Ivor Slipper
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If the boys agree to Jake photographing and painting them, how they are going to explain their sudden wealth to their parents? As was said $50 was a lot of money back in 1975.
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Maybe Jake was planning ahead in removing Nate's shorts from the bonnet of the van? Nate won't want to come busting in on them in the nude, so there is bound to be some noise when he can't find them. But, having said that, I don't have the feeling Jake is that devious.
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Danny & Nate's explanation for the appearance of Jake is a good piece of invention at first sight. However, it can only be effective for a limited period if Jake is supposed to be 'working up and down the coast'. It is, after all, only a small town and any writer would have found out enough about it in a few days and then move on to the next town. I think you need a Plan B boys.
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Enjoyed the story and look forward to future developments. Thompsonville, here we come!
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Based on what she said at the funeral 'She looked at us, “Please take care of him. He’s a good boy.”', I can't see how it can be bad tidings. That line rather rules out the thought that she might be thinking of trying to get custody.
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An there was I expecting Tim's parents to come home early and catch them in flagrante...
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Is Tim about to discover the show must go on, come what may?
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Thank you @flesco! It's always pleasing to receive comments on stories and to know that someone has truly enjoyed the tale I've written.
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What a way to end a beautiful evening! However, as the question was whispered i suspect the voice inb the dark is not Dad's.
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I suspect the musical will prove to be a snowystorm. 😀
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Thank you for commenting. I'm pleased to know you enjoyed reading the story. i don't have any plans for further stories about Tris & Ty, but i do have other stories you could try...🙂
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'Some like it Hot' - and that was definitely a hot coming together! At least Ben only winked - for now! 😁
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The latter also being part of 'learning to deal with it' 🙂 Of course some post spanking attention also helps in that respect...
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I'm pleased to hear it stood up to second reading - thanks.
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Ty's mom wasn't happy about his choice of clothes, or the lack thereof, for the first meeting with the new neighbors. Ty had accompanied her in hope rather than expectation, but if you've got it, why not flaunt it?
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Sorry to disappoint you!
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Thanks @chris191070. He did write come good 'first love' stories, although not of the gay genre...
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Thanks @Cane23 . Glad you enjoyed. CP definitely still occurs in Texas schools. It also definitely did occur in South African private schools and may still do. I don't think I was that specific about the time period for this story.
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Kingdoms come - and kingdoms go. Some last longer than others and some go peacefully.🙂
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All the World's a Stage (King Dick III) 'A horse! a horse! my kingdom for a horse!' It's one of Shakespeare's most famous lines and I'm going to get to say it live on stage in front of an audience! Not once, but twice, as the school play is having two performances on Friday and Saturday nights. Maybe it isn't his most famous line – after all it isn't one you can drop into everyday conversation. Come to that, not many of them are. 'Friends, Romans, Countrymen'; 'Now
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Thirteen year old Tristram was born and has spent all his life in South Africa until the point at which the family moved to Texas. On the day they move into their new house he discovers there is a boy of his own age, Tyler, living next door...
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An enjoyable and imaginative flight of fancy. 🙂
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What a great story! And there is the real hero of the story.
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Is this what they term an icecliffhanger? 😀
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The ultimate test to show if your words really do have meaning or are simply hollow noises. Jem having already sacrificed his life to save Nico in the Marksman game it should not come as to much of a surprise he'd have the same instinct in a real life situation.
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