Ivor Slipper
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If they are, they'd best not end up in any yards.🙂
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Yep, she even believed them when they said they were "just going fishin'"
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Just remember... The two best horse thieves in the world were Bonnie and Clydesdale.
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Fishing eh? So that's what they call tickling the trout...🐟🙂
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She was for a while, but then her shooting went to pot, 🙂
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Their task is definitely going to need balls! 🙂
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I am very sorry that the story has affected you in that way. In my defence I would point out that on the actual story page it does show the rape tag, so there was a warning to potential readers.
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One would hope such things don't happen, but sadly they do - even today, although the odds are much better that the perpetrator would be caught.
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In my mind this story was set in times before DNA testing became common, especially in smaller locations. Plus Josh's total reluctance to admit what had happened to his Grandfather. Am pleased though that apart, the story worked for you.
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This is the end of the story. I tried earlier to change the status to 'complete' but couldn't do so. Apologies about that and any resulting confusion. I'll try again now.
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Yes, Josh was naive, but without Ethan around he fell for Brett's charm offensive. He's very lucky that Ethan loves him so much he is prepared to forgive Josh for being dumped, and overlook what Brett did to him.
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I'm sure it didn't make for comfortable reading. Brett should have to pay for his actions, but I think in that environment it would be hard to prove what happened. Grandpa would probably argue that Josh got what he deserved... The idea of Grandpa's body being consumed by vermin does have appeal - the biter bit, or something like that. Glad you enjoyed it @Headstall
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Love is definitely at work here, healing the wounds and the hurt Josh has suffered. I think their future will be free of storms.
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Hooray indeed! Josh finally has happiness a'plenty back in his life.
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I'd agree with you about the date @raven1 and there certainly is meant to be a feeling of depression about Josh. Thanks.
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Yes, I had a story to tell, but it was one of abandonment and betrayal. He'd been my best, virtually my only, friend, for years but then I dumped him. Left him to the wolves. He knew that of course, but here he was again having come over because he was worried about me. I truly didn't deserve him. We were a pair of geeks, or nerds, interested in books and learning. We had no real interest in sports or games, unless you count something like table tennis! He had a table at his house and I lov
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Yep, his ma found that in a lucky dip!
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It does look that way.
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I appreciate the detailed comments on the chapter @Anton_Cloche Ethan does have a large part to play in the story. As for the briefs, all I can say is that I remember wearing similar in the 60s, but I can see in the domestic situation I have described it is somewhat unlikely.
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Some are luckier than others with both parents and grandparents. Josh appears to have been unlucky with his grandfather, but at least he took him in and gave him a home. Appreciate the comment.
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Thanks for reading @Headstall and the comment. It won't be too long before you find out about your suspicions.
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Dat's true! 😄
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Some, but hopefully not too many
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Dare I say 'All will be revealed'? 🙂
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Josh doesn't quite realise how good a friend Ethan is. They do indeed need to be careful, Grandpa would not take kindly to them being intimate.
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