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Your comment reminded me: I LOVE the new rebranding- JL
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Mike and Julia absolutely saved Loren’s life….and cowardice and luck. The whys could drive us crazy, lol.
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That those connected cells even THOUGHT they had a right to sue, show up at Loe’s wedding….their gall is maddening beyond comprehension. Then I looked up the definition of cancer: ”a malignant growth or tumor resulting from the division of abnormal cells.” “a practice or phenomenon perceived to be evil or destructive and hard to contain or eradicate.” Similar: evil, blight, scourge Sounds about right. NOW I’m done talking about them. 🤐
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👏 I couldn’t have said this better.
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This chapter made my eyes spring a leak. Loren the Crusader and Loren the Healed touched on all the tender spots of dysfunction and trauma that’s been an unfortunate part of anyone’s childhood; he definitely touched on mine. As far as chromosome 23a & chromosome 23b, to quote Scotty Appleton in “New Jack City”: “I wanna shoot you so bad, my dick's hard!“ (and I don’t even have a dick!!!!) Those two husks of flesh won’t get any mention from me anymore unless it’s exultation at whatever karma dishes out; karma is real and karma is just and I’m excited to witness it. It’s disgusting that they are part of a cast of despicable characters. 💔🤬 “The truth is, nothing Rob is about to say will change my life. I should be feeling … more as his story reaches a crescendo, but I only feel peace. My parent’s bullshit doesn’t hold me like it used to.” This is the wish I have for any child dealing with their parent’s emotional backwash….I know it’s easier said than done; Loren may have some more work to do based on what he’s heard but he has done the work to lay the best foundation to cope with these revelations, he can now help Lars and be a voice for the voiceless in this most heinous type of crime.
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LOL. Didn't know I was in contention as a favorite. I'm a lover, not a fighter (mostly, 😊).
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Heyyyy….what if Caleb is Corbin Taylor?!?! I too thought one of the twins killed Ken Martin to defend or protect the other.
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Kudos to you, @Blue Fan Lady, it’s the chore I like the least.
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They are alive. They are safe now. They will be rescued. I dare say if Cassiel and/or Lex could see Ashton’s and Austin’s threads, they’d match Elijah’s and Tyler’s….strings and snippets of their respective lives jigsaw together perfectly. There will be damage, physically, mentally and emotionally but they will heal-these 6 are already family and the strength of their bond will be the best aid and buffer.
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Knowing @kbois, it’ll be something really simple like when Elijah asked Cassiel why he never told Kage his name: “Why didn’t you ever tell Kage your name?” “He never asked,” Cassiel replied. That still tickles me SO much!!
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It worked for Reilly and Kellan 😳 🤞
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The Laramees, besides being a kind, wildly attractive couple, have an ease with Elijah and Tyler-makes me wonder if the guys are talking to their future in laws…..methinks the reaction to their photos will pale in comparison to their reaction in person; I pray they are still as good looking as their pics detail (yeah, I’m being superficial). Thanks for the food porn!!: “perfect al dente noodles, sauteed in some olive oil, tossed with chicken, and seasoned with just the right amount of buffalo sauce. It was barely enough to coat each piece of meat, not overpoweringly spicy, just the right amount to complement the noodles. Fire-roasted tomatoes and blue cheese crumbles rounded out the dish. It was amazingly delicious. “
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LMAO!! I had 💩 up the back, (how TF does that happen?!?!) I’ve had runny 💩, funny smelling 💩, there was 💩 as thick as my wrist (I called it Dino 💩, lol) 💩 that oozed out like toothpaste, but nope, no projectile 💩. Now projectile upchuck….that a different story & worse, if you ask me. I also just have one so that might be why I was spared.
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Yet Loe make that name work….until his confession to Aidan, I never would’ve guessed that a starfish inspired his new name, lol. Does Loe still use his birth name as his legal name? Is Loren Patrick only a trademark, corporation or LLC?
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If you ever gave their new last name, I missed it, lol.
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The only reason I don’t fly more is that I can’t afford my own plane yet….well, that and the fact my head and stomach explode, lol!!
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I get like a baby with the air pressure lol, so I know precious little ones feel it worse. Gum doesn’t work, I can only swallow so much at a time….sometimes ear pluggy things work AND I get nauseous. Yes, I want teleportation as my superpower, lol!!
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There truly is so much good stuff in this chapter….
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This was a wonderful glimpse into Casa Patrick-Petermeyer (Petermeyer-Patrick? Patrimeyer? Peterick?) Lol. 🤷♀️ What is the family name? To no one’s surprise (except Loe’s) Loren is an amazing father….to watch him at the discovery phase of parenthood is enchanting, nothing gross or frustrating wigs him out, he absorbs and adapts to his beautiful creations: “We really thought we’d bring a set of four-week-old girls to the gym and workout as if it’s just another day?” I ask, still laughing because I never thought I’d see Loren holding a tiny baby at the gym. Loren smiles proudly, unperturbed by how different his sacred gym time looks. “It is just another day.” “….I watch as Loren does push-ups over Maci, kissing her sweet face on each downturn. “This is how we build confident girls,” he reminds me.” M&M delivered karmic retribution when Daddy went to see Rob Stone without Papa….that scenario made me extremely grateful projectile shit was not a part of my son’s diaper hood, LOL!! 💩 Swoon worthiest exchange of the chapter: “Tell me that wasn’t the best decision you ever made?” Lars asks as he leans in close to Loren. “….He turns to me and holds my eyes for a moment, then smiles. “Second best decision.” Like the cockroaches they are, the biological antecedents scuttled back into the crevice they eke in when the light shined on them….they will be very sorry they opened the can of worms they did with the defamation suit, as I believe (hope 😄🤞) all their misdeeds will be exposed, resulting in public condemnation at the least or jail time at best….l never thought I’d say this but I’d be okay with a suicide pact from them as an escape from their exposure, it’d be one way Lars and Loren would never have to worry about them again. I tried to look for the Jackson Jones case & only came up with a DJ who pled guilty to child porn; speaking of….please don’t let whatever heinous actions those two did involve anything like that-I know Loren told Jay once that they never molested him but I’m just sayin’ 🙏 🤞 Liking this visit back to PeterPatrickville very much. 💝
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You guys should take this act on the road, lol!!
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I think she missed you, @chris191070, lol
