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  1. I'm not a caring person, and I usually have no feelings for the characters in a story. But I so badly want to take Elias in home and care for him. And I feel sorry for Artemis. He must feel so helpless that he can not help Elias. That means you are doing a good job in writing this story. The characters seems realisticus.
  2. Excellent written story. Easy to read, well-constructed, thrilling and with humor. It has everything. And you have made your own version of the were-creatures genre. i enjoyed the story and look forward to the sequel.
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    Separation

    The story begins to get to me. And i think that your writing skills are getting beter and beter.
  4. dutch woman

    Separation

    Yes, me too
  5. Glad to know that Adam will come back to the voice . 😆
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    Below Ground

    I am glad you are okay after Dorian.
  7. A sweet story. On this site are writers active who can draw beautifully such as Thirdly and Toma/Tomacchi. And let Thirdly now just live in Florida. This can not be a coincidence. See her profile and albums, and maybe you can work together.
  8. I hope for a new book too. with different POV’s beside Danny’s. Josh getting older , Tristan using his writing/film talents, Dion his music talents. Joshie choosing between sport en singing. Another new person in the house, a adulescent with a baby. Or some of the grown-ups coming back temporally. Enough possibilitis
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    Bad Puppy

    Yess!! Finally the story is back and it is getting more interesting and more interesting
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    Oce Chapter 12

    Travis is Trenton’s husband. Why is he not with Trenton at the Shoal Bay Resort hotel?
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    Oce Chapter 11

    Thank you, but now i have a question. In the story Aquaria, chapter one i had read that Trenton had a double bachelor’s degree of Marine Science and Ocean Navigation and was doing a double master’s degree in Environmental Law and Marine Biology. I had assumed that he had done that in the past years. But maybe i was wrong. So what is Trenton studying now and why?
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    Oce Chapter 11

    The last paragraph of this chapter strayed into the wrong story
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    Pinocchio

    So true. You have expressed it brilliantly. Shame that you have to go trough this.
  14. And have you seen the dragon of Loch.Ness? i should think fhat he made a appearance to the creator of Ethan
  15. A pity that Kyle was under the influence of his elder brothers for so long. He could have been a very different man if he has been more with his father. A surprise that he is gay. Could that may be the reason with his brothers they could bring him into their criminal activities?
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    My Fortress

    This is great. Congratulations to you both. That you will have a good but most of all a happy marriage.
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    Chapter 30

    Yes , a brilliant story
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    Chapter 27

    The orange lion on a yellow background refers to South Holland in the Netherlands. Do you have a connection with that? Or is your image a reference to something else?
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    Chapter 27

    Yes, WoW !
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    Chapter 26

    And the time of Gavin’s destiny nears
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    Chapter 25

    Thrilling
  22. Thrilling
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    Chapter 51

    And i love surprises and the end.
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    Chapter 51

    Yes the content of the letter will be bad, but reading the letter will help them close the chapter Julianna. Great if Rhidian is boyfriend materiaal for Jay. They deserve true love and they would win as a bonus a good family. Image Drews mother would be than theirs grandmother
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    Requiem

    A good chapter again. Nice how Wren can take a first step towards a rapprochement between him and his uncles. He is a good man.
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