Ivor Slipper
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Chapter 11 On the Move again
Ivor Slipper commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in Chapter 11 On the Move again
An interesting chapter, although I find it almost impossible to believe Collin would have been interned in the Netherlands during WW1. -
Good to see Jamie developing his artistic talent, but I rather doubt there is money to be made from it in that area, unless he is 'discovered' by one of the wealthy individuals.
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We need a selfie in the Villa Cimbrone gardens
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I guess not lavender tie-dyed?🙂
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From reading the press reports of the problems at UK airports, I can only wish you a trouble free journey.
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Dare I suggest that you should speed write more often?😀 A holiday 'romance' with a difference that had all your followers hooked. None were left disappointed at the ending and neither were Reza or Otto. (And to others who have read and enjoyed this piece of writing, do not forget to 'vote' for the actual story as well as the individual chapters)
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As @raven1 said, this chapter was brilliantly written with Reza struggling to decipher what his body was experiencing. I do have a little complaint though @James Carnarvon. This line came far too soon! 😀 “Very nice,” Otto said. “It’s bigger than mine.”
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Just be careful what you do with your flies!
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Seems to me he could be in need of a bit of that type of schooling without the 'l' 😉
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And so the chapter ends with Reza putting the old Yellow Pages slogan into practice.😀
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The one thing that really surprised me was the church. For some reason that has never been in my mind as a pristine white building, but rather old stone. Evidently something I've missed while reading.
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In this instance, I think just mentioning it is there will enable those so inclined to discover it for themselves. 😉
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There's a wordplay joke in that sentence, but I won't go there...
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Don't know about reserving sunloungers, but it appears Otto wants to reserve Reza.🙂
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Looks like Reza is in for an interesting week, discovering things about Ravello and himself.
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What a pleasant surprise for a Sunday morning. Have to wonder if Reza will encounter any of the characters from the previous Ravello stories.
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That sure was a story and a half! The elves came out to save the day and chased all the boojums away Now Charlie & Co are back on the hill in time for the firework display.
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Bait? I'm sure there has to be an 'elf and safety' issue about using that! 🙂 Great rescue mission successfully accomplished thanks to the talents of Caspar & Keerby and their diversions. Even so, a bit nail biting at times.
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A new breed of fire ants!
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A lot of good thinking and planning here by the 'Merrie Men' I'm sure though that as predicted by @drsawzall the actual rescue will not go simply to plan. Where would be the fun and excitement if it did?
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Wow! that really was a gripping, tension packed chapter. It took all of the group's combined resources to fight off the boojums and their converts, but at the cost of Ricky being captured. However, Keerby managed to encase him in a protective shield to prevent him coming to any harm. Nevertheless it is easy to understand Adrian being distraught at his boyfriend's disappearance.
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He might be in for a Reudi awakening!🙂
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Let's all go to the ball game!🏈 Having dealt with those boojums I'm sure Charlie is up to handling the Bears, even if The Fridge happens to be around!
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That was an enlightening round table conference - except the table wasn't round. 🙂 Alternative reality world (and boojums!) here we come!
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I wasn't anticipating a quick return to the Eagle's Nest. There's definitely something eyrie going on there. 🦅🙂
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