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I have really enjoyed both of these books, I think that Anton can be a bit abrupt as he tends to cut people off, and he should have discussed his relationship with Matthew as they were together for a number of years instead of just cutting him off completely and then Anton went away without telling anyone, this makes him appear selfish and very cold hearted. I think that these two books could be the authors life story?
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Oh my god this chapter is too funny for words. Can’t wait till the next chapter.
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I just want to bang Brady and Embers heads together to at least talk to each other. Bloody men!
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I am really enjoying reading about another part of my home country that I don’t know anything about. Thank you.
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TC2 - Chapter 4: Rob’s First Thursday in Tampa
Bft commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 4: Rob’s First Thursday in Tampa
Another great chapter in this story. I would not be surprised if the Turner grandparents aleady have a PI investigating Adam as they have brought up the previous accusation of rape by Tibor. They would probably stoop that low. -
Oops sorry, although I do think the yanks have made a mess of the English language
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TC2 - Chapter 1: Meeting Each Other
Bft commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 1: Meeting Each Other
I really like this story and I think that you should keep writing it, as I think that there is more to learn about Adam and Robert. what is it with you southern folk and biscuits and gravy for breakfast it sounds awful? -
More please although I think that I might leave this story for a few weeks then come back when more chapters are posted.
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This is a good story. but if you have it set in Australia please refer to the hood as a bonnet tires is spelt tyres, mom is mum also gas is petrol. Because there is also LPG for cars smoko = morning or afternoon tea servo is a service station arvo is afternoon. As the guys are grease monkeys they would use this terminology chop shop makes me think that it’s a body repair shop, not a car workshop I will get you to learn Strine properly😉
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Nickelsour should be removed from the school as his unfit to be a school principal. i hate religion and the idiots that believe it, what people do in their lives is their business and noone elses
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Thanks for sharing this story, maybe now is not the right time for you to tell your story, only you will know when that time is. I am sure many of us would love to know what happens next. I am not sure if it would help, but write a chapter at a time, then when you have a few done then post them at least that way you don’t feel pressured to get the next chapter posted. I am sorry for your loss and what you had to go through. hugs x
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Happy sweet 16 to Paddy, it’s great that he has had an amazing 12 months, and it’s been good to see that Paddy has people that love and care for him. An excellent chapter but a bit too short. Enjoy the long weekend
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Over The Rainbow • Part VIII
Bft commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow • Part VIII
G’day Carlos, I am another reader that has sat here with tears in my eyes at Liz’s passing, I feel like I have lost another 2nd cousin this year, I agree with Liz wanting her ashes spread in the vineyard, I changed my mind on having memorial plaques, graves etc as I think of that it’s best to remember people how they were without having to go to a cemetery. I also think lots of flowers at funerals are a huge waste of money, make a few donations to charity in your loved ones name the money is better spent that way. -
Another great chapter Tim, I am so pleased that the boys are back in touch with each other, twins should not be apart. Russ is like I was at his age, in being not sure and aware of myself. The last part of the chapter was hot and you can guess the rest.
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Great story Tim, but to short. More please.
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Mr Harris is just another judgemental damn Christian that is not a Christian
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I have just read 3 chapters this morning, it was good to catch up with everyone. I hope that you are enjoying the holidays, I wish you a Happy New Year. I love Benny & Hayley, they are so cute. I am looking forward to catching up again with these guys soon. X
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Hey Carlos, great chapters so far, I am enjoying CJ at Georgetown, and knowing what the rest of the Squad are doing. I only hope that photographer does not want to use the boys in some twink porn movie, I just get that feeling that he is a bit sleazy
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I have loved reading this story, Joh can you pleae continue it. x
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I am glad that the next chapter has been done, I am looking forward to more adventures of the group. Hugs x
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Hi Joh, yes thanks our day was beautiful, I am so pleased that we had a wedding photographer as our photos are amazing. I can now just about listen to the song Dog Days are Over without a few tears. it was one of our songs. X
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I see from this chapter that you are teaching the septic tanks some strine! spelling errors: draw is to draw a picture drawer is for cutlery, clothes etc you will let someone know not no.
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I am sat here at home reading about the wedding and I am listening to the music from the dances, I love having Alexa. I glance up and look in the mirror and see two photos from my wedding last year to my husband and I can imagine how the boys are feeling right now as I laugh and cry along with them. Thank you. Xx
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I am enjoying reading about Ian and Paddy, I am so glad that Ian and Adam have finally got together. This was a hot read.
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I am Aussie and I have never seen this pie mess before, maybe it's served in cheap cafes or something?
