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Brayon

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  1. Thanks, Wayne. Thanks, kbois. Already filed for Unemployment and for EBT. Not sure how either will work with Ubering.
  2. So, I was laid off Monday... completely unexpected. Prayers please. At least I have time to write now, and going to be Uber Eats / Door Dashing, until I can get something better.
  3. That's helped me with the Steampunk one I wrote. Though I am in the middle of writing a Star Wars Fanfic, a kind of a "What If" like Disney likes to do with Marvel. "What if you take a Jedi Battlemaster, an Outlander, from the Old Republic Era, freeze them in Carbonite, and then unthaw them during the Rebellion Era?"
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    The Escape

    I'm glad you loved it, Quilah. Though, I must apologize for being the cause for the Coffee Abuse.
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    Forbidden

    Thank you again.
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    Forbidden

    Thank you for reading, Quilah. I had to reread the story myself, and what others and my own comments said to remember this piece. There were three versions of this story when it was written. The first the brothers were saved by a god from the world, but that ran over the word limit and I felt was bit anticlimactic. The second version, they were exiled to an island were the kingdom sends their worset prisoners. It too went a little long in the tooth, and I couldn't find a good way to "end" it, without it seeming rushed. The third version, this one, where they died, ended up feeling like the right way to end the story within the confines of the rules of the game (as this was one of Cia's Forum Game Prompt-Inspiration Challenges), and made sense in the overall fantasy world I write my fantasy stories in.
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    Forbidden

    Thank you, Vcs for reading and for the comment. Sorry for the late response been way too busy to do much writing lately, or to respond to comments. You are correct about the sad state of some countries outside of our own. I for one, will never willing go visit one.
  8. What brand did you get? I've been looking to get one for the apartment. Yes, normal and needed. It's how new growth and new life happens in the wilderness. Though, I feel we need to introduce more beavers to the environment, and create more wetlands.
  9. It's been Satan's Ass Crack for the last week now. Thank the gods for AC. As for Gators here in Florida, the saying is, "If you see a body of water, from a puddle to a lake, if it's wet assume there's a Gator in it." But also remember, in the second grade, they taught us Gator survival skills.
  10. Excellent poem, tim. I sometimes echo the feeling that you expressed here. It did remind me about the Book of Job in the Christian Bible, where Job's friends came to sit and wait with him, as he went through his trials.
  11. Happy Thursday everyone. I'm loving all the reaction videos on Social Media right now of the Europeons coming over to the USA for the World Cup. It's fun watching someone have a life changing experience, eating Biscuits and Gravy at Waffle House.
  12. What do you usually soak them in? Hello everyone. Happy Sunday.
  13. Thank you, Michael. I hope so too.
  14. If I can get something going as a Digital Nomad, yeah, I'm going to move down there permanently. Otherwise, it'll be to visit my bebezinho, until we can get him into the states.
  15. Yeah, I'm still in Tampa. Haven't moved to Brazil yet to be with my Baby Boy. But by the gods, I will be going down there soon.
  16. Had a Saturday appointment for Lab work. Decided afterwards to go flea marketing. Imagine my disappointment that places that have been around since before my birth, are now rental apartments.
  17. As long as I'm not Cousin Oliver, I'm happy in any role.
  18. There's a fine line between, swapping a word and doubting yourself. I've always been told to not edit until after you have a chapter done, and started on the next one. If you give yourself time, between when you wrote the scene, and when you go to edit, that might help give you clarity on when enough editing is enough.
  19. That's the trouble with Tribbles. They get in everywhere.
  20. That's all that we can do. Only control the things within our control. But it's easier said than done. That's a lesson I'm still trying to learn.
  21. You just have to be careful when you do the canning. My grandma used to do it all the time, until one of the jars exploded on her. She was taking it out of the water to let it cool on a cooling rack, and it blew up going everywhere. Luckily she wasn't hurt from the glass breaking.
  22. It's good to see you too. 🙂 I hope things start getting better for you.
  23. What was it? A Gremlin from the Kremlin?
  24. Welcome back. Glad you're doing better.
  25. Depends on device and when I am reading GA. At night in bed, on phone and dark mode. Laptop light mode.
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