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Sad to see this series finish, I cannot wait for Georgetown. I feel like I am missing out on my long distance friends lives and their adventures. I hope that Patrick meets a nice boy and comes out of his shell more. Muchos Gracious Carlos
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Great story Gary, I was hoping for me chapters on the life of Maurice & David, as there are not enough stories on mature gay guys getting a second chance at love.
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I have really enjoyed reading this book. I love all of the interactions with the different types of shifters. one thing I will suggest is that there are quite a few errors in each chapter where you have inserted a word where it should not have been, also you seem to get your presence and presents mixed up along with residence and residents. Its a shame Micheal was killed off as I think he had a lot of issues that were not dealt with, maybe he had feelings for Aiden and dud not know it? Hopefully there will be more books continuing on with the adventures of Aiden and Ethan and friends.
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Hi Wolf, I too have read this brief account into your life in one day. it still saddens me that people can discard their own child for being who they are. What annoys me more is that these people call themselves Christian, not very Christ like to throw you child out. I will never understand their idiotic thinking. I am surprised that you never went to the police about your sperm donor, he could have lost his career. (He is not worthy of being called father as he lost that right when he told you to get out, his wife is no better than him) Now to read your other stories. Take care of yourself and big hugs. Xx
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Chapter 8 Take My Breath Away
Bft commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 8 Take My Breath Away
I echo what others have said about your writing of sex scenes, is to say oh wow the description of all of the details is just awesome, it makes me think that I am there and watching and learning from Arron and Chet. I have never read scenes like these that are just so hot. -
Excellent chapter again Carlos. one small problem and that is the name Helen & Chatri have given their son, in the U.K. Gamon is a type of ham. Also how can the boy have been born Sunday 17 February 2015 when this story is set in January 2016?
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Glad that this story has finished, personally I think that it dragged on a bit too long to 19 chapters. I think Rick telling Drew that he is not gay should been resolved earlier as this would have given a chance for Brandon to tell his story. As it went on for so many chapters I had intended to not finish the story, but I did finish it. I get disappointed when writers say that they will write a sequel to their first book and then they don't get around to writing it. as it's now several years since this novel was written I doubt that there will be further stories with these characters. Which is a shame as I think that there may have been another novel.
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I have enjoyed all 3 books and everything to do with AFL and all the characters. thanks so much the level of detail that you have gone into to write the stories. I would have liked to see Mrs Flanders leave her dreadful husband and clean him out in a divorce, that is what he deserves.
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Just read this story and I must say that I loved it. I am not a Ford man, but I am a petrol head.i own a Classic R107 Benz. why did you choose the name of the last two characters four and Quint? i do llike a lot of your other stories too
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I have really enjoyed this story, I have read a few shifter stories before and I have enjoyed them but none are as long and in depth as this story and this story gives us more of a behind the scenes look into their lives than any other story I have previously read. I am wondering how many more chapters there are because I might leave it at 45 and come back soon. I usually don't read a story until it's completed because so many stories are not continued fir several weeks or months and I tend to forget the story because I have read so many other things in the mean time. Thanks for all of your hard work.
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Hi Gary, i did enjoy this story a lot but then I like stories that are set in a rural and country lifestyle. I knew Wiley and Coop would end up together, you have to continue this story, as others have suggested and you have hinted at, as I think there maybe two or three chapters to the lives and adventures of Wiley and Coop. Coop's old man needs to be put in his place.
