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  1. Bft

    Chapter One

    I am looking forward to reading more of this story, great start so far
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    Crumbling

    Ooh you are wicked Mrs G.but I like you.
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    Tsu Chapter 10

    What a great story, I am so happy that Boyden and Grady have been found. its a shame that Kyle didn’t think to check with the orphanages in the area to see if the boys had turned up there. is there going to be a second book to this one?
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    IOI Chapter 14

    This is a British Indian Ocean Territory and is an overseas territory of the United Kingdom, the commissioner is appointed by the Queen and is assisted by an administrator and small staff and is based in London and is resident in the Foreign and Commonwealth office, where it has been since 1976. prior to that the BIOT was based in Mauritius and then the Seychelles.
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    Crumbling

    At last Shane and Donovan are starting to sort their stuff out, I am happy about that Donovan realised how difficult he can be. I really enjoyed the chat between Cal and Donovan.
  6. I have just read this story for the second time, I am not sure why I didn’t comment last time that I read it, it was a great story but I think that there could have been another chapter or two to see how the boys got on together. You are a great story teller but why haven’t you finished COTT it’s been over a year since you last updated it, I get the impression that you have lost interest in finishing it off.
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    Chapter 10

    That was great, I really laughed when Rob’s mother said she wanted the photos developed, Justin and Rob just need to kiss each other as there is too much tension going on between them.
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    Chapter 7

    Melanie is Bobbys beard
  9. Bft

    Chapter 6

    I am really liking this story
  10. Bft

    Story

    I really enjoyed this story, I think that you should carry it on for more chapters.
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    The Mentor

    It was a good chapter, Andy has been an ass but Tyrone was worse. bob the builder should keep his mouth shut What is Jazz’s problem, so she missed out on going clubbing big deal, she was more concerned about that than being concerned about her supposedly best friend being hurt and in hospital, how shallow of her. And what is the obsession about going to the wretched club anyway? going clubbing was never something that interested me.
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    The Hostage

    Both Tyrone and that Dewsbury woman are 🦇 shit crazy.
  13. Bft

    The Bite

    I think that when the brat complained about how long it was taking to get the boiler sorted out someone has let it slip where he is.
  14. Excellent adventures of Jamie and Ben through Europe, I really enjoyed this chapter. 😁
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    Chapter 13

    I hate gossip columnists and it’s gotten worse over the last few years with not respecting people’s privacy, the damn press put everything out there onto the internet before people have had a chance to get to court., splash it out there then worry about whether person is guilty or not until later. I hope that Dave’s mental health is going to ok. The Hawks should have made sure that Deon was kept away from windows and all the doors of the gym were closed
  16. Donovan needs to let go of Shane, Donovan is too toxic, Shane could do so much better. and what was the whole thing with Jordan about?
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    Just Friends?

    I can understand why Shane is having difficulty acknowledging that he was raped, because he is a very masculine guy and to admit that would seem to be very weak. donovan is a complete and utter dunce and to absorbed in his own self importance to realise that he has really hurt Shane with the way he treated him after Shane’s chat at brunch, I hope that in time Shane can let go of Donovan and move on, I think Shane can do better for himself.
  18. The scene with the kids was hilarious, Calvin was the best with his comments about Snapshane and all of the boxes that Shane had ticked. I am looking forward to the next chapter when they both sit down and talk, hopefully they can keep calm and talk through some issues if not all of the issues. 😍
  19. One of my best friends and I spent a lot of time together, we went away together several times over the years but we never slept together, neither of us saw the other one naked, he was more like my older brother than anything else, I always called his mother mum but some of his friends his age could not believe that we weren’t in a relationship we just never thought of it, most of those guys were into casual sex and were to my knowledge never in a long term relationship. It was not until recently that my husband said that G did not like him because S took me away overseas away from G, as G is now dead I cannot ask him that
  20. I think that Tom has strong feelings for Robbie particularly after his comment that if anything happens to Robbie that would be the end of him.
  21. I wondered about that too, but why would Mr Andrews not say anything about it?
  22. Plus one, where do I sign up?
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    Chapter 12

    Clarissa is high maintenance, if she is going to be a WAG then she needs to understand that the world doesn’t revolve around her, sometimes things happen in football that she doesn’t need to know about. Is Andrew really a nice guy or are we waiting for a bomb to drop?
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    Catchphrase

    Shane and Donovan need to talk properly and alone, Shane needs to tell Donovan why he walked out that morning after the sex and donovan needs to listen without interruption.
  25. Bft

    Catchphrase

    No it’s last night 😁
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