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Everything posted by hoaluu
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But Marie Antoinette never said that http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=let them eat cake
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Your blog and Quora page are very informative (and funny). I've learned a lot, thank you
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Chris sounds like he's trying to protect Ryan? He needs to calm down and talk to Ryan properly, he's in very bad state now... I don't like Ryan's parents. His father seems like he's using his son, his mother was so irresponsible she didn't let him meet his father... I know there's a reason she did so, but I still don't think it's a good idea.
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This is the time when the What-if question raises in your head. What if I didn't do that? The result would be much different. Hope Donny and Louis can overcome this difficult time...
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Um... so if I say this to my (future) bf: "I will make you love me", that means I manipulate him into loving me? And I think you underestimate tim too much. He's not weak to be manipulated by anyone. Hi Mike, I hope you don't mind me reading your blog. Thank you for sharing your thought, your life here.
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Sometimes I want somebody would say these words to me, sometimes I want to say these words to people I know... This is such a nice poem
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Interlude 3: Friendship & Trust
hoaluu commented on Brayon's story chapter in Interlude 3: Friendship & Trust
So by sending information back, more and more time lines will be created? And what's the cost for doing this? Did the future four have something sent to them from the future? -
Light reading Send you lots of You'll be fine.
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Allow me to I hope you'll feel better soon.
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Chapter 9: "Don't Believe in Fairy Tales"
hoaluu commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 9: "Don't Believe in Fairy Tales"
After watching lots of Chinese dramas, I know Chinese words often have subtle meanings, sometimes I feel it is scary. Like how the hell can you know it is meant this way, not that way? I'm sorry this relationship couldn't continue, but I feel that after this, you also realized more about yourself, and your next relationship would be much better. -
Chapter 2:: "I don't think we're right for each...."
hoaluu commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 2:: "I don't think we're right for each...."
*raise hand* Me, me, I like watching TVB dramas too! I watched No Regrets and listened to its epic theme song countless time. Bu Bu Jing Xin? I hate the main girl so much I couldn't get to the 5th or 6th episode. Gong is much better, the theme song is also great.. I even tried singing it in karaoke with the help from my friend (I know very little Mandarin Chinese) Pudong... I've been to Pudong Airport, it's a nice place, much nicer than Beijing Airport imo. -
The Guardian (Keeper of the Truth)
hoaluu commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in The Guardian (Keeper of the Truth)
This is really good, an interesting take on the connection between ancient civilizations and aliens. The plot made me anxious about what happened next, the action is fast-paced, the mystery about the guardians is appealing... But I still have some questions: 1. Why did Master Edward choose George to be his apprentice? Guardians must know how to keep secrets, have a strong mental state to not be wavered by anything and be able to endure loneliness. How can Master Edward be sure George can do the work when he met George when George was just a child? It turns out that George slipped the secret to Jonathan, later to Samuel... Of course there's no harm, but what if Jonathan is not a good person? Isn't George just like Noah, let his emotion won over? How can we sure if George won't slip the secret to anyone else later in his life? He seemed really... not mentally strong at all. 2. The grand council I thought their last meeting was 6000 BC? Who are they, how long have they lived, they communicate with the guardians through mirrors or anything else? Speaking of mirrors, aren't there anything else passed from the ancient time? 3. The guardians, we don't know any other guardians except from Ashok (only mentioned a few times), Noah (very unreliable), the guy in Paris (he's the one I want to meet most, how can he not make any appearance...). I want to know their backgrounds, how they live with big secret, how their families deal with it,... I'm sorry George and Noah leave bad impression on guardians to me. Wait, the other guardians didn't even recognize there was a fake among them... It's dangerous when you live apart and can't see each other 's face... If only the mirrors were as modern as Skype. 4. The secret. The alien left their knowledge to human, so that when the time comes, human can leave Earth and find another planet... But what if at that time human's technology is better than the alien? 5. I don't think the tradition of passing the mission from father to the eldest son is suitable. Look at Noah (I'm sorry but I don't like him). But choosing randomly like Master Edward is not ok either. So what's the best way to choose apprentice? I'm sorry I questioned too much, I just like reading ancient civilizations- related stories -
I see a man waiting for his lover, under the moonlight He's not old or dull, he's a shining star, shining brighter and brighter as time flows by I hope the one he's waiting for will soon come to him and then they can dance through many moonlight nights ^ ^ ^ Just my thought after I read
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I'm so frustrated with Matt I don't even want him and Mike back together. It's not fair for Mike, he suddenly becomes Matt's backup plan. Why did Matt choose Sarah? Why did Sarah have to die? The last two chapters seem like a different story.
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I'm trying not to cry... Thank you so much, it's the first time I have a poem written for me Your words are so beautiful, I don't know how to describe the feeling they give me...
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Laryn will have a long road ahead and thankfully he has his uncles helping him. I so hope you'll write a sequel for Jonne, he deserves his own hea. Vaneyl is just like a stop in Jonne's journey to his hea (of course it'd be the opposite if we read the books but I like to think it this way) so I hope he'd find his one soon.
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I remember all the jokes I've read and heard about people who work in the street... It's cruel, they have their lives too, who are we to judge... Thank you for sharing these.
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Please tell me there'll be a sequel... I need to see more of Imp I have to admit I'm still not warm up to Angel... but Imp makes it up for me.
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If You Can't Stand the Heat
hoaluu commented on QuinnDK's story chapter in If You Can't Stand the Heat
I laugh so hard at the menu Aiden will fit in easily. Can't wait to see the next chapter. -
The Last Leaf - O Henry Prompt #2
hoaluu commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in The Last Leaf - O Henry Prompt #2
I read The Last Leaf in middle school (it's in the text book so we all had to learn it) but at the time I didn't really like it. It's a surprise to see it in a different way and have a bit of romance, which is very refreshing. I don't feel anything "horror" here, maybe because I'm too glad the story has a bright ending compared to the original that I don't care about any other details... Thank you for writing this story, I like Bobby's character a lot. -
I really like your story, sometimes I had to stop (and sob/cry) for all those hardships Andy had to go through to reach his happiness. He's so smart, courageous and kind yet so humble and always put other people before himself... Thank you for creating such a beautiful story.
