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  1. FanLit

    Chapter 37

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    Chapter 37

    You DARE to insinuate Caleb in additional wrongdoing within @Mrsgnomieand @84Mags eye view?!?! Lol!!
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    Chapter 37

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    Chapter 37

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    Chapter 37

    Really?!?! In an @kbois story?!?!
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    Chapter 37

    Cock.
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    Chapter 37

    Back on your first place block, I see, lol.
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    Chapter 37

    “All things considered, not bad. Austin and Ashton chose to sleep with us, separately, of course,” Tyler admitted. “Whoa! That could have been dangerous,” Zev declared, giving him a concerned look. “How?” “Your mates haven’t been in full control of their wolves in a long time. You have no idea how strong the mate pull can be. If their wolves decided to push themselves forward, well, they could force the mating claim. You could have been hurt.” THANK YOU, ZEV. That was my concern all along. While I am no shifter aficionado, the few shifter stories I’ve read have always spoken to how strong the animal is within, particularly wolves, particularly with a mate connection; Ashton and Austin are not fully in control of their wolves, they were actually in situations where their wolves were more welcome than their human sides….Tyler and Elijah both could’ve been chop suey if the mate pull was too strong; and that would’ve been the end of all four of them, as Ashton and Austin would not have survived or gone mad over killing their mates. Fuck you, Kasar Huntington….fuck you with a thick, splintery branch of wood that has poison ivy on it. I’m not surprised that mangy he-bitch was watching Tyler’s family, smh…. Your (frankly overdue, lol) cliffy poses a question (or two): why would Kasar want the twins back now when Corbin had them for last couple of years and they were “out of rotation”? How would he know that they are with Sebastian’s pack? Is there another traitor in their midst?
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    The Game

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    The Game

    Once again, the mistress of eloquent commentary better said what I was trying to say, lol. 🙏 🎁🌹
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    The Game

    The bittersweet synchronicity of Coldplay being Lars’ & Loren’s first concert made the performance even more meaningful. 😢
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    The Game

    You could not have wrapped this story up in a bigger, better bow….to show the contrast and triumph over Loren and his biological progenitors, I’m still looking up “death by mob harassment”….I can only surmise that they killed themselves under the negative pressure of public opinion(?) If so, it’s an interesting C.O.D…..they had no problem living in the swill of their deeds in the shadows. Hoisted by their own petard….it works for me. Thank you for this last glimpse into their world for the foreseeable future, it is incredibly satisfying.
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    The Game

    Haven’t read it yet, just sad to see Complete I know all good things must come to an end; okay, going to read now….
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    Chapter 36

    Of course you can, lol. I have faith in you.
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    Chapter 36

    Thanks for the new word (camphoraceous). 😁
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    Chapter 36

    I know maple, holly & spruce have very pleasant scents, I like the name agathis, lol. The woodsy fragrance will have to be something to blend well or complement a sweet scent.
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    Chapter 36

    See my later comment….guess great minds think alike, lol.
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    Chapter 36

    I was going to take time & figure a scent combo but I like this base-the snickerdoodle connection & if not cedar, some other type of pleasantly fragrant wood, as Tyler is a musician and all instruments outside of brass are made of wood.
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    Chapter 36

    I knew I forgot to mention something! (probably several somethings, lol) Do we ever outgrow wanting a lollipop at the end of a doctor’s visit? Lol!!
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    Chapter 36

    Caleb’s situation was heartbreaking and devastating….aside from the consequence he faced from the pack, he as his own judge and jury has sentenced himself far worse….if a mate connection cannot serve as goad and goal, perhaps the thought that Vann may want to seek him out one day should inspire….I truly wish something turns him around and soon because as Zev said, he has to want the help. 🙏 “Ashton grunted and tapped his tablet to wake it up. He typed out a message. Stay with me? Elijah’s eyes widened comically. He tapped the keyboard again. Just sleep? “ 😳 Nothing spoke more to the strength of the mate bond than Elijah agreeing to Ashton‘s request-while progress has been made, I don’t know that I could have agreed were I Elijah…. Kage’s still around and I don’t think he’s going to go until he knows that all obstacles to Elijah & Ashton’s path to togetherness are gone. As I may not get the chance to say so again, aside from reading material, Corbin is badass!! 😊; I hope the day comes he’s reunited with the whole family and Mom & Pop Larabee get to personally convey their gratitude, I’m sure he’s a member of the family as far as they’re concerned.
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    Chapter 36

    Wow. 😍 How often have we wished a dream stayed with us when we woke? Ashton had to know his real life nightmare was truly over when he woke to scent and vision of his Mom, just as Austin must have upon seeing their Dad…..(is this an indication of whom each was closer to when they were younger?) That their first coherent communication was “I missed you” to their parents? You delivered a first class, ugly cry reunion, @kbois , lol; Thank you. 🎁 Do the Larabees care that their sons’ mates were same sex? Was there any indication Ashton and/or Austin were gay before they were kidnapped? “Weren’t they going to get poked and prodded? He was confused. Someone always gave them a thorough exam whenever he and Austin were sold. One of which always required them to strip down to be pinched and poked all over.” ☹️ For me, this passage brought home the fact it’s been eight years Ashton and Austin were trafficked….there are horrors to overcome, the only consolation is that A&A are alive and in the best possible surroundings to recover….as much as their mates and parents are the foundation for that, speaking to other survivors will help to heal as well. I forget if Ashton was the mischievous one or extrovert, he seems to be the lens both boys reaction are viewed from, maybe he was born first? I still have more to say, lol but I also have more to do so part II on the way….
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    Chapter 35

    What do Ashton and Austin’s wolves want to do to their mates in their partial ferality? Would they dominate them? Destroy them?
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    Chapter 35

    Great song, great artist 🪦
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    Chapter 35

    More violent and painful than Trevor? Aye ✋
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    Chapter 35

    “An American Werewolf in London”? Oh wait, you did say “wolf-human friendly story”, never mind, lol. And it’s a film, oops. 😬
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