Ivor Slipper
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Appreciate your comment. Happy I'm able to introduce you to things you were unaaware of.
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I sure hope you do.
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Opted for the 'Ha Ha' icon rather than the 'Love', but there are times more than one is needed. Pleased to know I managed to smack your gob CG 😁
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It was a tough read and I can only imagine how tough it was to write. One's characters do take on a life so it is hard to have such things happen to them.
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Published, Unpublished and now, finally visible. Glad I found it in the end.
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Thanks, Geron. Indeed, where does fact end and fiction begin? It would seem Ben may be about to find the answer to that question on Friday night.
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Pleased to hear that you've stuck with it, James. Yes, their intimate relations do face serious difficulties because of what happened to Troy. How they work those out will become a significant part of the story.
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Adam has spent a large part of his life being made to think he is not a good person. As he sees it his presence is causing problems for Troy, so the solution is for him to leave - as he intended before. He really hasn't thought over much about how he will survive.
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I understand your problem and can only suggest that you try skipping over them. It is basically a gay teen relationship story in which the main characters are faced with various unexpected problems. Their sexual orientation is the cause of most of those and they draw more and more together as a result.
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Thanks for the comments @quttzik. Glad to know you enjoyed the story. I think it is best to leave the reader to decide if Ben really did foresee the future while has was in a coma.
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I don't think George has written that story - yet!
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Thanks, Gary. A case of whether truth is stranger than fiction - perhaps... It was fun to write, so glad you enjoyed.
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Thanks, Chris. Glad to know you enjoyed this little flight of fancy.
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It seems Ben is looking forward to his sleepover. What happens there could show Ben whether it was all just a dream, or if he realy did see into the future. Appreciate your comments @weinerdog
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Glad you found it! Yes, both parties could be heading into murky waters - and not in the swimming pool. 🙂
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Thanks again, Gary.
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The Meeting He thought he heard a voice calling his name, “Ben,” but it seemed very, very far away. Then he heard it again, “Ben,” but this time it seemed a little closer. The voice came again, “Ben, wake up Ben, please?” It was definitely much closer now he told himself. Perhaps it was time to get up and get ready to go to school. But it was so comfortable here he didn't want to make the effort. “Ben, please, please, wake up,” he heard this time, even closer still. He struggled to m
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Ben & Jake have set off to meet George at the Natural History Museum in London. How does that turn out?
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Chapter 16 Roped and Tied
Ivor Slipper commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 16 Roped and Tied
'All good things must come to an end' it is said - sadly true in this case. An excelent story, superbly told, with a real feel for the time and place in which it is set.- 98 comments
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lol! Mrs C is in full mom mode with another boy to look after. As for exercise, Troy has his swimming and Adam has started running - no doubt with some gym work for both. Plus they both have bikes, although admittedly no big hills to cycle up as in Ravello. 😀
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Yes, Adam is discovering new talents while Try is finding out that life isn't necessarily a bed of roses.
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Very creepy! But what was the threat the village faced to require the ritual to be performed?
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There are definitely pitfalls ahead - it couldn't be as long as story as this is without them! Troy's family as depicted, is possibly too accepting, but do make a good contrast to Adam's.
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Sadly they do exist, but they are outnumbered by the decent ones.
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It's always pleasing when someone 'discovers' an old story of mine - and then comments on it. As you said in a post on your just completed story, there are always new stories appearing to interest readers without the need to delve into the dusty archives. There is sex in the story, which you may find not to your taste. But I'd argue it is somewhat of an aside to what else develops on their journey.
