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I was reserving judgement about Nate, but he really is a douche. Hopefully Kent will recover in time.
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Get out of my brain @MacGreg 😁. Wayne- I've said it before, but you just have a way of capturing the reader and drawing them into your stories. @MacGreg describes your writing talents perfectly. Now you've got 3 stories in rotation, so I think your fan base won't be going through with withdrawals anytime soon. Thanks for putting out what promises to be another great story.
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Leopard/Spots. The answer is no. A fantastic chapter Wayne. It seems like every time I read one of your chapters, I'm searching Google to find out the meaning of something. This time it was the rubble trench foundation. Fascinating concept. I'm glad that Caleb and Wren finally got together, but I suspect they are in for a bit of trouble with those relatives. Maybe Tracy will get in some target practice time again. LOL
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I think that Ryan is pretty amazing given that he walked into the situation without a clue. He finds out he has a son, his son's mother is dead, and his son is gay, all in the span of what 10 minutes? Yeah, Ryan's absolutely remarkable and I can't wait till you develop his character. There's going to be some Boston people at this wedding! Ryan better like Cinnamon Toast Crunch! LOL. Thank you for writing yet another great chapter.
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Congrats on the new job!!! Another great chapter. Cassie is going to go wild over the Dory and Nemo Tevis tumbler.....such a fine vessel for her Cinnamon Toast Crunch cocktails. Lol
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Oh lord, we will all need sedatives! LOL Best of luck with your interview.
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In real life, less than 1 week. LOL. I give it 3 chapters max. Another great chapter Wayne.
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Why do I get the feeling that Greg and Nate's first shot at parenthood is going to be when Kyle and Mitch move in with them to attend college? 😉
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Mothers always know. Regardless of what we tell ourselves they always know. Another great chapter Wayne!
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Birthday Bash Part 3 - The Soul
spyke commented on Jason MH's story chapter in Birthday Bash Part 3 - The Soul
Sad about Kyle. He is so mature for his age. But Greg and Nate....... Hopefully it's not a dream. Excellent chapter and well worth the wait -
Chapter 1 - Riding the Beast
spyke commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Riding the Beast
Few authors have the talent to pull a reader right in and hook them from the first few paragraphs. You are one of the few. Great beginning and I look forward to the next chapter.- 63 comments
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In Which Aidan Learns Lies Tend To Have Short Legs
spyke commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In Which Aidan Learns Lies Tend To Have Short Legs
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In Which Aidan Learns Lies Tend To Have Short Legs
spyke commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in In Which Aidan Learns Lies Tend To Have Short Legs
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Southerner and the correct answer will always be Krispy Kreme especially when the "HOT" sign is on. LOL 😉 I really enjoyed the way you wrote their interaction at dinner. Keep up the great writing.
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No warning necessary. Considering the overall tone of this chapter, sex would have been a gratuitous ploy. Very good call Wayne. I'm enjoying the story and your writing. I agree with @Daddydavek and @chris191070 about Chad being perceptive and I really liked the interaction between the two of them. Can't wait for the next chapter. 👍
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Oh this is promising to be great fun! Great banter between the two, but I think that Aidan is going to give Heathcliff a run for his money. Great beginning to this story Laura!
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This I agree with. If he had spine he would have told his parents upfront and not left the photo out for his mother to find. Whatever he may say it might be too little too late.
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Second Interlude - Mothers and Intuitions Part 4
spyke commented on Jason MH's story chapter in Second Interlude - Mothers and Intuitions Part 4
I know that you had to write that chapter to fill in the background and that it must have been a challenge, but it was not a fun read and I feel like I need to go wash. -
Chapter 24 Disneyland and FireFighters
spyke commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 24 Disneyland and FireFighters
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The only two who have any sense about them are Jenn and Aiden. It's time to put a fork in this one...as in it's done.
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Apparently Noah has forgotten how to be independent. At this point we're left wondering just exactly what he has to lose? Homophobic parents? His family? That gnawing in his stomach from fear that someone will out him? At some point in time he's just going to have to reach down, find his testes, and grow up. I'm seeing such a radical imbalance in where these two are in life, maturity, and love that maybe this is really best for Jordan. I've said it before but sometimes the real happy ending is that two people don't end up together.
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Although Jordan said it in anger, maybe this was exactly what was needed to snap Noah out of his ridiculous idea that Sebastian could be trusted to not release the video.
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I respectfully disagree. After (as we say in the South) pitching that hissy fit, Noah got exactly what he deserved. All throughout this chapter it's apparent that Jordan bends over backwards and thinks of Noah first and foremost. Noah acted like an ass. That parting shot was mild compared to what I would have done, but then I'm a vengeful bastard. LOL. I'm 💯 Team Jordan on this one, and yes @Ethan you do have a whole bunch of work to do to repair this mess.
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Thanks so much for the great story Laura. And after the roller coaster ride these two had, a sweet ending is just what was needed. The only problem is I won't have my Sunday reading fix of Box Shaped Heart. Guess that means I'll have to re-read it!!
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I think the story is paced correctly and is realistic. You're writing about a complex character going through the grief process and that doesn't occur in a linear progression. The whole grief process is at best erratic and I think that you've done a great job projecting that to your readers. I'm really enjoying this story and your talent as a writer. Can't wait till the next chapter!
