed more fisting as a fabulous, special and very intimate and supremely powerful orgasmic play--this is a wonderful, fantasy plot device. Fantasy since I don't think you can do this as fast and as easy as Brad did it to Cody as a first time experience--unless Cody's anus is loose or he had a large anal gap. The few guys I have seen on the old Xtube or now Xhamster( non-rough trade play) seem to be very experienced at fisting and easily work with a trained partner. The fister uses special thick type lube and usually a long rubber sleeve or rubber gloves to add a smoother surface and for sanity and sanitary reasons. The guys fisted have very a amendable and easy to work anal opening so this fisting is something they have been doing for a while. Anyway, thanks for adding spice to how these guys enjoy each other. Plus --You upped the titillation quotient again with the idea of a playroom That Robbie wants to build with Stef's advice. Stef is even studying what should be in it. Maybe you are also studying what to add ?You do keep us on are toes as you creatively help these guys grow more playful.
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Great ending--what intensely personal and fetching humor--of course eating off plates would seem mundane.
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Brad is an idiot. He agreed to a 30 day trial period. Now he is mad that Robbie is fucking a twink. They both need to hold to their promise without guilt or recrimination Life is never dull. I am glad I don't know people like them in real life. I would care about them too much and not want to see them fight.
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Yes, you can read what is going to happen--incest and Wade is the target. The video tape will give the evidence needed.
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I appreciate you explaining what can happen the day after taking e. You do not glamorize it
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I accept this fisting as a fantasy element as an extremely heightened sexual pleasure method. Neil really aggressively and for long periods of time worked Robbie ass and insides over many times when he fisted him. His anal opening had to be loose or difficult to close. I am surprised Robbie's anal opening began closing as Brad experienced. But I worry Robbie with more fisting --I know they say it will be an exceptional practice-can lose control of his bowels and not close his anus and have to eventually wear a diaper. I hope no one thinks long term fisting does not have physical consequences.
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What a great way to make a trip home practical and yet urgent. People struggled and boldly expressed themselves. You could feel love and pain, too. You gave us a fuller appreciation of George's qualities in his time in St Petersburg. This chapter tied things together. You showed that George is deeply trusted and respected by those he has known in Russia. Familiarity has bred respect, not contempt. Sex is not the sole driving or main force uniting George with others. He was monogamous. His only partner is the Tsar versus his more active life at sea. The Chartley development is quite surprising. George gave him a sounding board and good advice. If things go well, Chartley can use Granger's help in London when he returns and likely find a suitable place to live with Batu. You have to praise George's ability to help others and not forget his friends. I looking forward to George's last days with the Tsar, any instructions the Tsar gives or asks him to promote peace and how Nelson will act. George may seek out people in London to fulfill any promises made to the Tsar. In other words. George's adventures at sea might be delayed. However, I will leave the real plot evolution to you, Mark. \
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What a life! I love the adding of fictional and real life people and the bold action , hot sex, high society environment, verbal battles and family dynamics. Will and others live the fantasy life with a variety of sexy people that others dream about. This feels endearingly escapist and opens a window better than a reality TV show or a ribald, no -holds barred cable production. Mark, I admire your sustained ability to write interesting stories with fascinating people. This great new chapter after another chapter covering a different era and type of people and a better Granger in Northern Exposure shows how compelling, productive and creative you are.
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The old Tsar could have kept Chartley in his secret jail due to his paranoia. Chartley's illness could have delayed his torture/interrogation. Hiding him from the new Tsar could be part of a plot by those favor the France or even his reign. There maybe other nefarious motives behind hiding other prisoners from the Tsar which , I am sure, he will investigate. After Granger left ( so he could not dispute the claims) Chartley could be revealed as a spy at a critical moment or placed armed in a compromised position and shot near the new Tsar so he could seen as trying to kill him. Perhaps, there might even be a real plot to kill the new Tsar and blame Chartley for it. The peace plan between Russia and England would be destroyed. France and her allies in the Tsar's court would rejoice and benefit. What role has his younger brother, the Duke and head of the castle holding the secret prison, played? More reasons for the Tsar to get the full story and learn more about the opponents of his rule and foreign policy plans early on . The next chapter should be very enlightening. Maybe I am being too devious in my assumptions. So, Mark will tell us lots more soon.
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George Granger would be aghast at how his family has turned out.
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What an unexpected extremely risky enterprise! Granger showed again he was a man of good character who will forcefully brave dangers to save his friends in distress. Only with Granger's push would the plan be formed, people assembled and actions carried out so that Lord Chartley would be saved You described a wonderful carefully planned rescue that was fraught with danger for Granger and Count Stroganov if Lord Chartley was not found. The Tsar was commanding and ferocious . No one could deny his orders. He got the proof that was needed. He was lied to. It was so fascinating seeing how things worked out. I could not stop reading this chapter. The repercussions on the leadership of palace and prison staff should be very unpleasant. Now Granger needs more information from Lord Chartley before he sees the Tsar. Why was he in Russia? Why was he imprisoned ? The new Tsar will not have the prejudices of his father and may want the matter handled quietly and agree to let him leave Russia with Granger. Thank you. I can't wait for another chapter to work out these issues and tell us of Granger's next adventures
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Thanks for the new pic. We are safe. The smoke travels long distances and stays
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Two points: !. Didn't Granger promise his wife he would not have sex with another women. He just had his second love making session( although a bit of a tutorial for the Countess) in Russia. I think he will have to come clean when he is back in London. 2. Granger is really worried about St Vincent's severe criticism of him and fears he won't get a command. Will he be in the dog house still when he returns. Or---Will events or new tasks or new communications--like the letters conveyed by the French general- in Russia over the next two weeks work out to help Granger with St, Vincent? What might the Tsar do when he learns Granger is leaving in two weeks and might he help Granger out in some way?
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Please no pics of forest fires-I live in California and have smelled the smoke from our forest fires for days. Nice to learn again that great sex is a constant throughout compatible species.
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Once again, Granger has shown he is a master at court intrigues and banter. He graciously charmed the French general and wisely advised the Countess Von Lieven. I am sorry St Vincent is mad at him. The old man hadn't asked Spencer about Granger leaving his ship under Spencer's orders. My guess is that St Vincent will need him as he stirs up lots of hornets nests and has few effective advocates. It looks like Granger has two weeks to keep the peace process going before he and his crew leave. Perhaps, the French letters will show if peace is possible and the surprise Mongol youth can somehow convey why he needed to see Granger. Is Granger in danger? Will the youth actually be a new, powerful bodyguard for Granger? You kept a good tale with mystery going. But, I am most happy that Granger is going to leave soon and be able to be a naval officer . Two weeks for the next chapter is so far away.......
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Will is so not George Granger. I decided finally to read this other current Mark Arbour story and did it all at once to be up to date. I like it immensely for the differences.
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Damn You--what a cliffhanger I can't wait for the resolution--Will The Emperor had thought of this and sent men to help?
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This is all so complicated--so many intrigues and strong personalities. Serious issues are involved. Granger and Daventry portray the new government as second rate and ready for infighting and having difficulty devising and carrying out policy. Granger certainly will get mixed up with St Vincent's problems. I hope he will not be held back to help St Vincent. I enjoyed the naval discussion. You have a great talent for making history come alive. I learned earlier that the Danes hated the outcome and I was fascinated by the alternate British explanation as portrayed by Granger. I like Granger's analysis that the battle was just a short term victory since the real sea faring fleet of the Danes was untouched. It makes sense. Granger seems fully immersed in Russian high society. His contacts are quite powerful and useful. Granger and Daventry are engaged and not bored. He lusts after the Czar who returns the feeling. I am left wondering what will happen to change things and when will they return to Britain. I miss Granger commanding a ship and Winkler making his life bearable. But, for now thanks for another interesting and educational chapter.
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I really enjoy Granger's adventures. I just re-read this chapter and it tells me new things . Mark is an excellent writer who can sustain interest over a log period of time and tell a great , complex tale with interesting people.
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I really enjoyed Hammerhead. I am looking forward to your re-write. Summer Job is an excellent contribution to your new efforts. You are to be commended on the challenges your are accepting to achieve better outcomes.
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Could Toto be reading Michele's comments to Bella all wrong? Michele might really like Toto and is coming to grips with what this means by talking with a friend/relative named Bella? Whatever the true meaning, if Toto acts upon this overheard conversation and decides to move away to lessen his hurt feelings without letting Michele explain himself, Toto will surely regret it. He knows and has been reminded it's best to not act too quickly.
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Chapter 14- Struck, part 2
scrubber6620 commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 14- Struck, part 2
Kidnapping is always done with a purpose. Rhyad was mated and we were just told mated ones are not usually taken. I wonder if his family was behind this kidnapping so as to get him out of the way. His mating must have disgraced them. Rhyad will have to learn to fly. -
I love the hot gay sex, intrigue, twists and turns, surprises and uncertainty. Granger and his fans are kept on their feet . Thank you. Once again, Granger wins the heart and admiration of a lover who he apparently introduces to gay sex and both really enjoy it. The Tsar says only Granger pulls him into male sex . He has become fascinated by Granger and loves his ass as a forbidden delicacy that possibly might be available for just a period of time so he relishes each opportunity to couple passionately. So Granger at this point is not yet to be pushed out of Russia. He faces a key figure who does not favor Britain. It's best to know who your true advocate and key opponent is and Granger is being educated. The Tsar shows his thinking about foreign leaders is like Granger. They can admire each other on more than sexual grounds. The Tsar and his foreign secretary seek the advice of the two Britains on possible naval conflicts and the new political leadership in Britain. The remarks he and Daventry give sound insightful and helpful. It looks like Granger won't be helping at the battle for Copenhagen. He is left surprised by the new PM. The important concern for Granger and the Tsar is whether or not the PM will strongly seek to have Russia as an ally--and foil France's goals. How will the Tsar act after this discussion and Granger's puzzlement? How will Granger and Daventry act? Will Granger and Daventry be sent home or asked to be allowed to be sent home to make the case for the Tsar's desire for peace with Britain? Or, will they stay in Russia awaiting more information? Will more events intercede and force them to act? Now I will await your careful, interesting advancement of the story. I have read that the PM only leads for 3 years but does strengthen Britain's military posture and does seek peace agreements with Russia and other countries to counter France. John Jervis, Earl St Vincent, replaces Lord Spencer at the Admiralty. Granger maintains a strong ally in high naval places. Earl St Vincent aggressively tackles the serious rampant corruption at the naval yards and seeks major , heavily contested reforms. He does succeed after a long time not giving up. Will Granger be pulled into these shore battles and his command of a ship be delayed upon his return?
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