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Danger and more danger. Morgana has been revealed as behind the troubles. She is showing little fear and capturing others using them to hide her intentions. Jin and his compatriots are rightfully very worried I am looking forward to seeing how this story develops.

Good--they are safely back on their ship communicating with allies preparing for future discussions and negotiations. Love was in the air and both Essell and Garjah are on the way to sharing fullfilling mutually blissful sex. They deserve and need a break from the tensions of the past. Bouncer is happy eating and being with Essell and Garjah. What a nice restorative and confirming of love chapter. They should need this emotional and physical pleasure and renewing strength before the next meetings take place. What complications are comming up? It seems too peaceful?

Love the creative context and the picture's iconography which is now clear and compelling with meaning even now. I wonder if others will use what you present on shifter roles and the sentinels as a framework for future shifter stories? I am sure the Psi's will be found soon when both packs meet. Are both Ben and Zev the Psi's ?The full set of sentinels will be needed to face the major evil shifters and their friends who are engaging in new shifter/human trafficking and creating a terrible path that could end the packs . The kidnappings are now being found extending over a wider US area and a threat to more packs. We need to find out in depth what has been happening across the US and who and who has been so destructive? More than Reilly's father and brothers are involved. I hope young Milo can be found quickly which might give a break in the broader kidnappings case. Finally, I am looking forward to the investigation by the Council rep which should give legitimacy to the new sentinel claim.

Carl is better than first projected. Good. He can talk and reason and knows who is around him. He will need more time to learn to walk. George was present when he awoke. He stayed by his bedside twice. It seems George eventually found he could help by being a medical person. Doctors will be needed in this long war. George also seemed to transfer his connection in war from Nathan to Carl. The final discussion between Paul and George was troubling. Paul talked with great concern to George about the affair ( a polite term for it) with Carl. Paul thinks Carl is being hurt. George being typically self-centered said no it is meaningless and he is only using Carl. He said he is not in love with him or perhaps would not fully acknowledge the depth of his feelings What about Carl's feelings? George explains away his harden opinion by saying he can't have love --because he is a homosexual and he can't express himself with another man in society. But he runs away from Paul looking for the lost little girl and doesn't try to answer Paul's concerns. I assume Carl has many more days in the hospital and at home George and Carl will be able to talk and relate intimately if they are so inclined. Any resolution of their relationship, I think, is a long time away.

The boys worked things out and Sammy is ready for Jake to be his sexual partner. Plus, Jake is getting into editing and has done wonderful job on preparing a better tapas vido. It seems You Tube will let them post a vid in two days and the boys almost have finished a PG rated version. Sammy is helping with the final requirements. How will the new improved cleaned up vid be received ? What will the boys do to make money? Can they find somone that will be a better financial manager than either of themselves?

Both Karl and Robert have faced death and been injured. Robert still remembers the horrors of war. What sscary battlefield experiences. He faced another tough time coming home with a non-accepting father who did not like his injury. I think Robert's experiences will give him the strength and desire to help Karl recover and learn how to walk. Karl will need a sympathetic helper and will need counselling and an understanding friend as the perils he faced return to haunt him. He has new fodder for his nightmares. The air war will continue. I hope the Hopkins and Karl are not futher hurt.

I can sense things won't remain bottled up for long. Ridley gave out a man's name and a story that did not make sense so further research would be reasonable. Gabe or Mari can do an Internet search on names or ask his mother and find out much more than Ridley has revealed yet. It is a poignant story and a tear jerker that has not been reported before. Mari will love including his true naming reason in her article. Ridley wants to continue being closed up and unknown . He wants to hide his Dad's health situation, his naming reason and it seems his gay sexual nature from being made public . It will be interesting to see what is revealed by Mari and how Ridley reacts. Once something more is known, other tidbits and secrets could come out as people notice him. Looking at a guy's ass in the future could get Ridley into trouble. He could be deeply hurt as things move along and pull even more inside himself. Future chapters will tell us more about his true strength and character.

Tragic and scary. Karl is acting on his best impulses trying to save a young girl when all hell breaks loose. He knows what is causing the problems and fears war at home and in Britain rightly. Let's hope the tragic news doesn't continue and the girl and Karl survive the bombing and rubble. How either one will reunite with their actual or surrogate parents is an open question. The hospital authorities might well be perplexed to find a Danish boy living in London who speaks inadequate English. How can Karl be connected with the Hopkins in a speedy manner? Will they find him in time before the police or military authorities whisk him away?

Sammy and Jakey are young and some young guys Jakey especially could feel invulnerable until he is hurt They should now see a two tract option is the next step. They should investigate what other sites allow and enable. A few guys on Xhamster link to a site that consolidates and shows active links all their sites--facebook, twitter, only fans, xhamster, paypal ( to pay for what is posted on some sites) You tube is not open to x-rated stuff Just some advice for the manager, weinerdog

They are really getting together and being more sexually adventurous. I love Jakey's line "You're too good for this world, Sammy. I have to protect you at all costs." They are both too good for this world and need protection or more astute actions. They push the limits at home and You Tube. The oilive oil scene was so hot. Time to find a new channel or a second X-rated channel

I love how the four are evolving and enjoying each other. The run in the woods was great fun. There are no real impediments to their future relations and working side by side. Reilly is fully healed and they are all gay. Two newly accepting gay males need to determined who is a top or be versatile and then mate. “Oh my!’ Rosalie exclaimed. “It’s real.” The four contrasting and clearly complementary colored wolves must be striking. I can't wait to find out what this cry by Rosalie means and how the four intend to take on Reilly's family and maybe pack. The role played by Caleb's pack and Ben and Zev are in the mix to be understood soon. Thanks for an upbeat and welcoming happy chapter.

What a pleasant time. Both males are getting more comfortable and are growing together into their own special combination.It was insightful and promising that George asked Karl to teach him Danish. George wants to relate to Karl on more than a sexual level. But good pleasing guilt free sex is still their binding glue. They found ways to enjoy sex in the barn. George again loved being penetrated and Karl was in heaven. He still doesn't know about sperm, though, so his sex education is limited. Both are acting on their feelings and needs for affection. It was charming that Karl ran his hands through the older George's hair. They played and kissed on the way home in public while naked oblivious to their surroundings. Did anyone take notice? Karl loved the farm. It was familiar. The lady at the farm would love to have more help. Perhaps, Karl and George could later move to the farm. Won't George need a vital job to stay out of the military at some point? Britain was ramping its military up after the Dunkirk losses and feared an invasion. All in all they are happier than before--although Karl's dreams bother him. Can he ask Paul about them?

Mark, I enjoy how you draw your characters and gain our attention in their lives. You make me think about their present and future lives. In the end, I know your actual composition will be excellent and very well thought out keeping their humanity in focus. You have painted a tough situation and serious crisis for George Granger. He is very critical of himself and introspective now. George knows he is depressed and his pain is compounded by being without a male love interest. He is a great lover. He has time to think and get more depressed about his losses and constraints. He thinks he does't want ship's company or idle chatter. He says he doesn't want to be involved with the fleet or a ship. More solitary time on his hands might only depress him further. He has no one to confide in. Two frigates, though, caught his interest . However, one, the Calliope, showed it is being poorly led by a replacement for its captain who reportedly is ill and wants to return to London. The Calliope is like and somewhat larger than a previous command he enjoyed The chapter ends with Hardy receiving a notice that causes him to leave the meal and conversation with the Admiral and other ship officers. If the Calliope captain is even more seriously ill or has died, Admiral Nelson will quickly need a replacement frigate captain. He has one nearby who is free and who could do a splendid job and who has his full confidence. Perhaps, Granger could signal he is interested or even Nelson might ask him directly. George should have little free time commanding a new ship. He might even find an old friend on board. He deserves a reprieve from his self-defeating negative thoughts. He needs to get his perspective and mental strength back based on his real performance. When he gets back to London, Lord St Vincent will not at least initially be kindly to him. Lord St Vincent wrote to him in Russia expressing his great displeasure at Granger giving up his ship. Perhaps the news of peace and his conversations with the Tsar will find favor with others, including the King. George could even find a male love interest in London. In others words, things could look up for him later. Or not...His return will at least be better than finding his wife with someone else's child or being raped by his sister in law. Will he be given an opportunity to renew himself at sea? Will he take it?

This is a very congenial. wonderful vacation for the guys and their daughter. It is truly heavenly and exciting and adventurous. They are so happy and at ease being just good people, fathers and lovers. Liebe fits right in and is a joyous participant. Unlike some parents, they don't see her interrupting and complicating their plans. She is a full part of their lives. I bet also not many in the embassy get out in the real countryside like thrm. The story is very inviting and a delightful experience that helps the reader feel engaged right along with them. I would l;ove to take a similar trip.--So do other readers. CJ and Owen also repesent the best of type outsiders fitting in with the culture and with the people,.CJ is definitely not an insensitive ugly American. I am glad that so far they haven't faced any rough situations or crime. I am taken how this holiday chapter has been so well received by the readers who add thheir own personal life situations. You have touched us. Thus chapter is a generous contribution and sets the right tone for this holiday. Thank you. Merry Christmas !

The starting part reveals Karl is very trouble and has repeated explicit dreams of death and threats. He might be working through his guilt at being safe while his family is facing the Nazi's. He is not aware of what has happened to them so he might fear the worst has happened. Then we learn Karl's sexual desires have been ignited explosively. His only sexual education to date seesm to have come from George and that is not healthy, I think, Neverthe less, he is fierrcely jacking often and he did not do this before. He must have wild fantasies while jacking and is might be consumed like his family dreams infect him. Finally, the dam breaks after they ignored each other for days. Karll's lustful desires can't be held back. Karl sees George only in his underwear and he can't hold back any more. He essentially attacks George like George did to him much earlier. Only George is willing to be attacked Karl learns as he goes along that he likes being the aggressor . He plays with George who is relishing his controlling actions. Karl is trying things and applying what seems natural to him. And my God, he fucks George. They are so compatible and they both enjoy their love making. George;s anus is capable and used to holding a cock ( and maybe Karl's is not so large since he is a young person) They both are excited and wrung out wonderfully. " I like that, George spoke again...." Omce again Paul will be asked by Karl to make sense of his feelings and actions. The last chapter eneded with both going for a walk and talking. I guess it is time for another walk. Thank you for this holiday chapter BTW, I checked out your ideas for George and Karl--Karl is a head turner and very desirable. George looks intelligent but not handsome. These are superficial analyses only. Both have turmoil inside and are united now by sex.

Thank you. This is an interesting well written tale showing in part how very human and stressed Granger has been. He realizes now on the flagship he missed the Tsar and the excitement of their intimate relationship. He knows he can't go back and that is very smart. Now that he can relax in safety with people who value him , he can let go and think and try to comprehend what is going on within himself. I have marvelled how well he held up in Russia with a constant notion he could be killed or imprisoned and even after the new Tsar removed his basic fears, Granger still had no way of knowing when he could leave. He was a pawn facing many pressures in a foreign land. Today, his condition might be close to be called PTSD among military people. George is a man of action as well as passion. I don't yet see a lover identified for him in the fleet. Rather than being a passenger dwelling on his thoughts, maybe he could be given a role in the fleet--running a ship ?--that could keep him busy and return to feeling competent and in charge of his destiny. I appreciate your wonderful Chrismas present. It is much better conceived and carried out than my efforts to dream up a next chapter. I will be reading it over again and again and may have other comments. Marry Christmas and Happy New Year!

A thought about the corrosive Russian spy : He knows from experience he can get someone kicked out of the embassy by having very rough sex with him or maybe (?) a close friend. I would not put it past him to drug someone ( even in coffee at a coffee place that sounds safe) or get someone else to do it for him to have a BDSM session with an embassy guy, His diplomatic immunity would protect him from the law. CJ and Austin and all their gay friends have to be wary of him and lookout for each other. Or maybe, I am over thinking his potential harm and deviousnesssince since his bad reputation is getting better known. I am very grateful that you will publish a new chapter tomorow. Three in one week--wow!

There are people that matter and those who don't. CJ is kind to all. Northman is a minor player and will not matter to CJ as long as the amabassador is on his side. CJ is bound for more important things beyond this posting and Northman is the type of bureaucrat who has peaked and knows it. CJ is meeting the right people to make his project take off and he skillfully helped the school principal to cooperate. CJ is intuitive and reads people well. He finds pleasant ways to get the right things done. I am sure the initial project will have unforeseen problems and then CJ will pay attention and make a positive difference. He wants the kids to be helped. I like how Austin, the competent fighter marine, and Domogarov add opposite spice to the story. Austin is more likeable as he continues working with CJ. The Russian is a pig by perhaps without consent too aggressively fisting a guy and making him bleed. He is now a known bad guy so CJ and his friends are going to be properly warned. It is interesting the ambassador signed off on his attendance at CJ's party. She wants CJ to be helpful in an expeanded way from his normal job. I am glad Austin and a FBI guy will also be presnt at the party. You have set up a reason for the dads to be in Mexico City. This event should be a fun time for all. Merry Chistmas--Are you going to give us a present, too ?

Interesting, the rape did not cause a break. Karl does not reject George George, too, is uncertain and ignorant of useful anal sex practices . He does not know how to properly prepare his partner. He thinks going in bare withour preparing the anus is right. It should hurt the first time he says. But it wasn;t just the pain, it was the shock of tne action without consent or notice. Karl is so sweet and is not rejecting George. He kisses him to show he is not truly mad at him.George then starts giving a blow job and stops leaving Karl frustrated. Karl is acting on his hormones. He is in lust and not in love, yet.The age difference at least will keep George from wanting Karl to be a boy friend in public. Paul knows about Karl and George, I am sure. The sex in the bedroom had to be heard throughout the house. Kark is very vocal. I hope he can give Karl some perspective. George is not now enrolled in university. Is he now subject to be called up for military service? Perhaps, he is needed as a medic. I would love to see how you think the cast looks.

Jonathan and Maddox keep misunderstanding and talking past each other. This chapter was fun banter and deflection and cross purposes. Ray is a good friend to Jonathan. Unfortunately, only an outside observer can see they just need to talk straight with each other and say why they are apart and seemingly oil and water( can't mix). Can they really listen to each other ? Maddox really is turning up the sexual heat , but Jonathan can't see that he wants him fully ( only assumes it will be on the downlow) . He can't get with another closeted guy . He is not telling Maddox his reservations. Heck, Maddox is pure straight sex personified and that image is too strong. It's good that the hot girl likes Ray and came clean. Ray can be healed. Now Jonathan is going off to react badly and have a shouting match, I assume. Maybe they will shout loud enough and finally say the truth mixed with pain that each might hear or begin to hear what keeps them apart--or not. I am sure the next confrontation can't lead to a solution--that would be too simple and drama free. Thanks for a great read!

Except for a hiccup here and there, I wanted this book to be upbeat. CJ's about to turn 24, he's graduated college, had a kid, and his life has changed, but I want him to retain the joy with which he's tackled everything up to now Good to know this story will be mostly upbeat( I love that word). I am glad that there is no reason to fear impending doom. I will ignore my past concerns.

These are great times and this is a very upbeat , engaging and fun episode. No office worries or politics. CJ, Owen and friends simply are getting together enjoying many things being themselves. CJ is a guy with depth . Owen and CJ are an ideal, contructive, happy, and sexually alive gay couple. They have a hard time not revealing their background , high powered connections and wealthy status. Their uncommon wealth may get them unwanted attention as stories spread. But for now--this is a great chapter to take us into the holiday season. Thanks

So Ruben is like a knight who will become a wolf shifter with Zev's help. His name foreshadows his destiny. Silas is adding conext and understanding. Good. The way the two connected was priceless and a happy time. Ben wants to take things slow and Zev agrees. They could get best together willingly as they slowly grow togther. This approach suggests a way for them to be truely committed. I wonder how Ben's skills can help find the lost kids. Will he have to get in harm's way and be near the bad guys to figure out their conditions and hurtful nature? While still a human, Ben ( unlike the others in Caleb's pack) can be near the bad wolf shifters and hunters. Zev will be very protective of him. This is an interesting and thought provoking story.

Great ending--the new king won this battle with his friends. They are committed to a new and better future. Merlin and others will help. Morgana should be reconstituted and return in the future so it will be perilous eventually. I am looking forward to an interesting challenging story next year. Thank you.

Tomorrow.... (BTW, I've read your CJ series and thoroughly enjoyed it, although I have to admit I'm a little behind. I don't have much time for reading when I'm in the middle of writing/editing/posting, all while trying to work. I'll get back to it. I promise!) Your next chapter is published tomorrow, Thursday. The chapters in the current CJ series are published each Friday. Readers, like me, who really enjoy both of you excellent writers will have a feast taking us over the holidays. Hooray!