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For a minute SOMEONE had me thinking that Tyler wasn’t Tyler after Kage’s death-(that shapeshifter ability can get a lot of mileage)

They have to come, Elijah won’t be able to take down the shift sex ring alone. They just need that dog whistle (or phone call, lol)

Trevor AND Kasar. That mangy cat is responsible for this whole dang mess.

Ummm….

If that’s your criteria, you’ll be writing for a while then, lol. I’m still

I didn’t take your meaning that way, I took it as a passionate reaction to a well written story. In one of @kbois ‘s first stories, I was giving her guff for some plot development and she asked me one question, (which I may be paraphrasing)- it was either “Do you trust me as a writer?” or “Do you trust me to tell a good story?” My answer to her was “yes” and I’ve trusted her ever since. Her happily ever afters aren’t rainbows and balloons but they are the best case scenarios for her characters. I hope you stick around.

You’re very welcome.🙏 Though to be clear, I was referring to @JayT’s little bit dramatic don't you think???? to @shifterslover’s comment. While I know should they stop reading, they’ll miss out on a good story, no one should be shamed for their reaction, as long as they are not offensive or disrespectful. You and your fellow writers pen stories for a response….you don’t always know what that response will be; I took shifterlover’s passionate reaction as a mark of being invested in the drama you’ve woven, that shouldn’t be belittled.

Okay…. I’ve been on a few stories/rides with @kbois, @shifterslover and while I’m definitely NOT happy with the way things are going in this story, she’s an excellent writer, I have faith this twist will be worth the wait. Everyone is entitled to their opinion, dramatic, somber and otherwise, as long as it is not abusive or veer toward shaming, as in my opinion, this response is veryclose to. And by the way, @JayT, it’s Kage not Kate (go back to your first comment).

This story has me in traumatic shock. I don’t have many words except for: Thanks for another new word: adumbration.

Well played, @kbois. All that suspenseful foreplay led to a, uh, real hard that took my breath away. That really f**ked me up, lol.

Rainbows and unicorns….being naked in an air conditioned room on a hella hot day….becoming a multimillionaire….curing cancer/every virus/every pox….

@scrubber6620 I didn’t mean to make you sad….think of it as more for you. 😊

You and me are eye to eye on social interaction and this was waaay before all the viruses and poxes floating around, lol!!

That quinine aftertaste in tonic water is tough for me to take.

Thank you for reminding me!! Thanks for the new word, @kbois, I love learning new words, lol.

Well said. That only thing missing from that shifter list of security at Kasar’s home was the “Oh My”, lol.

I half expected Kasar to take a long sniff of Elijah when he walked in the office but I knew he wouldn’t because that would be too obvious; no doubt all five senses were on alert during that meeting. Yin and Yang has come to my mind thinking of Shadow and Shape as well. ☯️

As I read through the attractions listed for San Francisco, I also thought of “Lombard Street”, known as the “crookedest street in the world”, (though I’ve never been and with my motion sickness probably wouldn’t be able to visit if I were.) Kah-gey is in business mode when he’s on a mission so his “hands” off policy was understandable; I’m glad he relented to Elijah’s request to “be as they were before”: “Kage’s eyes visibly softened, and his body language relaxed. He gave a heavy sigh before replying. “You’re right. I’m sorry I’ve been an ass. I’m not good with this kind of thing. I can mix and mingle and fake it fantastically, but when it comes to actually interacting with someone on a personal level, I’m an idiot.” Elijah smiled, the first genuine one he’d had in two days. “Maybe not an idiot. Let’s go with socially-stunted in personal matters.” -Elijah’s reasoning made me think of the phrase “love means never having to say you’re sorry”, lol. Once given that green light, proximity to “his shapeshifter” was magnetic, as evidenced by his cheek kissing and tongue fucking, lol. I do hope Kage accedes to Elijah’s plea for one more night of passion….as Elijah realized earlier in the chapter, tomorrow wasn’t promised whichever road they chose so live in the here and now. The description given of Huntington reminded me of how often evil can be wrapped up in a beautiful exterior. His lion would be a sight, not only because of his majestic appearance but because the cold calculation behind his eyes would have no more filter and I think it would be fearsome. Who was the predator in that meeting and who was the prey? Did each get what they wanted or needed from it? Those eyes that never matched the smile on his lips showed that Huntington was well, on the hunt too. (unintentional pun but it fits, lol) “Elijah looked over the menu and decided on the pear and gorgonzola ravioli. Kage ordered a steak.” Food porn!! Thank you. 😁 Until next time….

A compelling start to a still very delicate topic, two actually-death and death by AIDS. Todd sounds like he was a beautiful wreck, lol. There is a bittersweet anticipation reading about the life lived between the two dates that bookend his existence.

That or there was nothing better to do, LMAO!!

Not frightened at all, just surprised at the depth of his powers….obviously that ability makes him a better assassin than most, his arsenal for slow and torturous deaths exceeds poisons and brutal beatings; It also explains why he doesn’t feel deserving of the light in life, he was bred and focused into darkness. Who the heck is his adopted daddy, anyway? He and his bio kid….well they’ve a lot to answer for.

This passage, though filled with the realities of Kah-gey’s life to this point, was also full of the self loathing he feels for himself and why he doesn’t feel worthy of being in Elijah’s life (or having any kind of normal life) also added to the magic of this chapter. 💔 “You want to know who I really am? I’m not just a shadow shifter and assassin. My boss sends me when he needs to take someone out and not leave a single trace. You want to know how I can do that? I can give someone a massive heart attack that kills them instantly. I can give someone stage-four cancer that will kill in a few months and make them suffer. I can give someone ALS and let them deteriorate for years while their loved ones watch helplessly. You know how I can do it? By just touching them! That’s who I am Elijah. I’m the Grim-Fucking-Reaper people are afraid of! That’s why I’m not good for you!” Kage growled loudly, his breathing rough and ragged.” Are there germ warfare’s capable of such things or did this also speak to other powers Kage possesses?