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I can’t help but feel that our dear Kah-gey is the one directing Elijah’s ideas, instead of being his guardian angel, he is his navigator on this mission, dedicated to keeping him safe….whomever Elijah is paired with, it will always be three on their team. Your attention to detail on strategizing, as well as cataloging the lingering complications the hybrid pups are facing is to be applauded 👏 the whole endeavor is overwhelming in scope and yet nothing seems to be missed. While I’m sure this story may be a welcome distraction in the midst of your grieving, I thank you as a reader for having the strength to still want to share it….please know that any delays will be understood.
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Rest In Peace to your Mother.
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I think Lex is my favorite of your characters (and not because he was the first, lol) 💝
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I missed that. As to the rest of this comment….there are times I wish there was a “hug” reaction.
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Oh Yeah!!… “It wasn’t until they were naked that he realized four extremely hot individuals, in all their natural glory, stood in front of him. They were all off-limits. Damn.” Is that an indication of preference or just general appreciation?
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Montana at last. = It’s good to get reacquainted with the guys again. Besides uncovering all needed to break up the trafficking ring, I think Elijah will do a lot of healing here, true healing, as it is apparent that Tyler and Elijah are an inherent part of each other’s happiness and this seems to be the only place Elijah feels he belongs at the moment. E& T’s banter and emotional shorthand are humorous and touching (and noted by all). I’m feeling lulled….never a safe headspace in an @kbois story, lol. This passage includes the “ha ha” moment for me this chapter: Tyler guessed he was the empathetic one of the group. Either that, or he was trying to get him to let his guard down so they all could enjoy a little Scooby snack before their dinner. An appe-Ty-zer. Nope, not letting his thoughts go there. He promised Elijah. Appe-Ty-zer, indeed.
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Blessed Felicitations on your engagement. 💝🥂
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Magnifique comment.
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And this…. “Why didn’t you ever tell Kage your name?” “He never asked,” Cassiel replied. It knocked me over while I had a deep belly laugh over it….I do tell my son the answer to every unasked question is no. This was a humorous reminder that “you miss 100% of the shots you don’t take” We also know Elijah is of Fae and wolf shifter heritage, a hybrid himself; Cassiel may well be correct about Elijah’s importance in busting this sex ring. (Ima still call him “B” now and again, in tribute to the dearly departed:
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“Why are Huntington and his snotshitwad minions still alive?” That word sounds like it came from such an intelligent, beautiful source….😉 “The brother who lost had to let the winner rename the village. The winning brother chose Llanfairpwllgwyngyllgogerychwyrndrobwllllantysiliogogogoch.” Who knew comments could be source material? I like The Fae (“B”)….he’s smart, can admit to mistakes, is a rebel and has a kind side that he showed to Elijah….I don’t know if he’s a good guy but I certainly don’t think he’s all bad; the information he provided on shifter heritage is fascinating. Looks like Trevor is a double agent, I hope B can keep ahead of him to avenge Kah-gey. It figures that mangy cat would be wily enough to get some type of protection, thank goodness B is working on removing his flea collar….Make them pay, B Just make them pay. I’m relieved Elijah and Tyler made it this far without incident, I won’t relax until they are safely with the Sebastian & Co.
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Hmmm…. At first, I was going to say that love for Tyler’s family aside, Elijah is in a position of flux….his roots can be replanted anywhere; at this point I see E&T together wherever or whomever comes across their path. Theeennn….something about “ I can't imagine Tyler abandoning him for some wolfie luv.” made me wonder-will Tyler have some BFF love in his future? 🤔 You’re tighter than a virgin at fleet week about giving anything away-this was just a kernel of a thought that came into my mind that I threw against the wall (some things stick, some things don’t 🤷♀️)
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This response reminds me I meant to comment on the pic-I thought it was a combo of Kage and Elijah after well, you know….the pic looks like both of them. To repeat a great quote: “BTW, you're still a monster for killing Kage.” ❤️ (thanks @astone2292, lol) Congrats on Tyler’s promotion….that means he’s finding his mate in Montana & he/she’s probably a werewolf, lol!!
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Fellow lifetime tea lover here….it’s my favorite beverage. As a product of the American Northeast, I’ve never been to Cracker Barrel, Howard Johnson’s or Stuckey’s but I really wish Stuckey’s was in my experience for the tea aspect alone, lol.
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It was nice to see things from Tyler’s point of view; I think this trip will be transformative for him in ways besides being Elijah’s support. I’m still unsure if The Fae ambushed Kage & if he isn’t setting up to do the same to Elijah….guess we’ll find out.
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This is my first time getting on-site all day; Cache has hindered my reading ability….Will try to get it read today, lol 🤞
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If he could spell that, I’d doff my hat in respect, lol. Got me polishing up rarely used words, @kbois, lol. Supercalifragilisticexpealidocious. although I think I misspelled a letter,
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Oh!! While it was a word I knew, it not an often used word-I thank you for “imponderable”.
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Oh how you must have hated that people figured out the laptop was in the car so early, lol!!!! Then again, you probably figured the other goodies up your sleeve were juicy enough to give that away. FUCK. YOU. TREVOR. I get that in his line of business he has to be brazen but to just swagger in and threaten Tyler’s family?!?! Snotshitwad. Thank goodness he didn’t figure out they had laptop in their possession. I guess dumb snotshitwad. 🤷♀️ So Montana’s the next stop….finally!!!! LOL!! If you don’t call the dogs to you, go to the dogs. Will history repeat itself and Tyler find his “mate”, too during this adventure? 🤔 P.S.-I love how Kage encouraged Elijah to let Tyler go to Montana with him….it’s like he literally lives within Elijah for the moment. ”Do it, a voice inside him said, a soft, but insistent heat spreading out from his chest.” 💝💔 To Montana….
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Before Wednesday (and what at that time will be two chapters later), the following passage captured me from chapter 16: “He could clearly make out all the shades of blackness the night presented. So many names for variations of the color that dictated his existence. Onyx. Ebony. Obsidian. Sable. Raven. All different, but meaning the same.” It was the first time I can remember seeing so many different shades of black listed at once, it beautifully illuminated darkness. There was a comical section I was going to note before murder was the case that you gave us so that went right out the window.
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You had to bring up Nash. Lyssa and Nash have been my “obstacles” in your realm….now there’s Kage; The list will grow BUT calamity characters are in the minority of your cast, they kinda have to be (you put some BIG calamities on your people, lol)
