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  1. Sounds like it was about to get interesting.
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    Prologue

    Interesting start.
  3. The Principal was not gonna listen to Aedan, he had made his decision regardless of what happened. A corrupt system by Aedan description of reform school.
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    Chapter 61

    Beautiful chapter. Erik's exhibition was a huge success and all the paintings sold.
  5. chris191070

    Chapter 1

    That was wonderfully ticklish. They make great friends and roommates.
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    Chapter 9

    Can Kier dominate Ben and become the ultimate ruler. If it’s not a love story why do Kier and Riley love each other
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    Chapter 29

    So the 2 chapters and a 200,000 word epilogue
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    Chapter 9

    Can Kier find a way to tame Ben and make himself the ultimate ruler.
  9. This is the perfect description of a British Council Estate, that can still be found today, in certain cities.
  10. chris191070

    Bardineto

    Well Louis seemed to enjoy a good time Sakis, after a little bit of foreplay. Louis will be a little bit tender, after such a vigorous session.
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    The Aftermath

    If I had to make a proper guess, Noah's Granpa or someone that is related to Tristan and Little B.
  12. Do you take orders, cause he is adorable. Hope Mike feels better soon x
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    Chapter 9

    Especially on a Council Estate.
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    Chapter 9

    Kieran needs to be away from any murders, anything like that and have alibis as he still as the fuzz, Miller watching his every move.
  15. chris191070

    Chapter 9

    Well they have finally talked and expressed there fears to each other. Each showing understanding of each other. They both need to sort out what comes next
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    Chapter 9

    Kieran has already got respect on the estate, he know has Deano and all the kids working for him. The Wolf won't get on the estate without The King knowing, but how will Kieran deal with The problem whilst he's at work,
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    Chapter 9

    The true battle for the estate has begun. Kieran has to prove he is the King of Cradle Grove and take down The Wolf.
  18. chris191070

    Track 22

    If Damien won't leave Ryan and Jasper alone, then Ryan needs to take more measures and get a restraining order.
  19. chris191070

    The Aftermath

    Well this is turning into a big mess. Some of the family are protecting Little B and Tristan. The mystery guest is Grandpa Tune into the next episode to find out more.
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    Chapter 29

  21. Oliver and Cody really messed up this time. Unfortunately Oliver's parents don't like him being with Cody.
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    Chapter 15

    There are a few authors who put the translation at the bottom of a chapter, if using a foreign language. I think with the small amount you used and the next sentence, you get the general gist of what was said.
  23. We can't watch it in the UK yet.
  24. I am quite sure that they will have been noted for this year's prompt anthology.
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