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I hope they fire the bitch from Hell! She does not need to be around children - especially ones with anxiety issues!
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Well this is a interesting read. The boys are having a "rocky" beginning but I believe Matias is interested in Kyle but has some serious baggage! And what's up with that loan shark guy?
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No parent wants to go through what the boys are having to face! You feel so helpless and just want to hug the kids wishing the illness to go away! Very good story development Frank - I want to go hug Ethan myself!!
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Yes I agree - unable to get your breath is a very frightening experience especially for a six year old!!
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WOW ! What a chapter. I too was holding my breath with all the action happening. I had to re-read a few paragraphs! Bruce somehow found the back door and saved the day! Great story kbois as always! Thank you!!
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I'm trying to keep my hope up for both guys!!! Heart wrenching !
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Unrequited love is a tuff pill to swallow even for a medic! Lucas has probably come to a decision that he needs reciprocal actions or closure and a transfer to another unit. Another heart-wrenching, but excellent, chapter!
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I agree, Lucas is good for Seb ! Most individuals are unaware of the grim realities of war but this chapter brings some of those into the spotlight! I'll also not comment - but just smile - about the description of Churchill ! Another great chapter James!
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WOW - this story is becoming increasingly difficult to read! It brings back my own memories of the shit storm of Viet Nam! Afghanistan is still a shit storm after all these years! It's your excellent writing James that brings forth these emotions and makes this story so believable!
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I really enjoy the sincere comraderies of all the guys. Now we need to discover the mystery of Lukas Hans! Another great chapter - thanks James!
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Could be the beginning of a great friendship and maybe more!
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Yes - I believe anyone over 5-ft and 100 lbs is NOT jockey material! BUT - Cadets and Army are like night and day differences!!! Let's hope for the best! Great start James.
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I can only agree with everyone else - a wonderful ending to a fantastic story. It was a pleasure to read! Thank you !
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Well I suppose it was the best outcome that could be achieved considering the location! I would have loved to see some jail time for Jackass - I mean Jackson!
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I agree, the environment of where this story takes place is paramount and, wider exposure of the film is the key for immediate and appropriate resolution!!! Great story Ivor Slipper - thank you!
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Me thinks Craig is already hooked! Their chemistry is simply perfect!
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I agree Craig seems to be seriously considering change, nonetheless, it is always a scary step!
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The winds of change are circling Craig but will they be strong enough to dissolve and remove his uncertainties! This coming weekend with James may be his catalyst to make the change! I can relate to Craig's dilemma and absolutely love this continuing story - thank you Mawgrim!
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Yes it's refreshing to see that the bad guys get their due and just punishment. Now lets see about Rabbit and Bax !!
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Great chapter! Too many people know too many secrets!! Its bound to get interesting for McCallister- just can't call him reverend!!
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Yes a tough chapter on several fronts! My bets are on Effr's coming through and creating a far better life for Timothy! I have personally witnessed hatred spewed from bible-thumping hypocrites and it makes my blood boil. Looking forward to following this great story. Thank you drsawzall.
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Great start and good development for a new Maple Hollow story. Thank you !
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Yes indeed, inquiring minds want to know ! Me thinks Jason needs to stick with tea!
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I could not imagine! I was driving at 16! It was like a right of passage for a teenager!
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They are both so naïve - this should be very interesting. Let's hope the "date" turns out well!
