Ivor Slipper
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Guess they'd never heard this - or maybe they had and that was where they hid it!
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It was a comment that I expected would only have meaning to a section of readers. 🙂
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Chapter 4 Texas Two-Step
Ivor Slipper commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 4 Texas Two-Step
Couldn't stop reading until I reached the end. Seems Larkspur will be gaining a couple more inhabitants. Virgil & Wyatt will surely be happy there.- 88 comments
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It just needed someone to lift the lid slightly and let in a little light.
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Tension building nicely.
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Chapter 1 Matador Hill
Ivor Slipper commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 Matador Hill
Great to see another western from you Gary. Sound as if Virgil has happened on an environment that needs some protection.- 60 comments
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Evidently not a Mary Berry cake. 🎂 🙂
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Neatly reunited to bring the story to a happy conclusion.
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15. Parting and Fare-ye-wells
Ivor Slipper commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in 15. Parting and Fare-ye-wells
So, what has seemed inevitable has finally happened. The pair have made the logical decision to go their separate ways into the future, but will some stroke of chance bring them back together?? -
Very powerful indeed. The lighthouse may well have saved someone from crashing into a rocky shore.
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A moving chapter that gave pause for thought.
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Chapter 11 On the Move again
Ivor Slipper commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in Chapter 11 On the Move again
An interesting chapter, although I find it almost impossible to believe Collin would have been interned in the Netherlands during WW1. -
Good to see Jamie developing his artistic talent, but I rather doubt there is money to be made from it in that area, unless he is 'discovered' by one of the wealthy individuals.
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We need a selfie in the Villa Cimbrone gardens
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I guess not lavender tie-dyed?🙂
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From reading the press reports of the problems at UK airports, I can only wish you a trouble free journey.
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Dare I suggest that you should speed write more often?😀 A holiday 'romance' with a difference that had all your followers hooked. None were left disappointed at the ending and neither were Reza or Otto. (And to others who have read and enjoyed this piece of writing, do not forget to 'vote' for the actual story as well as the individual chapters)
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As @raven1 said, this chapter was brilliantly written with Reza struggling to decipher what his body was experiencing. I do have a little complaint though @James Carnarvon. This line came far too soon! 😀 “Very nice,” Otto said. “It’s bigger than mine.”
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Just be careful what you do with your flies!
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Seems to me he could be in need of a bit of that type of schooling without the 'l' 😉
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And so the chapter ends with Reza putting the old Yellow Pages slogan into practice.😀
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The one thing that really surprised me was the church. For some reason that has never been in my mind as a pristine white building, but rather old stone. Evidently something I've missed while reading.
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In this instance, I think just mentioning it is there will enable those so inclined to discover it for themselves. 😉
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There's a wordplay joke in that sentence, but I won't go there...
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Don't know about reserving sunloungers, but it appears Otto wants to reserve Reza.🙂
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