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    Chapter 1

    The thing that I like the most in this site is the fact I can interact with other readers and authors, and get to read other people’s comments. Good luck with editing all of your stories. 😀
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    Chapter 1

    There are a lot of stories that you have written that I would like to read but so many of them have not been finished, that it seems that you have lost interest in them because so many of them have not been updated in several years. Is there a reason for that? its a shame that they have not been finished because your short stories are really excellent and the descriptions that you use are amazing, several of them are so hot as well. 😘 I know that we all get busy with life. You are not the only author to have incomplete stories on the web, so please don’t take that as a personal criticism. Also some authors take ages to upload the next chapter that you forget what the story was about. I now only read completed stories and don’t bother with stories in process unless I know that they will be continued on a weekly basis.
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    Chapter 1

    A great story
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    Chapter 5

    I had the feeling from the start of this story that Eli was being used by Chris, with his comments that cuddling was to gay. Maybe Chis just wants to have sex and that’s it.
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    Photos Lately

    I am going to remain breathless over you, what a great line 😍 it needs more chapters please, there is so much that is untold to this story.
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    Boy Valentine

    Good story, aw young love. 😍 I do agree with Robbie that I think that Valentine’s Day is pushed by the all of the card companies and florists, who all make a lot of money on this day. love for your partner should be celebrated all of the time, not just on one day.
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    Chapter 12 Epilogue

    I loved the end of this story. I did laugh a bit when reading this. I also thought that they were adopting a boy, I did not think about them adopting a dog. When I got to that part I thought that I had missed a chapter, but I went back and checked that I had not missed one. I am so pleased that Jimmy and Drake finally got together, Drake and Preston need to talk and air their differences. Thanks for this story Gary. 😀
  8. Why did Rob not explain that to Sylvia he had a bad dream and that is why his father got into bed with him to comfort him, I am sure that parents all over the world do that. The PI was watching the house all night? Really? It does not make sense why he would be doing that all night. After the dreadful experience friends of mine had with a foster care agency, I would not want to foster kids.
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    Chapter 7 - Ember

    Em can hold a grudge against Brady, but I think that they both need to sit down and talk without interruptions and the both have to listen to what the other guy has to say. Life’s too short to waste time hating Brady, even as it has affected Em for years. As Em is stubborn is he Sagittarius? We are stubborn. 😀
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    Chapter 7 - Ember

    Oh come on now Jo, don’t tell us that you had not thought of that. 😀
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    ATGB IV

    Good chapter, RIP Abo. On different note a 15 yo having a $5,000 watch, really? I would be afraid to wear it in case I was mugged for the damn thing. The money would have been put to better use in buying him a car, yes I know that they are loaded, but still such an expensive watch for a teenager seems silly.
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    Chapter 7 - Ember

    Love this chapter, Some how Ember and Brady stop pussyfooting around and just start dating. 😘
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    Chapter 4

    I think Fifi and Trixibell are dogs names? my cousins named one of their dogs Fifi.
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    ATGB III

    Another great chapter, I think that it is a great idea to rent the house out, hopefully the rent will help fund some or all of the renovations. It baffles me when I see homeowners not keeping up repairs to their home, its an appreciating asset. Some landlords here in London are really bad at this as they think that it’s on a tenant living in the place and they won’t look after it so why should I spend a lot of money on it. If they spent the money on it the tenant will want to look after it and stay there, instead of moving all of the time.
  15. Thanks for your thoughts Neal, I think that there are several gays and lesbians that could learn a lot from your comments. Take care
  16. Thanks for your comment and hugs to you
  17. Yes it has finally happened, they both talked and Drake listened for a change. they have both bared their souls, hopefully they will take it slowly and get to know one and other. And most importantly talk to each other about their thoughts and concerns. Callie is going to be extatic that the boys are together. I am looking forward to the Epilogue. 😀
  18. A nice little story.
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    UF Chapter 3

    It’s a shame that Wesley has not got in touch with his mother, she must be very worried about him.
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    BF Chapter 33

    I have really enjoyed both of these books, I think that Anton can be a bit abrupt as he tends to cut people off, and he should have discussed his relationship with Matthew as they were together for a number of years instead of just cutting him off completely and then Anton went away without telling anyone, this makes him appear selfish and very cold hearted. I think that these two books could be the authors life story?
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    Chapter 5 - Ember

    Oh my god this chapter is too funny for words. Can’t wait till the next chapter.
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    Chapter 4 - Brady

    I just want to bang Brady and Embers heads together to at least talk to each other. Bloody men!
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    OBC Chapter 5

    I am really enjoying reading about another part of my home country that I don’t know anything about. Thank you.
  24. Another great chapter in this story. I would not be surprised if the Turner grandparents aleady have a PI investigating Adam as they have brought up the previous accusation of rape by Tibor. They would probably stoop that low.
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    Chapter 1 - Ember

    Oops sorry, although I do think the yanks have made a mess of the English language
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