Ivor Slipper
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That was a gripping, tension packed, chapter!
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Now Dani has two friends. It will be interesting to see how his relationship with Marco develops as he evidently to come from a poorer home, of which he is acutely aware.
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Dani is certainly an expert at getting himself into scrapes. 🙂 Maybe he should introduce Marco to Gianni, although that would be difficult I suspect.
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Wow! That was a nerve tingling read. But the final line was brilliant in changing the tone and letting us wait for the next chapter in a much more optimistic frame of mind.
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So what is Marco's secret - or whatever it is that seemingly makes him want to be unhappy and unwilling to be friends? Wonder what has happened to the aunt and uncle? If they'd been found by the authorities surely they would have said where they left Sami? Questions, questions. Over to you @James Carnarvonfor the answers.🙂
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I agree with @drpaladin - beautifully and descriptively told as always. Now we have yet another broken friendship. But at least Dani & Giacomo appear to be getting back together, even if not in the way Dani would like.
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Hopefully there won't be a need to rename one of the streets Via Dolorosa.🙂
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It appears almost everyone is falling out with someone.
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Poor Gianni. It is never nice for the relatives when death comes like that. And, to a lesser extent, poor Dani - although he at least had his suspicions of what might happen.
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Another excellent thought provoking chapter. I just wonder if whoever ran down Maurice may have miscalculated. Might not the killing of her husband make Brenda more willing to tell what she knows about past events?
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What a pleasant Sunday surprise to find the start of a new story in the Ravello series. A very intriguing opening part and surely having created the refugee characters, they must be destined to feature further in the story? Poor Dani. Just when he starts to think his relationship with Giacomo might develop further, along comes a girl to toss the proverbial spanner in the works.
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The tension is building!
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Another superb story of exploration and discovery. Not only of the land and its wild inhabitants, but also for the main characters.
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"And tell them I’ve been dreaming about a thirty year old murder? That’d go down well." That's where the body is supposed to be! 🙂 Another chapter in which the puzzles just got bigger!
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One of these days Maurice is going to let the cat out of the bag! At least we know it's not down the well...
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The plot soup is thickening nicely. And now with bones to add to the stock. 🦴🦴🙂
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Just one chapter? There appear to be a lot of loose ends still to tie up...
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An excellent mystery with an intriguing cast of characters. Like @drsawzall I'm hoping to see further stories from you at this site.
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I think Dan should name his phone a Nookia! 🙂 Like @drpaladin I can't wait for the seance.
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I think Sgt. Hicks needs to apply the Sherlock Holmes principle to the case, especially as it sort of took place in Baker Street. 🙂
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Poor Dylan! First his father and now his mother who apparently couldn't cope with the situation. The contrast of life in the Hick's home as opposed to his own must have come as a big, but pleasant, surprise. From now on though he'll have to use self raising flour!!
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'Only the Keys have keys' 😀 That neat one liner stood out for me in a well written chapter, as what is at stake increases.
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Was it Devil's cake or Angel cake that was stuffed in Keys' mouth?🙂 The finger of suspicion is certainly pointing in one direction right now.
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I'm sure the Chateau du Gateau would have been high on the list of establishments patronised by Marie Antoinette. 🎂🙂 Joking aside, this looks like it could lead to an interesting story.
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The spookiness increases!
