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Is that on a stack of bibles or a crate of bottles? 😂

@kboisAre you a member of an exotic spirits of the month club? You come up with the most amazing liquors/liqueurs , lol.

I was trying not to be a spoiler but oh well, lol.

Still talking about Jay prepping for Loren I see….😬

I really like that you started this chapter with Jay preparing to bottom for Loren. Too few stories get into the specifics & it’s a part of the process of anal sex; It became humorously touching (and ouch!) that Jay became so cramped after his enema; He wanted to surprise his man & isn’t afraid of anything to achieve that end. The results wound up being well worth it: “I’m officially a bottom,” I tell him later, after he’s thoroughly exhausted me.” That wound up being the calm before the storm because Loren done did it now by getting hurt. 😳 😱 😮 I remember the timeframe this dovetails with in “Boss Nanny” & without providing any spoilers, I’ll be interested in seeing the aftermath of Jay reaching Loren. There’s gonna be a come to Jesus conversation between them about the dangerous aspects of each of their lives….that talk won’t be pretty but it will be necessary and hopefully, clarifying. The line that made me laugh out loud: “He laughs. “Just ‘cause I think you’re spoiled doesn’t mean I think you’re a brat. You’re incredibly amazing and humble.”- I loved this line because I believe this and say it often, being spoiled doesn’t mean being a brat; With what we’ve all lived through lately, we can all do with being spoiled more for sure. The line(s) that made me something: “Only if you tell me I’m the only one for you.” Before I slide to my knees, Loren grabs my shirt and looks me in the eye. “I don’t bounce on anyone’s dick. I bounce on your dick. Now, suck mine like you’re the last man who gets to do it.” Yes Sir.” I love someone who can take charge….Yum.

@raven1 & @Mrsgnomie- I (and perhaps the Oregon Tourist Association, lol) loved the walk down hometowns lane; raven1 was surely meant to read this story considering his life path, 😊.

I agree with you, so much, lol!! if you snooze, you lose. It’s a testament to Mrsgnomie’s storytelling; At this point, if I can’t get to the chapter early enough, I forgo commenting when I see 3+ pages unless it’s something I really feels needs to be said. I dare say @Mrsgnomiethat this is is your most commented on story on this site….

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This comment was posted in the main story comment instead of the chapter comment- 😳🙄 Am reposting here The lines that made me laugh out loud: ”I’ve had more blowjobs than I’ve had sodas and none of them were ever like this.” And “I’m so fucking layered up I could win a game of strip poker with a losing hand.” 😂😂😂😂 The lines that made me swoon: ”I press my fingers against my chest just to feel the way my heart beats for him—like it’s never beat for anyonebefore. It beats for things I never knew existed.” Those words I last quoted, that right there, is why Jay and Loren will overcome all obstacles they encounter, and this chapter detailed some obstacles. I like a person who can embrace their faults- “There’s a mean stubborn streak inside me. When I get going, my anger can gain enough momentum to keep a small lighthouse powered for days. It’s one of my lesser redeeming qualities.” Knowing is half the battle, lol I look forward to all our lovebirds will experience on this trip. *fastening seatbelt*

I’d say that this is Loe’s livelihood, as well. Loren proves himself as a Jack of all trades…. I think sexual positions are the only thing he hasn’t marketed at this point, lol. Loe’s social empire is admirable & Jay shows how in love he is to expose himself in ways he previously has not via this road trip; While it’s his choice, I wonder if he truly knew what he was getting into, I feel mercilessly exposed on Jay’s behalf, lol.

The lines that made me laugh out loud: ”I’ve had more blowjobs than I’ve had sodas and none of them were ever like this.” And “I’m so fucking layered up I could win a game of strip poker with a losing hand.” 😂😂😂😂 The lines that made me swoon: ”I press my fingers against my chest just to feel the way my heart beats for him—like it’s never beat for anyone before. It beats for things I never knew existed.” Those words I last quoted, that right there, is why Jay and Loren will overcome all obstacles they encounter, and this chapter detailed some obstacles. I like a person who can embrace their faults- “There’s a mean stubborn streak inside me. When I get going, my anger can gain enough momentum to keep a small lighthouse powered for days. It’s one of my lesser redeeming qualities.” Knowing is half the battle, lol I look forward to all our lovebirds will experience on this trip. *fastening seatbelt*

Oh, and my laugh out loud moment: “I don’t want to toot my own horn but I’m pretty creative, too. I suggest a photo of us playing Stratego. Surprise flashes in Loren’s eyes when I bring the box to the kitchen. It’s dirty and a little stained after finding it in the trash a few weeks ago. He avoids eye contact.” While I’m at it, my swoon moment: “My only plan for this offseason, besides some endorsements and a few other things my manager has set up, is to be available to Loren in whatever way he needs me.“ 😍😍😍😍

This is a beautiful display of the organic development of a grown ass relationship. Jay shows his commitment from the moment he lays eyes on Loren…. I think it’s clear Loren was similarly affected (once he noticed Jay, lol) but took a more cautious approach. The tactics we thought were the maneuvers of a player were Loren’s struggle to get past the scars of his emotional abuse to meet Jay where he was at (Loren’s successful career shows his dedication to perfection once he commits to a task, Jay is the first person to make him want to rise to that on a personal level). It’s not going to be smooth sailing but they’ll be okay- “I’m prepared for anything, including Loren picking fights over ‘nothing’ just to test me, to see if I will walk away. He can try all he wants, it won’t work.” As perfect as we know Jay is for Loren, I also appreciate Loren’s influence on Jay; I think he will keep Jay out of his own head and from taking life too seriously, (fellow over thinker over here, 🤚) “I feel bad though, I planned for this to be a lot more romantic and less down and dirty.” “Eh, that never works out anyways. You can’t take these things too seriously.” Loe’s seductive (yet totally clueless) cleat chaser was perfect for their first time, lol. I love an interactive author….kudos to you, Mrsgnomie on your “shoutouts” during Jay & Loe’s relationship reveal. Wonderful chapter. ❤️

*Nodding head* That’s how they get away with it.

Brava to you for standing up in the face of “popular opinion”. Never judge a book by its cover.

@84MagsThank you for what you do to help others out of darkness and into the light.

Lol!! The best, best, BEEEEEESSSST, sex is a combination of crazy sexual chemistry and absolute emotional security. Not often achieved but definitely the case with these two. Jay + Loren= ☄️💥🔥

“Those that fail to learn from history are doomed to repeat it.” -Winston Churchill Loren has learned. Jay is really the best man he could ever be with. I am speechless in the face of such abuse….even though he was seven, his parents did him a favor exiting stage left from his life; I just can’t imagine why Loren was ignored over his identical twin brother. Was Lars born first? Whatever happened to Lars? In a previous post I said that you would break our hearts with Loren’s backstory-mission accomplished. 💔 Jay is the salve Loren needs and deserves for his heart to heal as best it can ❤️‍🩹 On a brighter note, I did like how you juxtaposed Loren being introduced to Jay’s committee from “Boss Nanny”, 👍 lol. On a horny note, it’s gonna be on and poppin’ when that emotional chastity belt comes off, 🍆🍆🌶

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! 🎉🎁🎂

What a great chapter, Mrsgnomie; There is so much to unpack. “Boss Nanny” gave me the impression that Loren was just a social influencer via making fancy drinks….I had no idea that Loren was a brand, virtually all but his sex life is marketable content yet it’s not a frivolous pursuit for him; Something tells me this enterprise he started with his friends (who are clearly his family) is what saved him from the obviously troubled childhood he had. “Jay doesn’t get it. The holidays are joyous for him.”…. “I pull his face closer so he can see me. “It’s triggering for me, okay?” Everything, from Loren’s physique, to all the platforms he markets off of is clearly a Phoenix rising from the ashes of traumatic despair. His brand and his life thus far have been a shield to protect him, his “stratego” if you will and to this point it has worked for him. Loren was unapologetically who he is….until Jay. Jay makes Loren want things that he has dismissed as possibilities for his future-not the white picket fence, the dog & the 2.5 kids, Loren ruled out love….until Jay. Now he’s walking down a path he’s never navigated before, which he might welcome as a challenge normally; This time, however, Loren isn’t in control. He wants Jay in spite of himself & the lack of that control opens him up to his deepest fears and insecurities. Loren has been hurt and hurt very badly, he cannot endure another emotional devastation, which Jay is capable of bringing to him (though Jay would cut off a limb before he intentionally hurts Loren) “Of course,” he whispers. “You’ll tell me when and you’ll tell me how. You’ll tell me everything I need to know when you’re ready. I want a lot of things with you but I never want you to feel uncomfortable, okay?” Jay may be the only man who can truly make Loren happy, if Loren gets out of the way, lol. That fear of being hurt again though, of not being enough, will have him cut off his nose to spite his face. I haven’t even touched their sex (or sexless? Lol) shenanigans but I think I’ve said a lot already. Something tells me you are going to break our hearts when you reveal Loren’s past. Did I say this was a really good chapter? 😍

Keep dangling that carrot Jay. 🥕 I like Loren the businessman.

And the fact that Jay can influence Loren to change his business model in any way already speaks to how much Jay means to him.

Jay and Loren’s conversations remind me of screwball comedies in the 30’s & 40’s, although they never would have had this type of sexual chemistry between two guys back then (darn Hayes code and audiences weren’t ready for this then). I wonder if Loren will ever reveal what has made him the way he is about relationships….it’s not just his celebrity status: From Chapter 1: I don’t know what he thinks he knows about us getting married or whatever, but I know what I know. Jay is light. He’s everything that is good and ideal in this world. He’s a soft breeze on a warm summer night. He’s big-family-holidaysand well-meaning-relativeswith all their questions and their caring. He's a suburban home and two-point-five kids kinda guy. He’s block parties with matching barbeque aprons and pool parties with matching swim shorts. And there is nothing in me that wants to touch that life with a ten-foot pole.

Another dupe. (Sorry) Exceeded my edit limit and didn’t realize it.

Jay has Loren’s number & is keeping him on his toes!! Love it❣️❣️ Loren would get bored with the obvious, he expects slavish devotion from Jay’s clear interest but Jay is playing for keeps so he’s playing the long game. Loren plays games but there is a protective aspect to it: he’s been hurt very badly. Their banter is top notch and it only whets each other’s interest more….speaking of “wet”-I hope Jay has a Sven around to keep his “peter” “meyered” while he & Jay do this dance.