Ivor Slipper
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Chapter 2: The Gray Honda
Ivor Slipper commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 2: The Gray Honda
Ah, so we're saying the same thing, but from opposite directions. 🙂 -
Chapter 2: The Gray Honda
Ivor Slipper commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 2: The Gray Honda
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The Curse of Being Beautiful
Ivor Slipper commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in The Curse of Being Beautiful
Very impressive and enjoyable. I just wonder if you would have more readers if you had split the story into chapters and posted them on successive days? I suspect a lot of people may be deterred by the length of the story when presented whole. -
Good to get back to Eric and learn of his childhood and upbringing - the things that more or less shaped the course of his future life. I'm sure that for many young people at the time, especially those living outside the big cities, the 'Swinging Sixties' was something only read about in newspapers or seen on TV or cinema screen, rather than actually experienced.
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Glad to see you're still hanging with the story @James Carnarvon. So, yes, we go from pleasant to horrible with a few stops along the way.
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The twins are about to enter a very weird word it appears. Both suggested names have something going for them, but if their shows are going to be mainly abut cooking, then it should be the latter as it will quickly become obvious that they are twin boyfriends. Another thought would be Double Cream😁
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One big question is what is in this for Leo?
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I briefly thought they were going to turn into a pair of couch potatoes. But then they got back on track...
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I look on this chapter as being like a lime sorbet palate cleanser, so we can better appreciate the meatier course to come. I suspect the passion fruit ice cream is being saved for desert...
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Robin's thefts have thus far been from different premises in different cities. We are unaware of whether or not the same company has been targeted more than once. However, you can be sure that no insurance company will keep paying out on claims to the same insured for the same occurrence. They will just stop cover. Think of what happened in the UK with regard to flood damage from overflowing rivers.
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Dunno about a cake - I'm waiting for chocolate eclairs! 😁
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Yeah, that was definitely skating on thin ice - that olive is a real slippery gal.😀
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Intriguingly one of the offerings on BBC TV in the UK for Christmas Day was 'Robin Hood' - the Errol Flynn version... Did Geron know something?
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Struggling to find any words that can express how much I've enjoyed this marvellous story. Truly excellent, Geron
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A great chapter! Mind you I was secretly looking forward to a dust up in the street - Kontus deserves a bit of fun... 🙂
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That's an excellent theory @weinerdog I believe you could be onto something. Perhaps he will agree to send them back if they agree to find a way to make changes there. Mind you, there is always Nicholas.....
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Twelve Drummers Drumming
Ivor Slipper commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Twelve Drummers Drumming
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All's well that ends well - at least for one of the puppies. And I'm sure Jerry will soon be washing and grooming him.
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A very special Christmas delivery! Thanks @drsawzall
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Wow!! So Robin's not so nice after all, although I can sort of understand him wanting to know more about who is confronting him. Anyway, we don't have to worry if he comes from Canada - after all the Mounties always get their man! 😁
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I feared the Ambrosia line probably wouldn't work in the US - bit like courgettes in another story.🙂 CG might be surprised at what he finds!
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The sheriff of whatever city it is the boys live in sure got a shock tonight! As indeed did Charlie & Co - and Robin. There sure is a mystery afoot as to his identity.
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Hmm... I doubt you'd find an eggplant or a hundred dollar bill in Leeds.🙂
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Good thing that fire alarm didn't activate a sprinkler system! Mind you, that would have helped the seed to grow. It seems, for the moment, as if the alien presence is friendly - but.....
