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As someone else commented this person projects their own issues on the characters in the story, so much so that I usually don’t read the comments.
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It’s always last night. its the same as you turn a light on or off, my husband says you open or close a light, his other language is Gujarati and that’s what they say.
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My thoughts exactly, I have previously said that Donny has his head to far up his own butt at times, he needs to stay off the booze
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I think that Donovan disclosing his and Shane’s problems in front of Shane’s family was out of order, he should also give Shane a chance to talk when Donovan is both sober and also this should be done in private. Donovan is an ass for not taking about their problems, he knows that Shane is not the best at communication, but at least give Shane a chance to talk.
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Hi, just a thought but the colour of text, the size and style of the font that you use make it difficult to read on an IPad mini.
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I really think that Robbie should see a counsellor and talk about things as he has not dealt with the loss of his mother and also having to move to Canada and live with Sue, don and family.
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A great chapter, the religious boyfriend has shown his true colours and been a total hypocrite by having sex outside of marriage and getting his girlfriend pregnant, maybe he thought that if he pulled out in time she would not get pregnant.
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After having read this story, I understand more why I love your stories, there’s so much in your stories that I connect with on a different level. I have never heard of praying to Eros and I know nothing about Pagans, maybe I need to explore things more than I have, as I may find the answer to questions that I have.
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TC3 — Chapter 4: Who’s Travis Jacks?
Bft commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC3 — Chapter 4: Who’s Travis Jacks?
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TC3 — Chapter 5: A Day to Remember.
Bft commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC3 — Chapter 5: A Day to Remember.
Erin sounds hot, looking forward to hearing more about him. I am pleased that you are carrying on with this story into other books. have a great weekend BH2 -
TC3 — Chapter 4: Who’s Travis Jacks?
Bft commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC3 — Chapter 4: Who’s Travis Jacks?
A small typo he got the bowels out of the cupboard it should be bowls. -
TC3 — Chapter 3: Healing Starts
Bft commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC3 — Chapter 3: Healing Starts
Thanks for another excellent chapter, I am happy that the boys all get along so well -
It was a fantastic chapter, hot shower scene, I would hope that we could see a series of stories with Cam and Justin’s story, maybe call it country butts or something similar?
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There is just so much drama in a such a short chapter
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I also agree that Donovan is selfish and sometimes immature when it comes to his relationship with Shane, he basically raped Shane and that’s just not on, then he decides it’s a good idea to go out and get drunk, well that’s going to help even more, Donovan grow up
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This has been a good story, I would have liked to see Julian changing his degree to Art and photography as it appeared that he had a natural talent for it. the scenes with the shaving was hot.
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What a dreadful woman Julian’s mother turned out to be, she picks up a horrible man, allows him to move into their lives and then she let him through her son out, her own flesh and blood because he is who he is, well she is certainly a low life seems to be typical of someone living on a council estate. Karma is a bitch. I am pleased that Julian had met up with Lance to give him a better environment to live in.
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It’s just so sad, that Ethan did not support Wayne in locking up the father
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I can never understand how parents could use a belt on their child, and for nothing more than not doing their chores, Wayne should have reported them to the police and child protection, his sperm donor should be locked up in jail for a very long time as there is no excuse for this type of abuse.
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I did enjoy this story, it was nice to see that the boys enjoyed each other’s company and had a fun time bowling together even though they had computer games to keep themselves amused they spent quality time with their friends as well.
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Another great story, I also would like to see more of the guys. i thought that when Jake did not want to smack Cal with the ruler that he had feelings for Cal, I am pleased that I was right to think that, their story needs to be continued.
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I liked this story, do we know what Rawlings father did for work?
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The Roommate Situation - Shane’s POV
Bft commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in The Roommate Situation - Shane’s POV
Oh my, oh my the last part of the story was just so hot and intense dayum 😍 -
I am sad to see the end of another great book, I like all of the other readers want to know what happens to our friends. i don’t think that I have ever read a story that has had so many comments, on the last chapter, that in itself is a major accomplishment. You should be proud of that fact Gary.
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Hot, hot hot
