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chris191070

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  1. Well the first ten poems have been truly amazing, invoking many different thoughts and memories.
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    Adventure Park

    Poor Oscar, still suffering anxiety attacks because of what happened with Ritzen.
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    Chapter 5

    Plenty of interesting conversations with many bits of information talked about. The party was a success. Loved the wandering cat.
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    Chapter 4

    What an intense chapter. Marco having it bad with his father, because of his letters. Sami because of the school bullies. Gianni having a panic attack becaof Sami's memories. We need the party, to make them all relaxed.
  5. Oops I can't count, definitely number 9. I wouldn’t want to smell a skunk
  6. I love them all, but number 8 reminds me of the smell of fresh bread in a bakery.
  7. Crusty and risen sounds like a French Stick.
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    Chapter 3

    Poor Gianni, he's struggling to understand Sami. But he needs to realise that Sami has lost his parents, relatives and struggled for so long without adults. Sami has bonded with Marco and Dani, because they rescued him and looked after him.
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    Chapter 2

    Great to see the return of Reza. Sami seems to have made a good friendship with Dani and Marco. The party will be good for everyone. Angelo and Gianni are gonna need help, to raise Sami.
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    Chapter 2

    Brussel sprouts are nasty. I always remember my Mum when I was a kid hiding one on my Christmas Dinner plate and telling me to eat it or no pudding.
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    Chapter 1

    Time to start Story Number 8, I'm almost caught up @James Carnarvon. It's great to see Gianno, Angelo and Sami. I think Gianni is worried if he's made a mistake taking Sami in, Angelo seems far more confident. At least Sami knows a few words in Italian and English.
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    Chapter 3

  13. Brilliantly written, but such a sad chapter.
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    Chapter 3

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    Chapter 3

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    Chapter 3

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    Chapter 6

    About time that Liam and Mike kissed.
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    Surprise Reunion

    I think all our questions will be answered in due course.
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    Chapter 3

  20. Isn't a lynx a mens deodorant
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    Surprise Reunion

    Great chapter. Oscar seems to have a great group of friends. The incident at the waterpark will test his anxiety to the limit.
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    Chapter 3

  23. Theresa and Gustav graduated from CCNY four years earlier. Ken found their high school yearbook extremely helpful, so he hoped that their college yearbook would be even more revealing. He took a chance on one of his hunches and revisited the crime scene. Ken’s hunches were generally spot-on, and he found Gustav’s college yearbook on a bookshelf. The book did not reveal anything untoward to the veteran detective, but he noticed something interesting. The four middle pages of the book consist
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