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The Wild Night in the Country Cottage
glennish commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in The Wild Night in the Country Cottage
Poor Dustin couldn't catch a break this chapter. An unplanned pregnancy, an arrest with a night in jail, a $200.00 impound fee, and then the sex party at the mansion ending with another beat down by his sperm donor. not to mention : Joey, show some gratitude, your half brother just bailed your sorry ass out of jail again, and for what, So you can do it all over again!! Thanks for the awesome chapter!! -
Evan has made a new group of friends. I hope Oxbow Lake High is as welcoming of a GSA as Adam and Troys school. For all the BS that goes on in schools now I am surprised that the teachers are not everywhere in the halls. Glad the football goon got what he deserved but watch your backs boys. Thanks Ivor.
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Nice little story about Chris and Paul. Nice to see how they got together. Thanks and I am glad that you are writing more of their story. Thanks.
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Nice chapter. I do hope that Carter isn’t shooting himself in the foot here though. He is trying so hard to save Aron’s marriage while masquerading as Alex that if/when he gets back to his own body he may find it difficult if he wants to have a relationship with his former best friend. It would just be so much easier if Carter could just confess to Aron that her really is Carter in Alex’s body. Thanks again for your work.
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Way cool. I do hope that Zane can get a language chip soon. But I will miss the movie and other pop culture messages due to Pip’s way of learning the language!! It seems that Louie found someone to talk to before Zane. It is a shame that it was Mycha and Phenner on the station and not Adrian and Caspin. Thanks for the chapter.
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The judge played Cairo’s dad Like a fiddle. Getting the result he wanted. I hope Kayde gets to apologize to Grayson and Skylar for what he did. The fact that Carter bared his soul and told his history to Cupid and Cupid didn’t blink and wanted another date too. Thanks for the chapter.
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Thanks for the backstory prior to the drums of war. Heartbreaking to hear of all these young lycans cut off in the prime of their life. Whoever this murderer is I hope homestead give some swift and painful justice. Thanks.
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No, no, a thousand times no!! Well...... ok if you want to and it means more of the story. Lol 😆
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I will echo the others. Cliffhangers. 🤢. Never corner a werewolf!! The kings guards just never seem to learn. I wonder what the mystery ingredient is for the cure. Thanks until next chapter.
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TC3 — Chapter 5: A Day to Remember.
glennish commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC3 — Chapter 5: A Day to Remember.
I can see why Adam has a bad feeling about Giles!! I hope he is not just taking advantage of Robert and then going to move on but after what was talked about by the boys at Starbucks it does make you wonder. It sounds like Jeremy’s body is saying one thing but his mind is saying another. Just has to let his heart be the tie-breaking vote. The new neighbor sounds like he could have descended from mount Olympus 😆. Thanks and looking forward to the next book. -
Interesting concept of the bonding gift. It almost sounds like a marriage proposal of sorts. I am wondering how Kohen will react to this new twist in his relationship with Everett. Are communications between the planet and the ship blocked while down in the tunnels? I hope Freska is there with her ship. Thanks CIA.
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TC3 — Chapter 4: Who’s Travis Jacks?
glennish commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC3 — Chapter 4: Who’s Travis Jacks?
Great chapter. With friends and family around Jeremy seems to be better. Travis seems to be embarrassed but at least his feelings for Jeremy are out in the open. I hope Adam is wrong about Robert and Giles but first relationships usually don’t last. Any plans on matchmaking with Jill and Bryce?? Looking forward to tomorrow and the next chapter. Thanks. -
The Lost Souls in the Fishbowl
glennish commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in The Lost Souls in the Fishbowl
Since I have read the original Dustin’s world over at the other site I have been wondering now who it could be. I don’t think it will be the same person as last time but I have suspicions of two it could be. One would not surprise me because of how they have fallen and the other would just be cruel to one of the other characters from the original. Just gonna leave it at that!! -
TC3 — Chapter 3: Healing Starts
glennish commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC3 — Chapter 3: Healing Starts
I am glad to see that Jeremy is starting to heal. It has only been a week. Explaining the new family dynamics must have been very confusing to poor Travis. Dads, biological son, uncle, adopted parents and all. I hope Jeremy and Travis become at least friends if not more. They both have issues that need to be addressed and would be good for each other. I am shocked that Jeremy knew about the possibility of divorce prior to his parents trip and didn’t say anything about it to anyone. Thanks for the chapter and looking forward to the story to advance by about 4 months for opening faceoff for the 2018-19 season and a double date to the arena for Robert/Giles and Jeremy/Travis. Lol. -
The Lost Souls in the Fishbowl
glennish commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in The Lost Souls in the Fishbowl
It seems like Nate has opened some part of Dustin’s mind that he wished could still be closed off. It was interesting to see how both reacted after thier failed suicide attempts!! It seems that Nate took surviving as a sign and decided that life as effed up as it can be was still worth living and Dustin still wishes he was dead. I do hope Dustin can get the help he needs and will not try again. Thanks for the chapter. -
I think my favorite part of the David Alex(Carter) talk was David’s comments about Carter himself. First that he replaced Carter as “best friend” and also how he seemed to know and understand Carter’s repressed feelings for Aron too. Now I am gonna ponder incessantly who the other two characters could be!! I am not even sure if the real Alex is trapped in a coma in Carter’s body or if he switched with another person too. I wonder what the password is and would Alex know or is it something that only Carter would understand??? That would be difficult to explain away!! Thanks and until next week adeu
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Yes!!! A new chapter. And so much to discuss. Sebby and Torsten get it on. Torsten has the audacity to think he should top a dragon. A sneak attack on Araziah and one of the ash sisters is no more. Is there another drop on dragon blood of the seventh house available?? A drunken Araziah makes a move on Torsten!! I’m sorry but because of their past I find Torsten and Araziah to be a bit incestuous. Thanks for the chapter. Looking forward to more.
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W.a.r. By Jeff Wilson (Jkwsquirrel)
glennish replied to jkwsquirrel's topic in Stories Discussion Forum
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Loved this chapter. Just chilling with no drama in sight. Nice to see that after just two visits that Adam and Troy are becoming such good friends with Paul and Chris. I hope in the future that if Paul and Chris get a GSA at thier school that the two groups could combine and do group projects and fund raisers. Thanks Ivor!!
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Great chapter. I would say that the best part of the series was when Dean got infected and changed the first time. Between his own reaction and then the phone call to Jon. Priceless!!! In addition to Angus’s head on a stick I want justice for all the wrongs the ECP has inflicted. And a lot of HEA for all the good guys!! Thanks for the new chapter.
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Some answers to some questions. Artie has a name for his father. Now comes the question of whether he left on his own or for some other reason. That both Dizzy and Ky felt bad about what happened is a good sign for thier friendship. If I was having a beautiful dream about a parent I lost I would be slightly upset as well so I can understand what Artie was feeling. Thanks for the chapter.
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It is good to see that Everett is learning from his mistakes and prepares a defense when he wakes Kohen from a nightmare. I think I would wait for Freska before I sell my current ship just not to leave myself stranded. Sounds like on this planet “you will never find a more wretched hive of scum and villainy”. Thanks for the chapter CIA
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The shade actually has a name. Poor Olivia being forced to do this job. I hope after 2 months her brother is ok!!! I also think they should go somewhere far away to keep Lucius from doing this again!! Rulf and Esthor have an interesting relationship!! I do hope they can soon learn to trust each other. I don’t think Rulf should go against his old friend alone. Thanks for the chapter
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Louie’s POV was interesting. He sees Pip as a puppy and in need of care. I wonder if all canines see other species as just a different type of dog?? When the stories mary up I want to see Louie interacting with all the Kaynens from Caspins home planet. Looks like thins will be heating up soon. Thanks.
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Kyle Kaleb and Jared are Carson’s half brothers. Would Carson be capable of fratricide (big word I just looked up 😂). That would make them all Brody’s uncles and then Brody would be Levi’s cousin!! (Kissing cousins!!) Why isn’t Penelope dead yet dang it!!! I wonder if there is some other purpose to wanting Kyle dead?? Thanks for the chapter!!
