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That line just about broke me. Levi is the protector, and and has been for some time. He had to be much more adult than a child should have to be. I think that might be the hardest thing he has to overcome, being able to step back and be a child and let other take over the protection of his family. When and if Kaleb and Levi ever join forces..............................BOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.. I expect all three kids to be in the same bed by morning.

Mateo is learning. I'm glad that Pax came first to learn and understand what Elias wanted and needed. If Mat had been first it might have pushed Eli over the edge. Mateo is everything that Elias was afraid a mate would be, coddling and controlling. Pax is awesome at understanding each of his mates needs and impulses and balancing them out. I am glad that Mat got him a real alcoholic drink, I was afraid he would return with something fru-fru or weak. Why do I also fear that mate number 3 may be a vampire!! Excellent work and can't wait for the next chapter!!!

So glad that Adam is out of that hell of a household. Troy and his dad stepped up big time, I just hope actually living together doesn't mess up their relationship. I also hope that school is OK. I think there will be some kids from that church that may try something. Next up how about some revenge on Mike Daubney for being the douche that he is and starting this whole mess!!! Looking forward to more, Thanks

A lot of drama in this one. Beth seems to be a needy clingy girlfriend, Carter can do much better. On to the next chapter please, where some truths will hopefully "Come Out". Thanks

A lot going on. With the cliffhanger, what will happen, Will Theo stop on his own, will he succeed, will Araziah come in to stop it, will Lucy??? Can't wait until next chapter to find out... Is Sebby a "love" interest for Lucy with that not so subtle hint at the end?? And did Araziah al but claim that he was going to be the resurrected Spirit of Fire?? Thanks and Like I said, Looking forward to more!!!

I get a feeling that Nate and Teddy may have dated for a while. How else would Nate have "known" that Teddy was taking anti-anxiety medication. Moving in with Teddy's family would just be wrong on so many levels, especially with the way his parents would react. Ryder and Benji had such a great bonding moment. Thanks for a great chapter!!

Loved this chapter. Honest communication, and Mike and Teddy reconnecting. My only question?? How does Nate Know???

Such a great short story!! I hope at some point there is a sequel to find out how George healed up and the boys future!!

Haven't you heard anything Kyle has said, He's sensitive. If I were you I would watch out for my footwear after calling him that, Your shoes could replace Kaleb's as his new favorite chew toy!!!

Emotional chapter indeed. I see some troublesome times ahead for Levi as he adjusts to a new family life, It is good that Arabella has bonded with Blu and Lincoln has bonded with Kyle, The siblings should be able to calm their brother down and make the adjustment easier!! Can't wait until they meet the extended family (minus Nan) these kids have had nothing positive in their lives except each other, and now they are going to be shown so much love and encouragement that it will be wonderful to see them grow and flourish. Now, we just have to find out what is up with young master Tony Anderson (other than his seeming crush on Arabella)? Worth the wait Thanks so much!!

Mason smiled at Jared with a twinkle in his eyes placing his hand on Jared’s shoulder. Jared reached up patting Mason’s hand, “I… well, we were busy. Where’s Blu?” Do I detect the hint of romance in the air???? I am glad the catering business is doing well and Kaleb is ready to open his own restaurant!! Does it have a name yet?? Kasey is absolutely adorable and Khan is a trouble maker. Kyle and Blu's concern for their students is great to see, I hope that after years of teaching they never lose that. Thanks for the update and glad you are better Rob! PS - Joh, I don't want Kasey to get a dog before Patrick does LOL

Just a side question I just thought up. Maybe after one of the adventures Nyf could return to Earth with the family and spend the night with the boys or grandad and then Difris could see how the humans live vicariously through him. I think it would be very educational for him.

Not the only one CG!! I watched a few episodes of the new one and couldn't get into it at all. Loved the original. I thinks replacing Dirk Benedict as Starbuck with a female was what really ruined it for me though!

A truly epic tale, Thanks Geron!! I am glad that at some point you may introduce some kind of "translator" into the series as mentioned by Difris. The fact that though everyone is seeing other aliens, but not being able to interact or communicate with them would be upsetting to the boys and grandad. I hope everyone can keep their travels a secret from their families because the more that know about this, the bigger chance that the wrong people could find out!! I like the way the more Difris interacts with the earthlings the more "human" he becomes to the readers, and that is a special skill by the author. Many thanks and looking forward to traveling through the myriad of doors!!

I do Like surprises!!!! Is it chocolate???

Charlie is so caring and such a wonderful person despite any of the heartbreak he has endured. The fact that he is humble and doesn't even realize how caring and compassionate he is makes him even more likable. Jacob seems like his perfect match, he is just as giving. I was glad to see the interaction with Timmy from Charlie's view, and can't wait to see the promised revelation about the changes due to Timmy. Great story and looking forward to more, Thanks!!

Teddy has been a horrible brother, but he has also been incredibly broken during Oliver's life. I was very pleased to see the evolution of Oliver's feelings for his brother in this chapter though.

Oliver's POV for this chapter was ideal. Both Teddy and Ryder got to hear how the other feels about them from an unbiased source, and Oliver found out some information about his brother he didn'r know. Loved the "mini-Haner" comment from Mike. It sounds like Oliver may be hearing about another of Teddy's friends, I wonder if he will put 2 and 2 together and connect what Ryder said last chapter about a "civil war" with Mike?? Now to the parents!!!! Utterly Clueless. If I were to hazard a guess I would almost believe that Teddy was parenting them while he was growing up instead of the opposite. You cannot be best friends with your child, you have to parent and these two are horrible. Especially comparing Oliver to Teddy, It was bad enough last chapter when the teacher did it.

Yeah, about that seventh book, the last I looked it was still up over there and I may or may not have read it . I would be curious as to how it would be re-written to fit some of the new story lines. This was a question I was going to ask at the end of commencement. I hope you do, unless you add some of those elements to this story. Thanks Jeff

I don't think it has been mentioned, and in this fictitious world it wouldn't mean anything, but how did our three star students do on their SAT's?? Sarah's father has been bending(breaking) rules to get his little girl to be class valedictorian, but in a "real world" situation, being top of your class in a small school wouldn't mean as much to a future college as how your scholastic testing numbers rated. And that is something that John Taylor cannot manipulate. I see the whole race for class valedictorian as a competition between Joey and Sarah, with Billy thinking Meh, I'll get screwed out of it anyway so why bother caring.

That was quite the chapter. I am still really concerned about the opening few paragraphs. Just what really is Carl's bug up his ass about Billy??? Those sermons about homosexual thoughts allowed in the home have to be aimed directly at Paula. At some point is she going to realize that she could really lose her son to her Pastor if she keeps following him blindly??? What is really up with Joey??? As much as we have learned to hate him, I really don't want anything bad to happen to him either. Now on to the Accident and Billy and Dustin goading Brett. I agree that Billy will feel responsible, but they are still kids and that type of goading takes place all the time. For years Brett has been calling Billy a coward and pushing Billy to do things. On to "Parental Guidance", I'm really hoping it's a letter from George!!

That was awesome. So far Elias has lucked out in the mate department. I'm sure the Goddess has great plans for this family.. Looking forward to meeting more of this family. thanks

This was an interesting chapter with a lot being said between Ryder and Teddy with Oliver as the catalyst. A lot has been said about Teddy’s perfect record in surgery and the thought that it could be someone important to him that is his first loss could devistate him. He may need Ryder just as much as Ryder needs him soon. Wondering why Teddy didn’t introduce Oliver to Mike? Oh and I agree with others. F**k Nate!!!!!

You had me really going at the start of the chapter, Thinking to myself, what did I miss last chapter?? I didn't remember it ending with them together.... Then Ah-ha, Dream sequence. I am glad Ko and Jackson had the willpower to stop before making their friendship awkward. I think at some point in all of our lives we have reached that point of being really "pent up!" Thanks

Somehow I don't think pushing a shuttle away from crushing a crew mate would fit the definition of "taking it easy." I am glad that Kohen is doing something instead of hiding in his quarters, but still sad that he is afraid to let himself feel anything for anybody for fear of hurting them. Still, it is one more step to a recovery....... Thanks CIA..