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This chapter recreated the pain and deep worry that pervaded gay men at the time as AIDs was just taking hold. The tests helped. No jokes could relieve the torment. Lots of interconnections tied people together. Max and Lark were a great example. Stef and Greg were staying safe for now. Brad was wonderfully relieved. BTW, I love Tonto
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Neil has a hold over Robbie. Brad will not stop till he finds out what it is.
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Seth is now in so deep he cannot see the sky. He gave Craig a blow job and wanted to give him more. Craig knew it and now for sure has a ready cocksucker. His sister is still frustrating Craig. The dance with Roni can only go bad. At least, Seth has found the nice guy who was in the hospital room with Craig, Will they connect and have fun?
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Oh no, he kicked Tomas away and he has lost his "guide." Henry returned to running, But he is unable to control his pace. He apparently is running too fast for a normal human. What will his coach do when he finds out? What new attention will Henry get? Will the problems Tomas suggested come to pass?
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I am looking forward to finding out what transition is happening. Both boys are mysterious and not what they seem to be.
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Hooray ! Sumi unknowingly has escaped her tormentors and surprisingly found her supposedly dead friend Harakin. It is all by chance and trial and error efforts, not premeditation. They ended up in a much better, distant location finding a good person, Dozi and others soon. They have found a safe place where no one will use them and can encourage them. I hope they are not too damaged to blossom and be happy.
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Secondary Characters Have A Life, Too
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Secondary Characters Have A Life, Too
Love the action with --the being ignored kink Matty and Rusty really are a fun loving, compatible couple. Plus. Matty now will have his own key, He is fully accepted.- 22 comments
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Great ending. Owen and CJ fit right into their old life and plans. Liebe missed them too much and the boys took extra care to help her feel the love they always share. The recovered ship became a meaningful new work and was properly studied and displayed at a museum, The family foundation helped out the archaeological process. I love the notion Owen was given the gold coin he found and wore it for the rest of his life. Let us hope the upbeat dream of better and constructive relations between Cuba and the US comes to pass sooner rather than much later.
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Chapter 8 - Olona, Part Two
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Olona, Part Two
Sadly, the witch was killed by the townsfolk in horrible ways. She was tied up and shot full of arrows, Olona found Tisa and it seems they are going to the coast and then up north following the mysterious words of guidance by the witch. They want to leave Xin. I hope they do not find the monster who killed the people in the village. -
Wow--Will met Zach and worked out a detente between the three of them. He reasoned with Zach and Travis who has to come down from his anger at being enslaved. Surprisingly, he hired some guys to beat up Travis and had to call them off after talking to Will. Will considers the long hassle and pain over the last months is now over. I am not sure. They have strong feelings and strong emotions and so far only Will keeps his anger in check. Travis and Wil acknowledged that Zach brings out their insecurities. They are a couple and cannot gave sex with Zach without huge problems. They have things to work out and the trip with friends to Hawaii will be productive. We will see soon how the couple relates.
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OK, so Ludwig was biting Caden who decided to not get dramatic about his action. He asked Ludwig to be polite and not sneak up on him. A simple request to feed without draining and killing him would be OK with Caden. Ludwig was shocked and surprised. Caden was being even tempered and agreeable. He now just asked to be taken out of the dark and being fed, also. No mention of needing sex in return was made by Caden--yet. Ludwig bowed and treated him with courtesy and called Caden--M'Lady which upset Caden. He is not a lady. Guess they still have to work out their roles and normal and sexual desires/acts. Caden, please give Ludwig a break, He is very old fashioned and clueless. I hope they can figure out what they both need and will give soon.
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A new young boy in great need, David, has entered their lives by chance. Ronnie is his hero. Armand has a wonderful image for a paper. I hope David can be brought back to good health. He will have a loving family now to care for him.
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Chapter 7 - Ronging, Part One
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Ronging, Part One
Now we know, Ronging is a monster Messiah who became hideous when he ate his second photonova gland and was kicked out and was exiled to the Gunge. He grows more body parts when he eats a gland. He craves more glands and seeks out being who can feed him. He is seeking his sixth gland and first wanted the witch who fled from him. Unfulfilled, his craving is becoming stronger as he travels. More will die until he can eat when he desires. -
Chapter 6 - Tisa & the Witch, Part Two
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Tisa & the Witch, Part Two
Yes, still a mystery. Was was special about the two children? Three people are dead. Why were they killed? The witch's powers are amazing. Will the monster return ? Or, has he been satisfied? -
Rafe is furious. Andre was hurt and bloodied by a prank. Daeran and Joe had their room destroyed. Now, Rafe is leading his team to investigate what is going on. Frodd is acting strangely and working with their enemies. With the evidence, Rafe will be ready for a huge battle, "They were in the middle of a street gang war about to reach its climax. Rafe didn’t know how, but they were tied in it."
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Chapter 5 - Sumi & Harakin, Part Two
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Sumi & Harakin, Part Two
Is Harakin really dead? If she lived, the enemy might want to find out more about her. Sumi escaped from the castle but was punished? Will her mind break? Will she flee when given the next chance? -
BTW, Trevor, Skylar and Randy have not indicated they have a fetish for Jock straps or briefs or something else from guys. Is the ground being laid for Seth having a fetish and wanting something from the guys? I was hoping they could find him a partner. I think it is great they want to take him out for pizza, He will like the friendship and support.
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Chapter 4 - Olona, Part One
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Olona, Part One
Olana is set free of her teachers and is on the run, Is the warning notice due to Ronging of the Gunge on his hunt? Will Olana fight him off or be a meal? -
Wyoming has very favorable low tax climate for wealthy people. Many have additional home there, I have read. It would be a good place for a family compound, too.
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Larry Ellison and Zuckerberg have very large land holdings/compounds by water in Hawaii.
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Will has started a compound in Hawaii by the surfing beach.
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I am concerned about the upcoming marriages and the fathers who have to let go in the story. I feel a bit anxious as if I have grown up with the young men and women. It is a rite of passage for them, I know, but they need to prepare for their future as adults with careers and loved ones. I am glad that GG is still present to advise them all. BTW, I am very glad you are back.
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What a great tale of exploration. unexpected treasure finding and wise financial management. It was very generous to share part of the proceeds with the tribes and lawyer. The right moves were made at propitious times to find and diversify the assets. It looks like good stocks were bought. I note, too, that the great wealth was not spent profligately on extravagances or towards a high society lifestyle , but the resources were managed wisely for the long term benefit of the family. I bet the family is very, very wealthy. These two guys are level headed and should also safeguard their future by studying in college and working responsibly.
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Chapter 3 - Gunge, Part One
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Gunge, Part One
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So lost and supposedly alone in the cave, Caden cries out for help from Ludwig, He is demoralized and in pain, hurt from falling in the dark. Suddenly, he feels his neck being bitten. Most likely, Ludwig is in need of food and is feeding off Caden. With his need fulfilled will Ludwig now help Caden survive? It seems Caden was coming around to want to find common ground with Ludwig. What does this feeding mean to Ludwig? Does this few day separation give him a chance to rethink like Caden ? Does he want to better relate to Caden or will his religious guilt stop him from moving on? Will their issues still be ignored and will they refuse to talk things out? He surely will not leave Caden alone in the dark to die?
