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    Chapter 7

    chris191070 commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Awesome chapter
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    Troy has completed his first task, but Jace has a personal task as he needs relief.
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    Chapter 1

    chris191070 commented on Rafy's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A wonderful short romantic story.
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    An awesome battle, it's good ro see good triumph over evil, everyone killed except Zereth. Kieran and Rory have a beautiful baby boy. Cian blessed Desmond and gave him forgiveness. A perfect chapter.
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    So a 40,000 word epilogue, would be perfect.
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    Track 18

    chris191070 commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Track 18

    Finally, Jasper and Ryan are communicating. They make a cute couple, but things are not gonna be easy for them.
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    Chapter 25

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 25

    A great chapter, things are starting to happen. The friendly faces the sub crew are expecting, are not coming, instead they get mercenaries who are out to cause mayhem and maximum damage. Will the HMS Richmond arrive in time, to save the day.
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    That was hot 🔥
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    Angus doesn't seem happy, with a lawyer speaking to his clients and suing him.
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    A wonderful use of the prompt #296. A short, but we'll written piece on what it's like to suffer from a hidden disability.
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    Cursed

    chris191070 commented on Gary L's story chapter in Cursed

    Wow, what a wonderful piece of writing. Many of us have hidden disabilities, myself included (I have epilepsy) Thanks for the understanding policeman and his medical card.
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    Chapter 5

    chris191070 commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 5

    The conversation between JJ and Pete was very impressive. There's something about Dallas, he looks like he's missing his friend JJ, the way he keeps searching him out. The dangers on this trip are immense, but so far no accidents.
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    Nope, not until tomorrow. 4.30pm flight from Manchester Airport, to Crete. (I'm off school for 5 weeks) So depending on WiFi coverage, I'll not be around as much for the next 12 days. Have a good day all.
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    Settling In

    chris191070 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Settling In

    Awesome chapter. Alot going on. I'm wondering if Marie is still going to be bitcy. Amy, the new Nanny sounds really nice.
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    Chapter 3

    chris191070 commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Equipment sorted, permits granted. All ready for the expedition. With there being a small glitch, the engineer that operates the machine from Dad's company is female.
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    Chapter 24

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 24

    With the brief synopsis you have given. The title sounds perfect. You have both Will and Andrew possibly needing to give order's, without knowing who gives Carter his order's.
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    This was a truly awesome battle, everything was perfect about it. Cian giving his blessing of the relationship, perfect. Elion and Ezra completing their love bond was beautiful. Them winning the battle just leaves us to see them regroup all together and us to see them start to resurrect the two kingdom's.
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    Well at 11am this morning we have a Fireman coming to do a fire safety check, in full uniform 😀
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    Chapter 24

    chris191070 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 24

    Enrico will not be able to control what happens next, he started it all. But it is being finished by a group of people. I feel sorry for Ezra, he's in too deep know to ever get out. The initial leak to the BBC, will be known around the world. (I'm in the UK, so it's there when I wake up (a bit later than normal).
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    I thought it was with the horses
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    LEADER
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    Troy has found good friends in Min and Yuki. Theo is the third member of the flat who Troy has had a brief glimpse of and it took his breath away
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    I'm on 5 weeks off from school.
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    Hello All 👋
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