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Shane may not know that he’s driven his friend to the brink of suicide but at the very least he had to know he hurt him with his reaction, that should be enough to check him right there if he’s a true friend.
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Teamwork makes the dream work. The efforts of Stanley and Nate for Tad were heartwarming, Markus’ situation is heart rendering. I grew up in the city so won’t say that I understand the small town mindset that breeds this type of ignorance, I will say small minded thinking is not limited to small towns. I sincerely hope more than Heather’s books reach Markus before next week; If someone reaches him before he completes his plan, he still needs a lot of help. That hug is for Markus. The only thing wrong with you Markus are the people close to you.
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There is no blame you need to absolve yourself from. I can’t be affected if you’re not effective in moving your reader; You do and I consider that a very good thing.
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Something kept on messing with my vision while I was reading this chapter, had to keep on blinking it away. While I delight in seeing the progress of Kent and Stanley’s relationship, Tad is breaking my heart. I feel like you’re going to make me cry a lot, Wayne. *Sigh*
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The threesome works and may even prolong Tad’s life? (If being happy can delay anything) I cant say anything about Markus, smh....
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'He needs me.' Chris closed his eyes, and his grip on the phone tightened.” Chris wasn’t just needed by Tad and I’m glad he recognized and acknowledged that. Miranda is going to be piiiiiisssssed, lol.
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Tad is the glue that bonded Nate and Chris....it’s interesting that Chris let Nate even his beard up, something Tad always did for them when they were together; It’s even more interesting that Nate wanted to. Shallow Nate is forever gone and in his place is a loving mate and friend, as I doubt he was ever really a true friend to anyone before Chris.
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Tho Nate was douchy before love grew him up, there are no real bad guys here. Each person is entitled to the position they took; It will be a deeply emotional journey for Tad, Chris and Nate. (Your readers, as well) The budding couple of Stanley and Kent, along with Markus’ situation will be a distraction but knowing you, there are threads that tie them all together somehow.
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I believe the French still refer to it as “le petit mort” now as well.
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In playing catch up with this story, I’m seeing that Nate has met his match in Tad and maybe even more than he bargained for. I’m extremely curious to see what choice Tad made that Christopher disagreed with enough to walk away from the man he loves, as well as what Nate’s reaction will be to the same thing-Will Nate get close enough to Tad to warrant finding out? Christopher seems like a really nice guy, I don’t think I would’ve been so okay with my ex’s new whatever checking me out. Another well crafted mystery unfolding.
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👏 ☀️ 🌈
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We need the bitter to appreciate the sweet. The valleys to enjoy our peaks. Life provides sunshine and rain....both promote growth. While your writing is cathartic for you, it is therapeutic for us. Thank you for sharing your joys and your pains, Beautiful Spirit. 🍻
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So Raven and Julian will be involved in Desmond’s escapade. That increases the chance they will run into Sam and Blair, won’t it? 🤔
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Or on a more non violent bend, Desmond must be mindful of the butterfly effect if he enters dreams of other people’s pasts; As to alter the past (no matter how painful) would alter the future. Ms. Katya, I thank you very much for this world you’ve created. While I enjoy meeting all the inhabitants, the family of Desmond, Gabriel and Sam are favorites on mine, with Katrena, Jett and Damien/monkey a verrrry close second. (Tho I am glad that Julian found a mate)? Lol. While I know there may be twists and turns, I will always hope for great love and HEA’s for them.
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Did Julian stop her before she hurt Raven? Desmond and Julian are a comedy act (black comedy but comedic, nonetheless): “I am not your tour guide,” he nodded when the blond looked at him with some sort of expectation. “Right,” Salamander sighed and got out of the car,..” “Goddammit,” the blond gritted his teeth darkly. “How can you be so damn heavy when you look so skinny?” Now the Sam and Blair issue remains.
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In the old west, they would duel at the O K Corral at noon. In the new, alternate world, it’s the Rock Garden at 21:00 (aka 9:00 p.m.) Only one side is expected to walk away from a duel, wonder how long that’ll be if Julian is victorious yet doesn’t heed the warning to leave after he’s done. (Would he leave?) Guess the next chapter will tell....
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You want me?’ breathed Oskar. ‘Always. It’s no disloyalty to Felip. We both love you.’ ‘And I you both. Come, my pretty Willemczu, I dream of your slim body when perhaps I should not. Sex with you was always so very good. I’m glad we can still share that much of ourselves.’ I don’t know how wise this was but it pleased me immensely. I wonder if Will will tell Felip.
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I still wish Will and Oskar could reunite romantically....
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Preconceptions encompass physical and mental acuity, as well as racial and socioeconomic backgrounds. We have to be our own (and especially our children’s) advocates; It is not hypochondria to insist something is wrong. I am glad this based on a real event ended with a definitive diagnosis and not permanent damage or death. Medicine, like justice, should have no prejudice. Thank you for sharing.
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You write good sex!! Lol!! Hell hath no fury like an avenging lover (especially one with easy access to fire) but Daniel is right: “Hatred is an emotion that weakens him because he is not in control of himself;” I don’t know what Blair and Daniel intend to do, but I must say Julian has it coming. Going out on a limb, would an apology from Julian help Sam? 🤞 It’s a testament to your ability to invest your readers into your characters that I have mixed feelings about Julian getting the punishment he so richly deserves.
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Wonder what Sam is going to do. Hope if they get out of this mess, they can scrub Raven’s blood clean of Magda’s.
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What a ruthless greedy, selfish, crazy ass bitch. I always wonder when people who direct themselves to bad and self serving means don’t realize they could probably achieve equal success if they turned their tasks toward good, selfless endeavors. It is a choice. They probably feel the good route requires too much work.
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“Love bears all things, believes all things, hopes all things, endures all things.”
