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I do not have a pistol now, living in a quiet suburb and avoiding big cities. I used a tough, reliable M1911 and loved it when the Army replaced it with a less than satisfactory M 9 aka as the Beretta 92. Now, the Army uses a much better Sig Sauer P320 in two variants which it terms the M17, M18.
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Awesome--Caden survived but felt terrible as if he had a debauched experience of several days of drinking and drugs and just awakened. But he did wake up wondering is this was what it was like making out with a vampire. He did not realize he was drained of too much blood. Ludwig had left him a roasted fish to eat in his cave; Caden shrieked loudly and jumped away. A large spider was on his fish. He was scared--very scared, Ludwig came to Caden and was surprised the large spider scared him. I expect him to push it away--it cannot hurt him--and give the fish to Caden. I think they need to talk and set some boundaries. Ludwig must be stronger since he consumed more blood. Ludwig will want more enjoyable kissing but must not drain Caden. Caden still wants to fuck him.
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Poor Becket is still being kept in the dark. It is like he has joined a play halfway in and has not been told the plot, the main characters and his real role. At least he seems to be losing the snippy dragon and will meet his real guide tomorrow. He has been taken to his "home." He is now enjoying a wonderfully pleasant smelling cleansing pool. I expect he will be surprised, and a bit confused at what happens next.
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Nicely Done, Mark You have us very interested in which 2 will come true I am betting on at least a vindictive Caroline trying to get her revenge. Would the Brotherhood of the branded get involved with an assasination?
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What new joys and feelings Ludwig will deny himself if he kills Caden. I hope he stops draining blood from Caden. This near to dramatic erotic supremely blissful experience is so new to Ludwig. He apparently has not been with a man sexually. But he is feeling wonderful, intense sensations and his body is responding. I can imagine his cock might swell, but I do not know if he can get an orgasm. Might Caden want to blow him ? Will we find out if Ludwig can cum ? If Caden does recover and live, will Ludwig want to find out what more pleasurable episodes can happen to him as Caden fucks him. Caden does want to fuck him. Will Caden flooding his insides with hot cum thrill him even more ? Will he want to keep on being fucked ?
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Oh No! Ludwig was enchanted by Caden's warm body and how he pleasured his cold body and cock. He was over a 1000 years old and these delights were all new to him He was enraptured and could not stop drinking Caden's blood. He was draining the life away from him. Did Ludwig kill Caden? I hope he stops in time. What a cliffhanger !
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What a shocking reveal ! All joined in to educate Randy. What will Randy do? He needs time to think. He would be a fool to say no.
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Chapter 1 - The incident
scrubber6620 commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The incident
Interesting --so many ways to go and they are just 16- 26 comments
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Chapter 24 - A Breakup?
scrubber6620 commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 24 - A Breakup?
I am looking forward to reading what you finish in the next few weeks, Your characters are interesting and I want the good people to work out their problems. As I said earlier....My hope is for Nic and Jake to get back together and help each other become stronger. Besides, they have always had mind blowing, exciting, passionate sex. They need to keep having great sex. -
Track 6) Concrete - Barrie
scrubber6620 commented on coriander's story chapter in Track 6) Concrete - Barrie
I feel a bit lost. I think people who know the recording industry music better than me should comment. This chapter is more textured and complex I gather from the author's comments. I am interested in seeing how Sebastian relates to Miles and his friends at the gay bar. Sebastian seems to be opening up. But, will he too self-conscious? -
Will is amazing, insightful and convincing. He wisely counseled Claire and helped her find a confident way forward. She is trying hard to connect to her kids with Will's advice. He has learned from his past experiences with his family and knows how to be constructive. He can play a very powerful, useful role like no one else. We learned Craig was a real asshole and dumped Claire. He was rightly fired for his poor leadership attitude and Claire was right. Will remains strong and knows what is right. He called Zach and confirmed they can be friends--and not lovers. Will set a time to see him in a few days. Then-- Will smoothly called Travis and arranged to be with him. Finally, Will experienced his second threesome of the evening, What a good life! Mel Books had the French monarch at Versailles in the History of the World movie say after seeing all his mistresses--"It's good to be the King! " I think most times--It is good to be Will!
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BTW, if Ludwig lets Caden fuck him and likes it, then Caden has found a way to be kept alive by being able to please him as well as feed him. If Ludwig really develops into being a bottom, will he want to try more sexual moves with Caden? Caden must not be just into vanilla sex?
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Wow, I did not see that coming. Caden want to fuck Ludwig in return for letting him suck out his blood. Caden is experienced with males and thinks this new type of partner will be thrilling. He thinks it is a fair trade. Ludwig is incensed, This type of sex act is perverted to him. It is opposed by the Bible. They clearly are from different centuries. They seem to be using different versions on English. They are so upset. Caden impulsively kisses Ludwig. Will Ludwig lash out at Caden from this intimate oral assault as it must seem to him? He might not think it is right for men to kiss. Will he stalk away very mad. Or, after being isolated for 100 's of years will he find comfort in being kissed with skill? His sexual desires have been suppressed for a very long time. Will he like it and soon let himself be seduced? They are like prisoners in isolation in a max security jail. They might grow to accept the need to help each other out sexually.
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Good for both of them. It is finally time for Matty to fuck Rusty. They both want it. Stumbling and not giving up, Matty is slowly entering Rusty. They both are learning about their desires and wants. It is charming I hope no one saw them going at it in the woods. Xpress will have a field day.
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Track 5) Jumpstarted - Jukebox The Ghost
scrubber6620 commented on coriander's story chapter in Track 5) Jumpstarted - Jukebox The Ghost
Now, we are getting somewhere. Miles is dissolving the barriers Sebastian has established. He shocked Sebastian by asking him if he was gay and learned he was in his terms a "baby" gay and just out of the closet. Miles seems more experienced in gay matters. Sebastian is so new and innocent and could have gotten upset. What could have been a mess by focusing just on sexual issues kept moving along as they both appreciated each other's talents creating a work of art. They are good together in the studio. The music was impressive. Do both want more? The challenge might be for them to connect personally outside the studio. Can they get along emotionally and be able to become physically intimate? -
drpaladin --Loved the Sands of Time dragon reference, Xavier--the hero--was a huge great sand dragon some times as well as a small half elf other times. The Roland site also features the Kandic Saga about a half elf who fights dragons of all sizes as well as Beyond the Crags which some at some point should tie into Sands of Times. The dragon in this story seems quite different from others I have read about so he is mysterious at this point to me.
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This is feeling a bit like Alice Through the Looking Glass--so many creatures in a surreal world who mock the traveling human. The small dragon seems not right for a guide and protector, unless he can expand to be a fierce and powerful ally for Becket. Oh well, we need to read much more and let the story unfold. At some point, Beckett could find out why he was selected.
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Chapter 33 - The Beginning
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 33 - The Beginning
Both the Principal Messiah and Vion incurred horrible deaths. Eroli died killing Vion. It was a sad ending. But, the key enemies who were responsible for the attacks on humans and shifts could not stand against our heroes, The crew were going to keep on attacking the Messiahs." Lahari stepped up to gaze out at the panoramic view. Then she turned back to Gawa and S’Kay and said, “This is just the beginning.” This was a good and very interesting story full of individuals you care about. Thank you. I am looking forward to Book 3. -
Chapter 32 - Sacrifice
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 32 - Sacrifice
Thankfully, Tchama recovered with only missing an arm. She developed survivors' guilt and regretted turning into a messiah. Ninyani gave her the gland she saved in time, The group thinks they need a new name for good messiahs. They will think on it, So will I. But, Lahari is missing,. What has happened to her? -
Chapter 31 - Vion, Part Five
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 31 - Vion, Part Five
Wow--Vion was not called to see the Principal Messiah to receive a formal reprimand for failing in his attack and for the loss of so many dead messiahs. He was required to clean up and see her in her bedroom wearing lingerie to provide sex for her. He was totally shocked. But it was not an uncommon request be her--only new to Vion. Purple electricity erupted--The Eastern Dorm was under attack. The bio-shifts are seeking to kill many more messiahs. When the Tower was destroyed,.... "Gawa sent her purple electricity radiating towards the structure’s summit...." -
Finally, they are almost at an honest equilibrium. Caden decides not to go for the quick kill and then have to subsist barely on animal blood, Caden realizes he cannot kill Ludwig with a spear or ward him off with crosses, Caden has to accept he will be foodstock for Ludwig, no matter how disgusting it will be. But by being food for Ludwig, Caden wants something. What is it? I can suggest three options that Caden might want from Ludwig----- help building a home near the beach so he will not have to live in a cold cave--and always be subject to be sucked since it is perpetually dark in the cave companionship being taught living skills and having an open discussion about each other so Caden can better know Ludwig--he knows he will be lonely--if just related to when his blood was needed -- he might well crave companionship and some control over his life even if limited by the power Ludwig has over him some sort of sexual relationship--since Caden is very gay and could be very frustrated if he has to just jack off for relief--They do have cultural differences and Ludwig seems to not understand his gay references and may not want a gay relationship even if it were possible Caden --you have your best leverage right now, speak clearly and honestly to Ludwid, please, Hold nothing back!
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Chapter 30 - Auntie Peg & Ninyani, Part Two
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 30 - Auntie Peg & Ninyani, Part Two
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I note a couple of guys think something bad is going to happen next. They suggest the good news cannot last. Maybe it can last for a longer period--especially if Thad lives. I prefer not to look for bad news or be a cynic. A cynic is a man who, when he smells flowers, looks around for a coffin. H. L. Mencken
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What a wonderful, heartwarming chapter of male comradeship, sexual bliss and renewal. The beta is stronger and his chances are more positive. After so much pain and uncertainty, these guys deserved a break and time to feel good and bond and laugh. Randy really fit in and was accepted. Skyler is now known to be part of the bi scene. Trevor said once again neither of his boyfriends was his mate. He is returning to grad school to finish his education--but knows much more about himself and is very pleased.
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Chapter 29 - Alone
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 29 - Alone
It is also a reminder that humans can be really stupid. Trying to kill a bio-shift head on results in the death of humans. Humans can be too greedy. When they all meet at the tavern, they might feel a needs to attack more to be safe or try to find a better place to hide till things quiet down.
