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  1. scrubber6620

    Chapter 71

    I naturally assumed Curtis Buck was behind the torching. But, after thinking about Zach's very self-aware , mature and critical, detailed self-analysis, I am considering the torch person possibility list could be expanded to someone else has had physically abused when his so called monster took over. He said he has this problem for months. Zach may not have just hurt Will when incensed. I bet his therapist will suggest Zach apologize to all he has hurt. Hopefully, his heartfelt apology will prevent Zack's new vehicle from being destroyed--unless Curtis Buck was really behind the torching. I agree Will could ask for advice on who did the torching. If not Jake, maybe he could suggest a new person to investigate the matter.
  2. scrubber6620

    Chapter 6

    Interesting backstory--what is a menic episode ? BTW--A new vampire movie arrives on April 12-Renfield. The guy is Dracula's tortured human aide and supplier who in the movie seeks to find life outside of helping his dominating vampire. Dracula will not let him go. Will Caden turn into a version of Renfield?
  3. Thank you for helping us to see Tchama as a real person with depth and struggles and friendship. Unless a powerful healer can be found soon, I hope she can pass on without much more pain. She will be mourned.
  4. Let us hope Tchama's screams alert her friends at the Mystic's shop and some come out to ward of the bloody sword weilding messiah. I hope Tchama is not killed.
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    Chapter 6

    Caden finally realizes he is facing a hungry vampire named Ludwig. He freaks out and tries to escape the cave as Ludwig goes after him for more blood. Luckily he hits Ludwig in the gonads and is able to scurry outside of the cave into the daylight. Ludwig will chase Caden when it is dark and he cannot use the sunlight to protect himself. He is seriously worried. But, Caden has read books and studied up about vampires and other supernatural creatures. He will improvise. Will crosses keep Ludwig away? He could create some stakes as a defense tool to aim at Ludwigs heart. I have a feeling a very powerful and super-fast vampire could get past Caden's defenses. The two are just getting acquainted. It is not yet certain they can get along. If Ludwig is not careful he will kill off his food source. He could not stop himself earlier from trying to suck out more blood at the possible loss of Caden's life. Will he be more careful at night or will he kill him out of spite?
  6. Lahari joined with the three to destroy the messiah tower. Thery found 4 shifts being used in hideous experiments. Now, the symbol of messiah tower and its secure base were no more. Who survived? Did the 4 shifts live? Did the principal messiah and any of her followers still exist? Will Lahari and the others need to kill any more remaining messiahs? The messiah's strength must be broken, Will any still left flee the city and no longer threaten the shifts?
  7. Dozi wisely fled the battle as it started but she could not get away from the gruesome killing. Eventually she hid behind the mystics' house. Illya found her but they heard screaming in terror. They ran toward the sounds fearfully. A friend is being hurt. Was it Tchama ? Can anything be done to save their friend?
  8. BTW, let us hope Rusty did not father a kid with August, The Xpress item might force her to confront Rusty if she thinks he has another child by another woman.
  9. The birthday party was the bomb. It was so different that it had the potential to go way off track with Roy making a scene. Instead, Rusty shone and read his younger brother and friends well. They all loved him and Matty in costumes. Rusty can be a kid at heart. He clearly loves his younger brother. Even his prim and proper younger sister was drawn into Rusty's charming orbit. I only regret he did not sign an opera aria. The only downer was Roy--ever judgmental and quick to look for faults and failures in Rusty. After the younger kids went to bed he tuned on Rusty with a false claim. He had read a scandal sheet online that said Rusty had gathered a child and believed it to Rusty's disgust. He was not smart enough to realized Rusty was buying toys for Gabriel, not a fictitious son. But, Roy assumed the worse for Rusty. Roy spoiled the mood fast. Matty and Rusty left with a sour taste. Matty had to read to online story to Rusty as Rusty drove home. Connor's group was asking for others to help reform Rusty, the father with an older shild. I liked the name Sunny Hill Implacable Team--SHIT--which is very fitting. Now, what will Rusty do?
  10. Vion and his messiah's fell in a one sided battle and unexpectedly lost out to more powerful shifts, He did not anticipate the gore and awesome forces being used against them. He had never lost till now. As he retreated the Messiah Tower fell. Will the messiah's flee the town and regroup? They cannot stand against the shifts. The humans in the mix were brutally killed. Did Dozi and her friends survive?
  11. scrubber6620

    Chapter 71

    The foundation will be righted with Jake as staff head. Fireside , sadly, will still be the burr under the saddle by staying on. Zach and Will are on the way to be righted. Zach's surprise letter showed him to be painfully self-aware and not deluded to think he and Will can restart their strong connection. He wants them to be friends and meet when will returns from his spring break. Will accepts Zach's understanding and is going to help him get a new vehicle. Two things are unsettling : Will did not have his truck burned--who did it?-and Zach has a rage issue he cannot control. He calls it a monster inside himself. He is going for therapy. Could he be given special unable to be found in testing drugs by someone to hurt him? Curtis Buck comes to mind. Claire is a crying mess. Will Craig still want to be with her after she voted to fire him. Marie is ragging mad at her as Will expected. Unfortunately, he was not able to talk Marie down when they stopped talking. As usual--life is never simple or calm at Escorial.
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    Chapter 75

    I would hope Bertie writes a charming, insightful letter back to George and approves of his mother and George and his family and friends staying at his cottage. Freddie and Davina and the Duke could be excluded based on their efforts to exclude Bertie from the will and knowing how Davina could cause mischief. Being excluded would irk them. Maybe, George could use the cottage for any ultra secret liaisons he might have. It might also be more accessible than his Isle of Wight home after George investigates it and considers his possibilities.
  13. The messiahs are on a rampage, Beings are going to be hurt. The mantis gland could be a blessing for good or evil for ninyani. I bet we find out soon what it effect will be. She has a lot to learn--fast.
  14. More background on Sebastian. He is a mess with too much guilt. Like Audrey said he needs some dick and gay friends. How about starting with one for now?
  15. scrubber6620

    Chapter 6

    I love the book dragon concept. Congrats on winning the hair prize. Kandric is a huge, but fun challenge. It is not finished yet. The latest chapter, I think, wins the GA prize for the longest at almost 200,000 words You might like Sands of Time by Roland at Castle Roland https://castleroland.net/story-synop/?id=2591 And the multipart Dancing with the Dragon at Nifty https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/sf-fantasy/dancing-with-the-dragon/dancing-with-the-dragon-61
  16. scrubber6620

    Chapter 5

    Yes, but he needs Caden to safeguard him and keep him away from daylight. He cannot survive in daylight. Staying in the cave shows his weakness. But, we still do not know what his strengths and powers and weaknesses are. Caden has to grow to be a helper--either willingly or by compulsion-- and this could be a new role for him.
  17. Returning home the three who started it all disagreed. S'Kay does not want to help the shifts who the messiah's are attacking in revenge their killing messiah's. They are still unknown as the killers and hidden from the messiah's/ But someone does know they are the killers. That individual is waiting for them in their home. Will they take responsibility for their actions and support the other shifts?
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    Chapter 5

    Caden is going to be shocked and yet still clueless until he accepts who he really faces He sees a man with a beautiful face who is feeding him and helping him, and wonders what happened to the zombie who chased him Caden sats--"Well I wasn't talking about you, I was talking about that hideous, undead thing I saw last night." And his fellow castaway says it was him. Both need to talk and be clear. Caden should get scared when he finally realizes he is the food source for the vampire. They have to come to an understanding and a plan for the future. Is he going to be the vampire's Renfield? I hope the vampire wants to leave the island. Otherwise, He will keep Caden with him hidden from any rescuers.
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    Chapter 6

    Oh My Could it get any better? Beckett will have a dragon for a guide! Shades of Kyle Aarons and the Kandric Saga.
  20. Damn. What an over the top hell week. I went through one that was nasty, disgusting and embarrassing. These guys have raised the bar with their shared history ,real pain and mysticism. I still feel very sorry for what they are experiencing . They are growing , integrating and being even more likable. They were tested and beat off the doubts and bonded.
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    Higher 14

    I suggest Trevor can make one more great contribution to this pack that should follow from his graduate business school training-- He can make a solid business plan for the pack. The captured money should be coming in over time in greater amounts and a plan should be made to invest in projects that maximize its impact for the pack. The alphas should at some point while they are in town ask about the results of the financial recovery task force. They might realize the pack has to make a business plan for the future development of the pack.
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    Chapter 75

    At least from first impression, the man managing Lady Kendal's large estate must be very good at what he does. He is producing twice the income that is produced from Granger's properties. Granger's manager and Lady Kendal's man have a lot to discuss and learn from each other. They share a belief in treating their tenants honorably. Granger needs also to have confidence in the new--to him-manager. I expect coming to grips with his new property and new responsibilities will consume a great deal of Granger's time for the foreseeable future. He will master it all, I am sure, while accepting his new greater wealth and enhance social standing from the action of Lady Kendal. Word should spread fast. I wonder after Lord Rosslyn's report to the King, that in due course the Royal Herald will appear in front of Granger and request that he and William appear before the King for new titles and honors. It would burn Freddie, if one of the awards George received was to be made a Lord Lieutenant for an area relating to George's property. Freddies' actions at the reading of the will should have caused him to lose the King's favor for a Lord Lieutenant office he is seeking.
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    Higher 14

    Seth is the beat up bitch's brother. He was badly hurt.
  24. scrubber6620

    Higher 14

    Trevor comes clean and really shocks his friends. Good ! He wants to inform and turn Randy. Hmmm-That will take time to get agreement before he acts Trevor has said Skylar and Randy are not mates. Could one of them grow into being a mate ? Might Trevor's eventual location after grad school be based on finding his mate and a compatible location. Maybe, he could move back to Burney as its alpha? Trevor wants the Mckinney's to be destroyed. Aiden agrees. They have been declared rogue and have a target on their backs. I would love to see a John Wicke like series of assassins go after the McKinney's without Wicke's ability to fight back.
  25. Finally, they found out about the lost letters. Was there a reason they were lost? Were their parents involved? But, now they are happy and have much to discuss and maybe do? Life could be much better for both males.
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