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To get my head around the challenges that this monumental work represents, I note that a reasonable and full , interesting chapter that advances a storyline could be 5,000 words more or less. Chapter 33 is essentially equal to almost 40 serious regular chapters. You are awesome and so talented to be able to write such a long, compelling chapter, if that is useful term.It is like a book, instead. Bravo, Kyle Aarons. I admire your diligence, writing skills, complex mind and the excellent results you have achieved. It is really difficult to read and understand in full what you have written without serious study. You have set a high bar for your fans and new readers. You enjoyingly have mixed drama and humor and passion/pain, mystery and sexual charm and a world of endearing , multi-part fantasy that is growing and integrating unlike anyone else I have read here. Thank you. It is not possible to tire of this story and the characters. You continue to create a deep hunger for more of your writings and other related works--Kandric Saga, Sands of Time 2.0 and Beyond the Crags here and on Castle Roland.

Another double wow---great sex, fights, near death experiences--Ian and Owen have consumated their relationship many times and now know who each other is and why each is needed. Ian accepts he is a vessel. Alex failed in killing his son, Ian and now Alex is being taken by wolves. His final disposition is unknown as Season 3 ends. The long outlook for 13 year old Ian is not good . He is addicted to Owen. Owen can help for a while him but things will certainly get in the way. Can others intervene and help Ian in the next Season?

So will all be revealed next Thursday? Will a major step forward happen and the conflict become much clearer? I like this story. Ian has guts and needs. Kevin is really helping him.

Well, this is much more progress than I expected. Things are moving quickly. The humans and others on the planet won't be hindering Essell and later might help. Essell and his crew are travelling to earth rapidlly. Contact at earth tomorrow will start negotiations. I am glad Essell is going to reach out to potential allies. What will his parents think of his romantic partner and new shape? What will Garjah and Bouncer think of earth and the people? Will they feel comfortable and trusting? How far can Garjah go in negotiations since he has a limited and specific role ? Will his efforts not be accepted by his home world's current leadership?

Awesome--a great battle--the young ones fought vailiantly and we are left with a unsettling uncertainty--It all happened so quickly Are they seriously hurt by the blades ? Is Morgana dead? What happens next?

Weinerdog--Xtube and other sites have gotten careful due to anti-porn advocates suing and under age people adding vids and pics. I was a long time viewer of the free Xtube before it exploded/stopped operating and now watch the free gay porn side of Xhamster. Some guys advertise selling things--clothes, cum rags, etc. using electronic payment systems. Some exceptionally hot guys now seem to just advertise with a few vids on Xhamster try to get others to sign up and subscribe monthly to their channel on OnlyFans which offers more explicit and many more pay pics and vids . I do not use OnlyFans but the number of guys advertising across the globe tells me that they must be making money.

.I agree that the tapas vid might bed able to be revised and published in some form with hot bare chested guys enjoying the food. I would watch it, The guys loved the tapas and were excited. That positive vid should be captivating and worth seeing by others. Sammy is a good kid. He fed and supplied his mother with care when she was down and had great sex on a new level with Jake. He is a giver. I am looking forward to Jake coming up with a plan to make money. You Tube would be only a fairly clean, non-sexual outlet. I could suggest some options but Jake will be the one in control. They could use their current You Tube vids to advertised other things --like offering to cook a special meal in someone's home or filming special visitor meal and action requests or telling visitors of a pay subscription web site they could start that might be x-rated.

I agree George stepped over the line. He is acting like a cad and one sided user. He is older and knowledgable and should be teaching Karl at a mutually agreeable pace. George doesn't seen mean--just uncaring and self-centered. His actions turn out , though, to be very hurtful in the end. At worst, he doesn't care for Karl and uses him solely for his pleasure without thinking about Karl. He is not being loving or caring or gentle. Karl is so naive and is reacting based on his new and intense, awesome feelings . Sadly, he is also not educating in any way Karl on the mechanics of his sexual play. George is surprising Karl by his actions and not preparing him properly for oral or anal sex. What should be beautiful and mutually fulfillling is anything but that. Karl does not know what is happening to him and George does not tell him. Karl finds his sperm distatsteful and doesn't know he is eating it. George in essence surprises him and painfully rapes him without any sort of agreement or full proper physical or emotional preparation. He is traumatized. Will Karl be emotionally impaired and not want such sex for a long time? Will he need to isolate himself from George and stop interacting? Is George going to give Karl a sincere apology and explain his actions. Can he tell him what motivated him to rape Karl without the proper preparation and gettting consent? Can he heal their breach?

Ben showed everyone that he is a good guy. He exposed himself to risk and helped stop Caleb from being shot and the hunter from killing anyone else. Perhaps, at the upcoming meal Caleb and the others can find a bigger or more important use for Ben and his special talents in protecting the town and in finding the missing pup(s)? It would be time for Silas to come clean or add a background that would help the others understand Ben. He may know of others like Ben and how they were helpful to packs. Will Ben stay in the town? Why ? Drsawzall's question is apt. Why did the hunter come to the town? Answering that quesition might show how the initial main plot line relates to this town. I am anxious to see how Ben/Caleb connects to Sebastian and Reilly and his pack. Are Reilly's father and brothers kidnapping the young pups? I am really looking forward to the next chapter--when you are able to complete it.

Wait a minute--several more chapters ? I thought this could end in 2 or at most 3 easily. Sebastian is still too weak and not healed. Reya kicking Luna the healer out was not a good idea. She, at least, showed she really loves Sebastian. The earth guys are really grounded--through college? They will burst at the contraints. How they burst should be fun. The only way I can see the mothers or parents can forgive their children is for either they all be taken to the kingdom or Sebastian and Pepin or more come to earth for a while. But who knows ? Too much more needs to happen, I guess, in the next several chapters. You are going to be very devious and creative . I think everyone is going to be hurt and confused and disappointed and surprised and eventually have their viewpoints radically changed if some at least half-way almost happily ever after ending evolves. I don't know what the end point will be.

Well--slow going but a building block for future stronger connections between the twins. They were discovered by a worker who was a viewer of their cokking vids who was gentle and supportive. He was not a creep who wanted to get a "date" with them and gave them a wonderful gift of a nightime firewaorks view. I half-way expected them to kiss and hug in the dark free from viewing by others in the ferris wheel car. The ending was so sweet and promising that they will strengthen and advance their romantic relationship. “The world is not ready for us.” “It’s not, Jakey.” “But ready or not, here we come, right Sammy?”

10 years in the making.. wow--An epic--Feels a bit like Lord of the Rings in grand scale, complexity and attention to new worlds and fascinating beings and the fights between good and evil with magnificant heroes and bastards and hidden adversaries. First--Thank you for your dedication, determination and creativity. Please be proud and gratified This huge chapter is beyond my expectations and very comprehensive. I will have to read it several times to connect and fully understand the story you are expanding. It is very entertaining and challenging. Second, You ended with a cosmic bang and announced an unexpected shocking fiercesome malevolent force that was behind a great deal of the pain and suffering : the green dragons who have retained the knowledge of having two shapes--apparently forgotten by other dragon races , except the current sand dragons in Sands of Time. Kandric and his family will have new dragon targets-besides black and white dragons. The green dragons are taking on Eagleonia and everyone else and are aligned with Gambra and the dark mages and maybe the bad( non-Chark related) drow. Third, you prepared us for more excitement should you hopefully write more. I want to know how the Rolling Dale battle finishes, how the greens are defeated( hopefully), how and when Kandric and his crew meet the sand dragons and how the sand dragons help in the fight against the greens, will Sendra in its benevolent form be restarted, how the black dragon fight is resolved, what happens to Kandric's grandfather, will that long suffering white dragon die or tell Kandric what he wants, will Frexla finally be ended and Kandric find his brothers and friends, will there be a new drow war, what will happend in UnderRiver, will peace come about, how will the Alphar and Garm begin to live in a world possibly not at war. etc. You advanced your plot lines and your characters. You added depth and updated more logical reasoning and began to connect this with Sands of Time and the Crags--including synchonizing timing and integrating the geography and beings. We know more about the sand dragons,the green dragons, the dragon wars, Mythlings and Mythlets, the Old Ones, etc. Dawnbreaker and Afterdusk. You fleshed out the history and you let us know Kandric is bisexual. Any plan for an Alphar princess to bear his children in a future chapter? Conner might have fathered a child from his earlier female encounter on the barge? Thank you. What a great 2021 Christmas present !

Sammy is being willingly led into a deeper sexual relationship. He sizes up their nature's well "For some reason, I couldn’t handle his stare. How I envied him. He really had no inhibitions or second thoughts" Hmmm-the top comment after 20,000 hits is asking to see the rest if the vid--so the viewers expect more intense sex play to follow from the kissing Jake thinks they can make money from the vids--I would love to know his plan and how he will disguise the money coming in from their mother who may be starting to worry about them since she looked a bit suspicious after her bath My idea is two channels ( keeping their ages hidden) --one plain cooking channel with some very friendly intereaction and a second pay channel on a new website they own or on some established platform ( easier and cheaper) and a new e-mail address ,a twitter account, a PayPal account or another payment system and a PO Box for cash or mailing address if they send things out. They could post explicit vids for pay and could require viewers to subscribe with a monthly fee. If they want to go further, they could sell specially requested pics, new vids, any clothes they wore in the vids and for more money add cum to the clothes. They could tell their mother that people so liked the cooking channel that they sent them money for recipes, meal planning ideas, new vids, pics, etc.

On this chapter--Ben was accepted in the town although he was not a shifter. Well, he was needed to fill a gap at the diner. But Caleb and Silas seemed to see something in him that coveyed he was not a threat and was special in some way. I hope he has a peaceful time until he leaves the town with friendships built. As for this being a building block chapter and not a side story , I can see at least two possibilities-When he leaves this town will he run into Reilly.s old pack in another nearby town and get into trouble and need help from his newly established friends ? Caleb as State Trooper could travel to the town and find Ben in trouble. Or, Ben and this town will be asked to help Sebastian when he goes after the bad,unliked pack. But then again, the author might have a much better idea. I am looking forward, hopefully, finding out in the next chapter that Reilly can be healed and given a brighter future.

"Is Sammy's next video going to involve a banana split?? " Good idea! They could each practice first on swallowing the bananas and add a special thick white sauce to the ice cream before they eat it. See them jack and both coat their ice cream woud be so hot.

What a wonderful romantic and erotic evolution between Jake and Sammy. Jake feels a stronger passion and wants a more intimate life long connection. He is bringing Sammy willingly along. Sammy is in heaven as he learns of Jake's ideas and feelings. The ice cream vid is delightful and goes off the track from being straight a forward Food Network type project to a sensuous kissing between brothers and then to a stronly erotic almost naked frotting and cum exploding orgasmic fest. Jakey love tasting the cum. Sammy needs to try it and should soon, I bet. Well, the full vid can't be shown since it is so explicit and the guys are under 18 and even the initial kissing vid will be potentially damaging to their reputations on a public channel. The gentle supportive comments on the last vid might turn to many more negative comments on a new kissing , frotting vid. Sasha could be the fly in the ointment due to his jealously and could spread news of the vids around the school and with parents. I expect the brothers will deepen their sexual relationship and enjoy it immensely.They might consider a need to be safer and find options that help them out. Will they keep on making spicy or semi-spicy cooking vids with restraint for you tube and then eventually make an unexpurgated version for a pay channel? On the pay channel viewers might even ask them to sell personal things and they will have to decide wheter or not to do so. They could really help out their mother and their family finances. Well done.

Both characters are very appealing and committed to each other and their mother. They care and work through things to help out each other. Now, the brothers are getting together in unexpected ways--organically, sincerely and not one-sided. Well, Jake is being the instigator but Sammy willingly responds and wonders finally what is going on as he is totally sexually aroursed. They are on a journey of self-discovery and new feelings and actions and boundaries. I am looking forward to seeing how this advances. It should be delightful and hot. Jake pushing to upload the more explicit vid is probably going to add increased publlic attention to them as sexual beings. What will Jake's friends say.? The vids from now on might be more explicit and get more traffic and suggestions from their fans on more than food topics. They might , as mentioned earlier, eventually need to go on twitter or maybe split off and have a second series on a pay Only Fans account. BTW, my favorite remedy for a cold is chicken soup.

Karl really is a good person with no guile and with a pure heart. He sought out George and found him hurt and struggled successfully to get him home and cleaned up. He kissed George because he did not know what else to do to make George move on. He succeeded. George reacted positively and enjiyed kissing him. I agree with earlier comments that Karl is not gay. He has no firm sexual identity and is romantically and sexually inexperienced , but he is growing up. He is so young without his real family to teach him. George has a better chance now to heal. He knows Karl does not hate him. He should feel no guilt about Karl. It will be a test of his character to see how he treats and understands Karl. He knows he is not a practiced kisser. Will George be friendly and thankful and not try to be more intimate ? Will he try to seduce him? Will he instead move on slowly and find better opportunities? Will he keep away from destructive situations--like he must have undergione to be badly beaten up. When the Hopkins find him in the morning he will find a loving supportive adopted family. George is home.

I am proud of Essell. He took charge. It's up to his parents and the soldiers and scientists on the planet to react and find a constructive solution or things will get nasty. The Rinta situation needs to be cleared up. Essell's superior did not report that he was missing. Why ? I can only assume he did not want to be faulted and wanted to sweep the matter under the carpet for as long as possible ( it was a long voyage) and would make up a story when pressed.

“There are so many men around my age who have been dying at war, and here I am, trying to kill myself while I’m given the chance to live. I still need to work on myself. And even if it’ll take time, I don’t want you to worry any longer.” You helped us better understand George's motivations and reasoning. He needs a break really from Karl. Karl powerfully interests him and he dreams of Karl showing him affection. George doesn't see that happening and he doesn't want to hurt Karl. He seems to misinterpreted Karl's attention, but it is not the first time a signal is misintrepretated so he could simply state he was sorry and ask Karl to forgive him again when he omes back. We need a chapter from Karl's perspective to be able to better gauge what might happen next when George returns. Karl is on uncharted romantic ground. He seems to sincerely want to help heal George as he promised JoJo. He is offering his friendship. He did not promise to be anyone's boy friend and he does not even know what that means. When George returns and talks with Karl they can hopefully redefine their relationship to one of being friendly and not hostile. Without any encouragement from Karl, then George might be friendly but not touchy and maybe even help him out learning English. George wants to work on his mental health and eventually could go back to college to become a doctor . George could volunteer for the military if college is not an option. I expect after Dunkirk Britain will recruit lots more people to help defend the country and fight overseas.

Ok a cliffhanger and a curveball, too. I read and enjoyed the basic story development and positive turns with only one dark shadow. Rosalie said let's wait for the beta. Will he determine or let us know how well Reilly will fit into the pack with a newly expressed gay alpha? I was thinking the key issue would be how would the beta react and then what would Sebastian do. But no--you gave us ( and me a curveball), instead a fabulous growing love story so I could not see the beta turning off the alpha. I wonderfully saw how the two main characters began to relate and accept each other and learn to love and need the passion and acceptance they shared. It was beautiful--till you shocked us Reilly's wolf after the throws of his first intense sexual passion came out as a broken mess. Can Donovan or Rosalie help him and Sebastian ? I bet they will find a way or this story will end sooner than we all want.

"The next chapter should fall on Christmas Eve, but as I was telling @FSELL earlier, I might post it a bit earlier, as that time might just get a bit too hectic! " A bit earlier woud be amazing and an early Christmas present. Thanks.

Luna has a sad , but finally uplifting tale. What a painful childhood ! She acted as a loving, supportive mother. Sebastian has had both a hard bitten mother and kind hearted mother. Plus, he has developed strong devoted friends who have acted to try to save him. I love their intereactions and how they get along now. Milo acts so boldly to save the guy he truly loves. Sebastian's sense of duty has led to his possible demise. He hasn't run away and faced the evil wanting to kill him and end his kingdom. The bad guy has lost after some complications and is destroyed so the big threat has ended. Sebastian has finally won with his goddess mother help? Reya is trying to kill his beloved Milo and he is fading away. Will she stop hurting Milo in time? Will Sebastian be healed and be able later to explain how much Milo means to him and save him? Will Luna play a good, constructive role for all ? How will the kingdom and earth character roles be settled? I expect more surprises and plot twists in the next chapter. I do hope love conquers all and they live happily ever after eventually.

What a horrible and very painful experience ! Reilly's father and brothers are sadistic creatures who should face judgment. Kellan has been a good and faithful, caring friend You left us with a cliffhanger. What will Sebastian do about Reilly and his family? Will Reilly be accepted in some form by Sebastian? Is it possible for Reilly to be healed? Might Rosalie know of any ways to help Reilly?

Two things-- First, Northman is cruising for a bruising. He needs to realize that he is outclassed by CJ who has the ambassador on his side for good reasons, not just his connections or personality. He is going to look bad if the ambassador finds out his true opinions by hearing him say them. Perhaps, he will try to get CJ transferred from his section so he can't annoy him or rock his boat/fiefdom. I can hear him say CJ would be a better fit in the public affairs section in the embassy and make it seem like a good move. Second, shouldn't somone in the security section in the embassy or his FBI friend be looking out at this evolving situation with high profile donors and expected huge publicity and be advising CJ on any risks he might face? He and Owen are acting like innocent lambs and are semmingly not aware of any potential robbery and kidnapping risks.