I'm not a caring person, and I usually have no feelings for the characters in a story. But I so badly want to take Elias in home and care for him. And I feel sorry for Artemis. He must feel so helpless that he can not help Elias.
That means you are doing a good job in writing this story. The characters seems realisticus.
Excellent written story. Easy to read, well-constructed, thrilling and with humor. It has everything. And you have made your own version of the were-creatures genre.
i enjoyed the story and look forward to the sequel.
A sweet story.
On this site are writers active who can draw beautifully such as Thirdly and Toma/Tomacchi.
And let Thirdly now just live in Florida. This can not be a coincidence. See her profile and albums, and maybe you can work together.
I hope for a new book too.
with different POV’s beside Danny’s. Josh getting older , Tristan using his writing/film talents, Dion his music talents.
Joshie choosing between sport en singing. Another new person in the house, a adulescent with a baby. Or some of the grown-ups coming back temporally.
Enough possibilitis
Thank you, but now i have a question. In the story Aquaria, chapter one i had read that Trenton had a double bachelor’s degree of Marine Science and Ocean Navigation and was doing a double master’s degree in Environmental Law and Marine Biology. I had assumed that he had done that in the past years. But maybe i was wrong. So what is Trenton studying now and why?
A pity that Kyle was under the influence of his elder brothers for so long. He could have been a very different man if he has been more with his father.
A surprise that he is gay. Could that may be the reason with his brothers they could bring him into their criminal activities?
The orange lion on a yellow background refers to South Holland in the Netherlands. Do you have a connection with that? Or is your image a reference to something else?
Yes the content of the letter will be bad, but reading the letter will help them close the chapter Julianna.
Great if Rhidian is boyfriend materiaal for Jay. They deserve true love and they would win as a bonus a good family. Image Drews mother would be than theirs grandmother