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KayDeeMac

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    Lightning

    WOW! A powerful chapter! Jered is not the brightest bulb on the block but still, Cheryl is being awfully vengeful! She does not want anyone of "her" family and "her" friend to know of their separation! It might be the lawyers' persona but it seems a bit too damming and self-centered on her part. Granted Jared screwed up - big time - but, she seems hellbent on making him suffer to the most severe degree instead of trying to reach some sort of reconciliation.
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    Rain

    A great chapter that brought answers to several questions. I also agree the second argument may be very reveling as to their current relationship. Excellent reading JRAdept - thank you!!
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    Chapter 13

    Connor and Jason seem good for each other. Let's hope Jason's Dad recovers and he opens up to both parents about his sexuality.
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    Chapter 12

    Jason needs to own his feelings and let his gay self out otherwise he will be driving himself more crazy! Connor seemingly has more experience with being out but seems like a good guy and he is obviously totally into Jason!
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    Past Horror

    I am new to this story but I believe it is autobiographical to a great extent! My love story is similar to yours just California based!. My husband and I are still together after 43 years!! Great story and thank you r-eric!!
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    Chapter 13

    Yes "Gold Star" parents for sure! But I can't help but think the trial for Mayson will not go so smoothly! Someone that sadistic usually has an equally sadistic childhood! Another great chapter! Thank you Frank!
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    Chapter 12

    Yea - what a way to meet the parents is right! Just hope Dad is on their side - but his surprise reaction to seeing his son holding hands with the victim does not bode well with me! Great read Frank - thank you!!
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    Chapter 11

    Great chapter! Olivia finally wakes-up and tries to make amends! Mayson's timing sucks!!! Really enjoying the story Frank. Thank you!!
  9. Another great chapter and yea the kilt was a good addition!! I had the pleasure of meeting John Denver at a party in California many many moons ago. He is a genuinely good natured person. Thanks Carlos and a belated Happy Birthday!!!
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    Rondo

    Anger issues with Helene are probably going to be nothing compared to the tornado of Heinrich. I just hope Jerry remains at his best friend's side during this shit storm!! And - given the chance - Debbie will make mincemeat out of Zoltan I am sure! An absolutely fantastic story Parker! Thank you so much!!
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    Chapter 31

    I am soooo glad the boys had legal representation to stand-up to the "all-high-and-mighty" scholars !! Powerful chapter with a lot of family bonding!
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    Chapter 30

    A very good and interesting chapter. I also find ancient history fascinating! Circumnavigating the ocean in a small craft has got to be crazy scary !! Although, I would jump at a chance to take a rocket ride to the moon or to the red planet !!
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    Fox vs. Hounds

    Well I'm just going to say I believe Farmer saw the writing on the wall and was resourceful enough to get Phillip in the loop to insure the boys safety!!
  14. Yes I agree Farmer was acting as a surrogate father and now Phillip knows that as well! Let's hope he can convince Detective Murphy to keep CPS out of the picture!
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    Chapter 5

    Yes I agree it seems conclusive that Neil is a victim of physical abuse and probably verbal abuse as well! Cousin Jorge seems supportive and somewhat calming to Neil! I wonder if West will be allowed to stay home from the family trip???
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    Chapter 3

    Interesting chapter. It seems West is truly concerned and/or questioning the school board's closed-door secretive decision! It might be racism at its worst!!!
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    Prologue

    Very interesting prologue! It has captured my attention already!
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    Chapter 11

    Aiden is more than complex - I think he is multiplex!!! Strange encounter to say the least. It may be interesting to see exactly who he is dating!!
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    Chapter 10

    The boys definitely need a more isolated environment where they can openly express their feelings and desires! Perhaps Connor's flat will be the perfect place for that to happen "along with dinner" !!
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    Chapter 9

    Another "feel good" chapter! Seems as though they both like to grab ass as well as other things !!!
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    Chapter 8

    Connor was not going to stand Jason up but felt the need to reinforce his intentions of being there albeit a little late!! Me thinks Connor is as much smitten as Jason is!! Good chapter - but - I just wish Jason would be honest with his parents. He has been a good and devoted son to the family and I sense they will be accepting and encourage his developing relationship!
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    Chapter 7

    A very well written chapter and, I agree with Mawgrim that you were able to capture the awkward teenage shyness. I believe Connor is sincere and will be a good boyfriend!
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    Chapter 6

    Yes ""C&J"" has a nice ring to it !
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    Agitato

    An extremely well written chapter Parker!! I believe I was holding my breathe the for entire drive to Chicago! Rick's frustrations were well conveyed and powerful! I am sooo glad someone called for a plumber! ( A great line.) Now the real disentanglement between Gus and Zoltan begins. I only hope Gus, having Rick at his side, will empower him to standup to Zoltan's demands! Superb writing my friend - thank you!!
  25. Its going to be a looooong two months! I want to believe that Aidan was giving his Dad/Brother the stink-eye!!
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