Ivor Slipper
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Yes, he finally let himself do what he's been wanting to do for some time and has now cut the umbilical cord completely
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When I was in the room waiting for the op I'd been asked if I'd had anything to eat or drink this morning and could honestly say 'No' to both, which seemed to be a good thing. Mrs C told me later the lack of me having had either meant they could operate quickly as having food in my system might cause problems with the anaesthetic. I also had to change into a hospital gown which I soon discovered wasn't an aid to modesty! Mind you, Troy had seen every bit of me, often, and for some reason I wasn'
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As @glennish says, there are several possible sidelines that could be explored.
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Didn't spot this was a follow up story to Poa when it appeared, so now enjoying catching up without having to wait or the next chapter
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Thanks Glennish. He's learned to trust Troy, but he hasn't quite got there yet with adults. I'm sure it will come.
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And now you can join the rest who have to wait for the next chapter to appear Thanks for all the comments along the way.
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I hope that's not your appendix that's grumbling CG Adam is definitely a romantic at heart. He has a vision of Troy making love to him and while he can accept Troy's fingers as part of the route to that, he is struggling to accept the idea of an object. He knows Troy sees 'Dicky' differently and is thus willing to make him happy by using it on him.
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Oh shite!
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I'm seated reading your comment, so no problemo
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All I can say is that my USA spellcheck doesn't object to Mr or Mrs without the dot. But I agree, you are very sweet and generous.
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Interesting Will. I do run the chapters through US spell-check, but I must have missed that manoeuvre here.
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Can but hope your faith in the author will be rewarded. The BJ may have been forced but it was still a sexual assault. Agreed Troy would be more affected, but Adam is affected by the idea of what Troy was forced to do.
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Thanks, Will. I wouldn't want you to hold your breath
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You may have a point, but my only experience of using an editor here was not a good one. Thus I prefer to continue as I am and take the brickbats that may be thrown in my direction as a result.
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I am my own editor, although I do have a couple of people who read through each chapter to spot anything glaringly obvious. However, neither wish to claim credit for that, so no editor is shown.
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This was originally written as a story that finished at the end of Chapter 2. I then decided there was more to explore with these two characters and since then I have been managing to write a chapter a week - which evidently isn't quick enough for some people
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I'm glad you are enjoying the story, Will I do get disappointed when silly errors creep in such as the first couple you mention. Spellchecking won't find them and even reading the story through a few times they can still slip through. You're also quite correct about the pronouns. I might try and excuse those by saying the story is being written by a 15 year old who won't have perfect grammar - but that would be a cop out, so I won't
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Proving the cause would be virtually impossible I think, although I suspect Troy may well blame him. The idea of Adam sending his ma a 'memento' of him to reciprocate the one she sent him of his father, does have appeal
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Fortunately things have improved in that respect although I don't really approve of keeping any wild animal captive.
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I believe Dr. Droughtquake was to the fore in coming up with that diagnosis, for which he should be awarded his own personal heated stethoscope Your final thought is evil, but I like it
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In some ways it was good timing. He got to enjoy Thanksgiving with his new family and he should be fully recovered in time for Christmas. Carlos would probably enjoy being squeezed, depending on which part you had in mind
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Misfortune does seem to dog his footsteps I agree. Hopefully this won't prove to be a major problem.
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Glad you did! I think Tom must have been a boy scout
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I see you got your answer from @travlbug
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Nope - Adam's parents wouldn't have approved of such frivolities while Carlos' didn't have the money for such things. Hopefully, the appendix will be removed before it bursts. Adam doesn't need that complication in his life
