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    The Deer

    Well that was an interesting way to start the day. Godwin pissing all over Arlo.
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    Chapter 7

    This game is brutal, it's causing heartache and pain to some of the players I the game. Chloe is a brutal player, who seems to be enjoying the game. Does the Archivist know about Ben and Tim, knowing each other.
  3. Have a good day. Hope all goes well.
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    Chapter 7

    Has Ellis made a huge mistake, by letting Taine see Michael. Because Michael is never wrong and he told Taine it can be undone.
  5. Kitt can't afford to be unwell, he'll loose bothe job and flat. Matt is falling apart, barely holding it together. Two boys, both suffering, so closer together than they have yet discovered.
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    Chapter 3

    Stacy is a good friend to Lonnie and have him some solid advice, consider professional advice and get away for a while. Lonnie isn't ready to see anyone just yet, but it appears Keve has a back story as well. Fantastic chapter, thanks tim.
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    Chapter 14

    If you disappoint Septamus, you die at the hands of his sword.
  8. Interesting start to Kilby's birthday party. I still don't trust Bernice, especially with the drag acts that are due to perform.
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    Chapter 15

    It was great to see a different side to Jody.
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    The Alchemist

    Arlo and Godwin are much more comfortable around each other
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    Chapter 6

    So we meet two more of the players, they briefly formed a resistance. They need to think better than they are doing, turning off the cameras is good, but there are other means for The Archivest to get information. They need to go old school, use a pen and paper. Ditch the phones as a demeans of communication between themselves. He has access to microphone and is able to hack.
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    Choice

    Beautiful and know it's not ♥️
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks for reading and your wonderful comments 😀
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    Missing?

    Of course there are, this is a @Lee Wilson story after all.
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    Missing?

    A major issue averted, Sam is safe and back at home. Experimenting is fine.
  16. Wow, that chapter was a hard read. I don't know what to think about Andrew/Hunter at the moment, is he genuinely sorry. I feel so sorry for Marcus, everything he had with Andrew, disappeared when he found out he was Hunter, who bullied him.
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    Bernie

    I'm not sure Bernice going to Kilby's birthday party is gonna be a good idea, after all her homophobic comments.
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    Chapter 5

    The archivist is raising the stakes for Tim and Justin. They are no longer gonna get away with scripted, and acted scenes. Everything going forward, has to be off the cuff and real. Like the library scene that got them an A+.
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