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    I echo what others have said about your writing of sex scenes, is to say oh wow the description of all of the details is just awesome, it makes me think that I am there and watching and learning from Arron and Chet. I have never read scenes like these that are just so hot.
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    January 2016

    Bft commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in January 2016

    Excellent chapter again Carlos. one small problem and that is the name Helen & Chatri have given their son, in the U.K. Gamon is a type of ham. Also how can the boy have been born Sunday 17 February 2015 when this story is set in January 2016?
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    Chapter 19

    Bft commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 19

    Glad that this story has finished, personally I think that it dragged on a bit too long to 19 chapters. I think Rick telling Drew that he is not gay should been resolved earlier as this would have given a chance for Brandon to tell his story. As it went on for so many chapters I had intended to not finish the story, but I did finish it. I get disappointed when writers say that they will write a sequel to their first book and then they don't get around to writing it. as it's now several years since this novel was written I doubt that there will be further stories with these characters. Which is a shame as I think that there may have been another novel.
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    Epilogue

    Bft commented on Graeme's story chapter in Epilogue

    I have enjoyed all 3 books and everything to do with AFL and all the characters. thanks so much the level of detail that you have gone into to write the stories. I would have liked to see Mrs Flanders leave her dreadful husband and clean him out in a divorce, that is what he deserves.
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    Melvyn Ford

    Bft commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Melvyn Ford

    Just read this story and I must say that I loved it. I am not a Ford man, but I am a petrol head.i own a Classic R107 Benz. why did you choose the name of the last two characters four and Quint? i do llike a lot of your other stories too
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    I have really enjoyed this story, I have read a few shifter stories before and I have enjoyed them but none are as long and in depth as this story and this story gives us more of a behind the scenes look into their lives than any other story I have previously read. I am wondering how many more chapters there are because I might leave it at 45 and come back soon. I usually don't read a story until it's completed because so many stories are not continued fir several weeks or months and I tend to forget the story because I have read so many other things in the mean time. Thanks for all of your hard work.
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    Chapter 1

    Bft commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Hi Gary, i did enjoy this story a lot but then I like stories that are set in a rural and country lifestyle. I knew Wiley and Coop would end up together, you have to continue this story, as others have suggested and you have hinted at, as I think there maybe two or three chapters to the lives and adventures of Wiley and Coop. Coop's old man needs to be put in his place.
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